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simkapoor

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Posted: 9 years ago

hey di ...

wow wat a beautiful update...

it reallly made me cry..
so hrt touching...

the way manik told the children...
n hlping nandu...

brilliant..

no wrds to describe ..
commendable...

incredible...
cntinue soonnn...

tc

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mehak_ahuja

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Posted: 9 years ago

Amazing update... Manik knows what is going on in nandus mind.. And would everything possible to settle her thoughts... N Nandini as well is aware that he is doing all of this for her

Loving the story.

Thanxx for continuing

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LUCKYRICKLY

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey
Kitna achhi baate bol rahi hai manik
Mai bhi same lines boloongi ,,,,ab se
Hamari home ki bachhoke saat

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pravidya

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Posted: 9 years ago

awesome update i totally loved it maniks description to each and every question asked by children was amazing

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HTA111

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Posted: 9 years ago

Mindboggling wonderful superb update

Manik is indirectly trying to tell Nandu to not feel bad and she is special for him and he won't feel neglected when he is around

Continue soon and thanks for pm

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lovlytuli

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Posted: 9 years ago

awesome,,amazing,,,superb...

u r the best in dialogues,,i'm a fan of ur writing...

love this part so much...

tysm fr the pm,,,continue soon...

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Vandyandy

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Posted: 9 years ago

Anu hiii !!!!!

Congrulations and celebrations...

Yeepee new thread for this story Anu...

Update was good...

Manik without thinking twice just ran outside to see Nandini

Thank god Nandu didn't go away...instead she didn't say anything what Aliya said to her to Manik...

Orphanage children were so happy seeing them both together..

Think he knows why Nandu was upset...

There Aliya goes again is she trying to poison everyone's mind

Against Nandu...

Manik is so cute...

He made all the orphanage Had fun with him...

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shweta...

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Posted: 9 years ago

wow this part was so awesome

it feels so grt while reading this

manik is the best husband

idk whether he knows about her pain or not but i know that he has the power to make her smile anytime anywhere and make her forget about her pain

thank you so much

update the next part soon

and yeah congratulations for the new thread

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nikitanaik96

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Posted: 9 years ago

Nice update..penned it very well..loved manik's convo with the kids...continue soon.!:)

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sreesri

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Posted: 9 years ago

Amazing update..

Maniks indirect convo wid nandu..

It ws touching..

Luvd it..

Thnkz 4 d pm

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