#2MANAN FF : WILL U BE MY GIRLFRIEND/PART 27 pg 39 & spl update pg - Page 24

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Posted: 8 years ago

Part 27:

hello guys... im back with an update..

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Happy reading 😊


Manik's POV:

Here everyone was worried about her and madam was watching movie.. wow great.. and my whole family was there.. I think I was not their son.. kahin mila honga mai in logon ko.. koi meri itni care kyun nahi karta ?? I never remember dad not going to office and staying with me as I was not well.

This nandini is spoiling everyone. And that too they were watching a horror movie... superb great.. I and mukti were never allowed to watch horror movies and according to Mr.Ashok Malhotra my great dadu (note the sarcasm) horror movies would leave a bad impression on brain which was not good.. then how come that mini monster got permission to see this that too with them.

I turned to see my friends who were equally shocked seeing the scene in front of us.

"pinch me.." abhi said and mukti pinched him hard making him wince

"itni zor sae nai.." he said rubbing the area where mukti pinched him and she smirked and replied "you didn't mention me how hard.. you just said pinch.. and I did.." and shrugged her shoulders smiling mischievously this nandini was spoiling my sister also... I have to keep her at check.. warna all the boys will be in big trouble... nanu ke aaiyappa help me...!

"you are so gone..." he said taking a step towards her and she took a step back and soon they were running towards the garden. I shook my head seeing both of them.

I heard loud wails and I turned to see who it was.. god this dramebaaz.. cabir was fake crying hysterically and I nodded my head in disbelief.. what is wrong with him.

"kya hua.. kyun madhubala ki tarah ro raha hai.." I asked him in a irritated tone and he wiped his fake tears and rubbed his nose and rubbed the same hand to my shirt making me feel to throw up on his face.. this was just yuckkk...

"chiii... yuck... kutte.. kamine... saale.." I was about to punch him when dhruv the peacemaker jumped into action

"buddy uski chod.. he was just acting.. ab tu soch ki kya karna hai.. shall we go in or should we return to college and attend classes.." and he had got a right point

"baby no.. abhi when we are home.. lets go in.. mera mood na ab class mai baithne ka nahi hai..." Aliya said making a puppy face and NO couldn't be the answer. So it was decided we were going inside.

I was about to call them when nandini suddenly screamed and turned towards mom and hugged her tightly...

I switched on the lights and they all turned back shocked to see all of us in the house that too in that hour.

"what is going on here.." I asked crossing my hands on my chest. Dadu and Dad stood up.. inside I was scared seeing their expressions but I tried to mask it.. key word:tried.

Nandu also got up and stood in between Dad and Dadu.. this was a dangerous combination. If looks could kill I would have died by now.. the way nandini was glaring at me made me want to run away from there. But I Manik Malhotra is not scared of that rat but the 2 people standing beside her.

"classes bunk kiya tumne ???" she asked in a stern tone walking towards us and I gathered some courage to speak when

"aur nahi toh kya.. ek toh tum ghar pae thi.. upar sae beemar.. humhara man nahi lag raha tha .. so hum sab tumhe dekhne yahan aa gaye.." navya spilled the beans and I gulped hard not knowing what dadu and dad will say , but surprising me or to say us dadu said

"toh aa gaye naa.. humhe kyun disturb kiya.. kitna accha movie tha.." and dad too joined

"abhi pata chalne hi wala tha ki bhooth(ghost) kis kae body mai hai aur iss badmash nae sab kharab kar diya.." dad said angrily and to say my mouth dropped to the floor would be an understatement.

"yaar pinch me.." cabir said and navya pinched him hard he screamed before shooting a glare at her which she ignored easily.. navya was no more scared of cabir... wow turn of tables..!

"beta chalo we will continue the movie.. aur tum.." dad said turning towards us "agar movie dekhna hai toh dekho.. humhe disturb math karna.." and they walked to continue the movie not before switching off the lights.

We all looked at each other and decided to join them . so I walked to my room brought few more mattresses for everyone to sit and everyone assembled there. Abhi and Mukti were also back and I guess the Tom and Jerry fight was not yet over as mukti sat with Aliya making both abhi and dhruv frown.

Finally everyone settled and I was just passing time so that all the places are filled and I can sit beside nandu but I guess luck was not on my side today. Navya occupied the place beside nandini, and cabir and me were finally left. The thing which he did earlier came into my mind and I glared at him before sitting beside him and to which he gave me a what look.. seriously he forgot it so soon.. gross.. that was simply yuck..

Finally after one hour the movie ended with the girls screaming every now and then and cabir also joined them sometimes.

PartB:

We all had lunch together as we didn't eat in college and these people were too busy to eat. After lunch all the elders went to their rooms to take rest and we all settled in mukti's room for chitchat.

I think nandini was having the best time in the world. She was lying on the bed with her head in Mukti's lap with Navya on one side and Aliya on the other. They were talking giggling and god knows what they were doing but it was so peaceful seeing them happy in each others company .. nandini and navya gelled with us so easily as if we knew each other from ages.

"itna kya dekh raha hai.." cabir asked looking at me and I just nodded my head saying nothing.

"bol na buddy.. kya hua.." now dhruv joined and I sighed.

"kuch nahi bas dekh raha tha ki how well nandini and navya gelled with other two girls and how good it feels seeing them together laughing , pulling legs, teasing and everyone being there when someone needs some support.. bas I hope they always stay happy.." I said and looked at them and everyone had smiles on their faces seeing the girls.. actually we were in mukk's balcony and the girls were inside the room and we were just watching them sitting there.

"agar in mai sae ek dull ho toh sab dull ho jate hai.. agar kisi ek ko problem ho toh sab usko help karne kae liye 2 baar nahi sochte.. agar in mai sae kisi ek ko kuch ho jaye naa.. toh I swear ill not think twice before killing the person who attempted to disturb their smiling faces.." all of a sudden I felt so possessive about them.

"koi kameena soche toh sahi ki inko kuch kare.. jaan na le lun mai uski.." abhi said fisting his hands.

"chill bhai..chill.. itna senty kyun ho rahe ho tum dono.. hum sab ke hote hue who is going to harm them.. if anyone thinks so.. which they will not but even if they think of doing that first they will have to face us.. so ab chodo yeh sab.." cabir just said those words as if he was least bothered but if anything happened to anyone he would be the first one to run for help but he doesn't show it to anyone... the way he was looking at the girls said it all.. no words were needed.

"guys kya hua tum logon ko aaj...??" dhruv asked looking concerned and I just looked away not knowing what to tell him. I don't know what happened today .. but I was just not able to voice out my feelings properly.

"guys I love you.." those words slipped out of my mouth without my knowledge and the next second I saw cabir rolling on the ground laughing and abhi and dhruv were also laughing so much that tears formed in their eyes.

"kal tune yahi baath nandu ko bola tha aur aaj humko.. baath kay hai manik.. agar tujhe koi mis understanding hui ho toh let me tell you bhai im straight.." cabir said beween his laughs and I rolled my eyes at his comment.. dramaqueen..!!

Same night:

Nandini was avoiding me whole day and I didn't understand why.. whats wrong with this girl.. what did I do that she was throwing murderous glares at me right from the time we came from college. That too only for her..!!!

Abhi was right.. we should never give girls so much bhav (importance) that they ignore us..! poor mukti doesn't know this and if she even gets the slightest idea that it was Abhi's rule in our gang to make girls dance at our tune.. I swear she is going to beat the sh!t out of him..

I came to my room and to my surprise nandini was standing there in the balcony.. she should be taking rest... I frowned and walked towards the balcony to talk to her if everything was alright but I forgot to notice the surrounding in this process.

Nandini's POV:

The whole day was so much fun.. I really had the best time today.. ad afternoon when girls were back from college for me I was overwhelmed ... ther small gesture made my heart do happy dance.. we were talking everything and anything all the afternoon and in the evening after dinner they left and finally it was time for my revenge.. how dare Mr.Manik Malhotra change my clothes.. he is so dead today.. ill make sure he doesn't sleep tonight.. I got a naughty plan in my mind and everything was set to implement it.. I laughed evilly thinking of his reaction. I know this has to be a punishment to him but fun for me... Aaiyappa please help me.. im really nervous for the first time in my life.

Manik walked into the balcony where I was standing and slowly and gently wrapped his hands around my waist making me shiver at his touch.

He gently placed a long kiss on my shoulder slightly sucking it and said in a hardly audible tone

"kya hua jaan... yahan kyun khadi ho.. you should take rest na baby.." and very gently he picked me up in his arms in bridal style and walked into the room. And then very gently he laid me down on the bed and kissed my forehead making me close my eyes feeling his love.

"sleep .." he said and walked towards the couch and I wondered why and before I could ask him the reason he said

"umm.. you sleep there comfortably ill sleep here.. if you need anything.. please call me ill get you.." saying this he opened the wardrobe and took out an extra pillow along with the blanket and suddenly I think he noticed the room and turned back to look at me and said with a frown as well as a hint of anger , curiosity were clearly heard in his tone

"whats with all this around in the room.." he said pointing at the candles that I had set up in the room and Mr.Duffer Malhotra saw it now. I sat on the bed and smirked seeing his face and said

"lets have some fun Mr.Malhotra.."


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Neeraja 😊

Edited by neeju_chinnu - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
One of my favourite story it is... Luv it's each and every chapter... Thanx for the update... Awesum story
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow such a superb update
Manan nd der togetherness
Manik's care respect love for gals
Manik's gtng emotional awww
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Posted: 8 years ago
Aaahhh itne din baad update wo b cliff hanger plz agey b dedo...
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Awesomeee amazinggg suprrbbb prt...lovd it...thnx for pm me...nandu kya krne wali hai...
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Posted: 8 years ago

# un-edited #1000+ words..!

hello friends...how was your day..??

a very happy mothers day to all of you and your mothers as well from my side... :)

this update is "not a part of the story" so pleaseee.. dont get confused...

Happy reading :) dont forget to read the note at the end.. :)

"happy mothers day mommm..."

"happy mother's day Dj..."

"thank you bacchon..." mom and dj replied kissing my cheeks and i could smell something burning ..or to someone burning around

Few hours back:

"manik.. manik utho..." i said pushing the donkey sleeping on the bed but he didnt move an inch

i looked at Mukti for help and we both passed a wicked smile before i got up and emptied the water in the glass present beside the bed and he woke up with a jerk

"what the hell s wrong with you nandini..??" he asked angrily wiping the water form his face

"what s wrong with me... what is wrong with you you monster...?" i also replied in the same tone and he glared at me standing up

"bhai.. nandu.. calm down.. we are here for a purpose right.. lets talk about that.." mukti said and i turned my face to the other side and i saw that he also did the same...

"stop behaving like kids... time nahi hai humre paas..." she said pulling her hair

"she/he started first..." we both said together

"5 more minutes and i want you both to come to an agreement.. everyone will be up in a while.." she said in an irritated tone

last night after a world war 3 manik allowed me to sleep with mukti only after

taking a promise of 1 hour of kisses.. and i had to give into him because I and mukti decided to make cards and make hand made gifts for mom and dj and with this monster with us it was not possible.. we both woke up at 5 to prepare breakfast and bake a cake and then decorate the house for them... and this monster didnt wake up at first and now he is making faces.. i hate him..argghhh...!!!

"fine.. bolo kya karna hai.." he spoke after a minute of silence and i did a happy dance inside..

i turned to him and said clapping my hands

"fine.. you go tell dad and dadu to take mom and dj to a temple and by the time they come back you have to decorate the house and i and mukti will bake the cake and make breakfast for them" i told him the plan and he frowned crossing hias hands against his chest and said

"how will i decorate everything alone.. and why do you two want to bake the cake.. nandini will decorate and i will help in baking the cake.." he said

"what are the Ingredients that are used to bake a cake...?" i asked him and he looked here and there and said in a eureka tone "i will google it.." he said and i wanted to bang my head somewhere..

"bhai please.. lets not argue.. we will do as nandu said.. agar baking finish ho gaya toh we will help you.. now please.. go and ask dad and dadu to take mom and dj to the temple.. go fast..." mukti said and literally pushed manik out of the room and he walked away grumpily tapping his foot.. goddd he was a kid .. literally a KID but 21 years old and 6 feet tall,hot .handsome and sexy ... what am i thinking.. aaiyappaaa...

After an Hour

(cake baked by mukti and nandini)

we also made breakfast along with the cake and while mukti was placing all the things i helped manik in decorating...

we heard the cars entering the mansion and we switched off the lights in the hall and drew the curtains so that it was dark.

"yeh itna andhera kyun hai..??" i heard Dj's vpice and giggled

"Ramu... Kishore... yeh lights kyun chali gayi.. zara dekho..." mom said in a irritating tone and i giggled again but mukti hushed me by throwing a glare and i pouted...

"happy mothers day.." we 3 jumped in front of them scaring Dj and Mom and popped the party poppers and hugged them tightly kissing them.

hehehe only me and mukti got the chance to hug Dj and Mom and manik was annoyed because of that.

i was hugging Mom when he suddenly pulled me and Mukti from both of them and hugged both Mom and Dj at one causing everyone to giggle.. he was a jealous kid.. my manik... awww.. ok now we are side tracking.. this is a Mothers day special update.. so lets come back..

Mukti brought the cake and we asked Mom and dj to cut the cake and they did it happily with tears in their eyes.. i was missing Amma but.. its okay here i had 2 of them not less than her and i smiled at that thought and clapped when Dj and Mom were feeding cake to each other ignoring dad and dadu who were looking at them as if they were aliens and we all laughed again seeing them grumpy.. these Malhotra men you see.. all are similar.. i sighed...

we had a hearty breakfast and then we gave gifts to them and the day we spent with mom and Dj ... then i called Amma and Ams and wished them.. then i spoke to preeti bhabhi and i wished her too on behalf of her baby who was yet to some... but she made me jump in joy saying i was her first baby..

and in the evening we went to shopping with them but manik didnt join us saying he had more important things to do.. .. huhh Donkey Malhotra...

then we went to a mall and brought lots and lots of clothes accessories sarees for Dj and Mom... and then we had road side Pani puri , gola, pav bhaji and lots of junk food.. and finally reached home...

dont forget to hit likes and please comment... i directly wrote it here for the very first time... i have my report submission tomorrow still i made time for the update.. please.. vote and comment...!!

NOTE: 1) if you want to share some funny or embarssing, happy or sad or any other moment of you with your mother.. you can share it.. :)

***2) guys the response in forum has dropped so much that it really hurts when I try to update despite my completely packed schedule... 😭

ill just see for one more update and if its the same.. ill stop this story..!

sorry if i was rude.. but it hurts.. it really really hurts..!!!

keep smiling

take care..

loads of love

Neeraja :)


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Posted: 8 years ago
What?? U know i love the story m a regular reader and i even mail u my comments and to ask u for an update...plz dont stop writing yr...i miss the story when u take so long to update seriously

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