#2 MANAN FF DO DIL EK JAAN PART 23 ON 53

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Love_Queen

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Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Thanks for d pm dear

That was a beautiful emotional update

I just luv d way u penned it nd called dem as a special person

Mind blowing

Amazing

Wonderful

Waiting for d next update
Update soon dear

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Ammu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Oh God! What was that Sweet's? Itnaa zyaada emotional update... Ek dum dil choone waale... Wow... Trust me... Bohut rulaaye mere jo OS teh naa ussey zyaada emotional yeh update teh... Bye god... What was that...
The way Manik consoled orphanage children's regarding parent's love and and Star's it's just amazing... I loved every tits to every bits..
Loved it like anything... Kahaan se laate ho yaar itni emotional tracks...god... It's just like kaash ye baat koi saare Orphanage children's ko bhi bataade toh unka nazariya bhi change hote ki they are god's children and they are getting universal love... Continue soonish... I don't know what to comment you left me speechless...Thanks for the PM ... Take care Sweets...

Ps- I know we are not getting time to talk to each other like first...par sholly naa.. I'll msg you pakka... * pinching throat* ... Love you my angry bird ;)

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Ammu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#73

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Sakshi_maheta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Congratulation for new thread...
Update was awesome...
Loved it very much...
Waiting for the next part...

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ankita627

@ankita627

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Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Hii...awsm story all...

m sooo sry yar me ku6 tym se IF me nahi thi so cmnt nahi kar pati really sry...

Tnx a ton for PM

keep smiling...

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SIAZAHEED.1

@SIAZAHEED.1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#76

its not at all a boring update...
Its a heart touching and emotional update...😭

Manik's Evrywords r so special nd excellent writing..😭
Dil Ko chu gayi yeh Update.. plzz update soon yaar...

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Kaanika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#77

Sorry i know i m late in commenting..

First of all congratulations for the new thread..

Now coming to the update.

It was nice..

Manik was hell worried for not finding nandini anywhere...

But the relief he felt when he saw nandini was unexpressable..

Manan orphanage visit was nice..

Manan moments were cute and lovely.

Really enjoyed it while reading.

Keep it up.

Well don.

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Gayathri

@ashitha.kerala

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Posted: 9 years ago

#78

Awesome update
Manik such a sweet guy
His conversation with the children was superb
U penned it well
Thanks for PM
Continue soon
Keep smiling

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anumanan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: subhasrisadhukh
Wow its not boring khabardar apni update ko boring kaha toh its very beautiful ur each words are true and ur each words touch the core of my heart specially because mein vi ek orphan hu me samajh sakti hu wo lok kaise feel karte hain,,.,par i am very lucky ki mujhe itni pyaar si ek family and ma papa mili jinhone mujhe apni beti ki tarha pyaar diya didi se jyada aur itni achi didi vi mili. I feel blessed to have them in my life

Hehehee thank u dear and am really happy to know that you are happy 😊

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anumanan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: pdiyar193
Thank you for the PM!
Loved this update!
So beautifully written!
Aww love how Manik got worried about her!
Ahh loved how he took her to the orphanage, special to both of them!
Awww Manik was adorable with the kids!!!
So cutely he explained to the little girl!
Indirectly making Nandini feel better!
Sooo cute!! Hayeee!
Aww she kissed him at the end!<3
Can't wait for the next part!
Continue soon!!:)

Thank u so muchhh

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