#2MANAN FF : WILL U BE MY GIRLFRIEND/PART 27 pg 39 & spl update pg - Page 22

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Posted: 8 years ago
Eeekkk yayyy bonus part!!!!
Thanks for the PM!
I loved this update!!!!
Written so beautifully!!
I loved the romantic proposal.. it was sooo perfect!
Awww I love Manan!
They are sooo cute together!
Loved how he took her to the beach and the set up!
Awww the dance and the kiss was sooo romantic!
Hayeee and he proposed to her!!
Excited for the next part and more Manan moments!
Continue soon!<3
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesomeee amazinggg lovely proposal
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As promised Im back within 12 hours... please hit likes and comment its a motivation for us 😊 ... pleaseee leave comments... pretty pleaseee *puppy face* 😳

Guys its very lengthy update.. so please.. DO COMMENT...!!!

Happy reading...

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Part 26:

Part A

Nandini's POV:

We both were lying on Manik's bed after dinner. Actually I was lying on him with his hands wrapped around my waist holding me close to him. He was busy drawing patterns on my waist teasing and irritating me from time to time and I was just looking at the ring which manik made me wear today after the grand proposal.. yes it was grand.. he proposed me privately .. he proposed me in front of the whole world and he proposed me in front of the full family... I was happy..happy beyond words... I was lost in my own thoughts then suddenly I remembered something and I got up with a jerk startling manik

"kya hua nandu ??" he asked sitting on the bed but instead of answering I got up and ran towards mine and mukthi's room to bring something that I planned to give to manik but I forgot because of all the things that happened this morning. I opened my cupboard took the box and ran away before mukthi could ask me something.

"kya chal raha hai ?? mai tumse baath kar raha tha aur tum chali gayi ??" manik asked in an irritating tone as I entered the room but I ignored it and gave him a 32 teeth smile. He frowned and raised his eyebrow asking what to which I nodded my head in a NO and showed him the box which was in my hand wrapped beautifully in a red gift wrapper. He immediately got curious and took the gift from my hand and started opening it with 200% concentration while I was standing silently with camera in my hand recording his every expression and finally when he opened it his expression was priceless. I had an urge to laugh loudly but didn't as I couldn't afford it now. He looked up at me and then at the gift and then me and then again the gift. After staring at it for good 5 minutes he slowly got up and I got ready to make a run as I knew what was coming next. And as expected he was taking steps towards me and as I was smart enough I managed to maintain considerable distance between us.

"nandu stop.." he ordered and I nodded my head in a No.. why would I ..im not a fool to stop when he asks me to stop..huhh.. duffer Malhotra.

"nandini im saying stop.." ok now he was getting angry... but who cares... I walked and stood behind the couch and he was on the other side.

"nandini manik Malhotra... this is the last time im telling you.. stop at the spot where you are standing..." okay.. so this is the last warning.. but let me try my luck.. I planned to confuse manik and escape to mukthi's room for the night and I'll deal with manik tomorrow.. yes that would be better.. I knew his reaction would be something like this but I guess he is little more serious about it.

"don't you dare think about running away from this room..." as if reading my mind manik said in a serious tone and my eyes widened...

"manik.. listen I can explain.." I said because anyways ill be caught so why not the easy way so that he'll think of sparing me.. atleast that's what I thought .. fingers crossed.. I hope so..

"nandini... first come here.." he said pointing at a place just centimetres away from where he was standing... that was a bit risky.. so I didn't move..

"manik.. vo... I wanted to give this back to you long back.. but phir maine socha.. lets wait for a special occasion then give it to you.. after all its very special naa.. ahhh " I couldn't finish what I wanted to tell as he jumped over the couch and pinned me to the wall holding my shoulders.

"man.." I tried to speak but was hushed by his violent kiss. Oh my god... whats wrong with him... he was chewing my lips.. aaiyappaaa... I tried pushing him but he held my hands so tightly that I couldn't move even a millimetre. He was just biting my lips... definitely it would leave bruises... and this was the limit he tried entering my mouth but I didn't let him in and he bit my lower lip so harshly that I could taste my blood... I gasped because of the bite he entered my mouth and deepened the kiss more... I was not responding as I was angry.. very very angry...

"kiss me back.." he muttered angrily while kissing and I was also stubborn.. how dare he.. no I am not going to kiss him.. I know what I did was not right but it wasn't wrong also.. he had no right to behave like this. He understood that I was not going to kiss him back and he again bit my lip so hardly..

"arghhh.." I tried to scream but couldn't as he silenced me with his violent kiss.

"kiss me back.." he again ordered me and I had no choice but to give to that monsters kiss. And the kiss continued for what felt like eternity.

"why did you steal my dairy ??" he asked breaking the kiss panting like a bull but I didn't reply as I was busy breathing.

"answer me dammit.." he commanded on getting no reply from me. I didn't answer him but I pushed him and sat on the sofa rubbing my wrists as there were marks now because of the monster..

"nandini how dare you steal my dairy..?" he scowled and I huffed and decided to answer that monster...

"first I didn't steal it.. I found it.. and second I have all the rights on your things so don't you dare accuse me of stealing and other non sense things..." I too replied in the same tone.. and the look on his face was priceless.. I wanted to laugh out loud but didn't as the torture that I went through a few minutes back warned me to shut up. But how could I let him go off so easily.

I got up stood in front of him and gave him a tight punch in his stomach and walked to his cupboard as my second gift was hid there. He was wincing in pain but I didn't care about it.. my lips got cuts and were bleeding a little while back. I took that box from his almirah and placed it in front of him. He gave me a annoyed look before taking it and he started opening it with least interested face but when he opened the scrap book and started turning pages his grumpy face turned into a widely smiling one.

Once he was done seeing all the pages he looked up at me but I was standing at the door to his utmost surprise. His smile turned into frown and finally again the angry one when he understood what I was going to do. Finally this beautiful day was going to end with a fight. All thanks to the duffer Malhotra.

I closed the door and locked it before walking towards the bed with my eyes moistening. I didn't want it in this way. I knew he would be angry when ill return him his dairy but I didn't expect him to react like this. I read the dairy and I understood the depth of his feelings for me and his mad love for me, but what he did was totally not acceptable.

Mukthi was sleeping so I just walked to the balcony and sat on the swing there. This was my favourite place after manik's room. I was crying silently looking at the stars when I felt a hand on my shoulder and I turned my face away wiping my tears as I don'twant to show him that I was weak and will cry for small issues. I know it was small but I really didn't like his behaviour.

If I am given a chance ill punch him so hard that..huhh.. leave it.. I just don't want to talk to him now. He didn't say anything but made me sit in his lap and hugged me tightly and I too reciprocated the hug. I kept my head on his chest hearing his heart beat and wrapped my hands around his waist but I didn't speak a word. I felt his lips on my hair but I didn't budge. He slowly lifted my face and kissed my forehead and I closed my eyes to prevent the tears from falling down. and when he kissed my eyes, that was it for me. A stream of tears rolled down my eyes. He kissed my cheeks drinking the tears and cupped my cheeks, wiping my eyes with his thumbs.

"baby open your eyes.." he said lovingly but I didn't.

"nandu.. jaan please naa.." he again said and this time I gave in as I was too tired to fight with him. I looked straight into his eyes. His eyes had pain, guilt and were apologetic. I was drowned in them

"im sorry nandu." He said in a low tone breaking the eye lock, looking down.

I sighed. "its okay manik.. you don't need to be sorry.. in fact I am sorry" I said in a emotionless tone and he nodded his head in a NO.

"no baby.. im sorry.. mujhe aaise gussa nai karna chahiye tha... you were just giving me a gift and I acted like a jerk.. im sorry nandini.. aaj hum dono kae liye itna special din tha and I ruined it by making you cry.. im sorry jaan.. im really sorry..." he said not meeting my eyes. I know he was feeling bad for what he did and I had forgiven him the moment he said sorry.

"promise me ki aage kabhi aaise nai karoge ?" I asked him in a stern tone and he nodded his head obediently and I smiled, a small smile and the same reflected on his lips as well.

"promise.. ill not behave like this from now onwards and I will also try to control my anger.." awww.. very good boy. I kissed his cheek in return and now he smiled to his fullest and said "come lets go and sleep now.." he said getting up with me in his arms and I tried to wriggle out of his grip but he held me tight and said

"nandu I know ki you are angry but there is no way that you are sleeping in this room... you will sleep only with me and that's final.." he declared and moved to his room carrying me in bridal style and I sighed. somethings never change' I thought.

Manik carefully laid me down on the bed with him beside me. I turned away from him and heard him sigh.. huh.. he better be. He turned off the lights except for the dim ones which I like in the room and wrapped his arms around ,my waist , his face in the gap between my neck and shoulder and his legs tangled with mine. Goddd this guy is sooo irritating at times. I tried to push him away but he didn't even move an inch.

"nandu sone do naa.." he said in a baby voice and I knew he is not going to move so I kept quite and closed my eyes to sleep. But how could I with the great Manik Malhotra beside me. He was nuzzling his nose on my shoulder and was placing wet kisses on my shoulder making shivers run down my spine. I clutched his hands that were wrapped around my waist and unknowingly arched my neck to provide him with better access. I could feel his smirk on my skin but I couldn't do anything.

"I loved your gift baby.." he said kissing below my ear.. aaiyappaaa.. that was my weak spot .. how did he know about that. He was just sucking my earlobe making me shiver because of his acts and was pulling me more and more close if that was possible.

"manikkk..." I moaned when he gave a love bite on my shoulder... god and now he was sucking it... it will definitely leave a mark by tomorrow morning. But he didn't stop by that. He continued the same till my whole shoulder was covered with his love bites and all I could do was to moan his name and hold him tight as my life depended on him. After getting satisfied with his art work on my shoulder (note the sarcasm) he turned me to face him and placed his lips on mine kissing me so softly, so lovingly as if he was apologising for what he did earlier. His kiss was so passionate that I started feeling dizzy. My hands went into his hair pulling him more close and he deepened the kiss.

"I love you" he muttered between his kisses and didn't even give me time to reply before gobbling my lips. His kisses will be my death one day. But today it was something different. His hands slowly went inside my shirt caressing my bare waist causing goose bumps all over my skin. His hands were going up slowly.. like very slowly at a dead pace and my eyes widened when they reached a little more up. He smirked between the kiss and I tried pushing his hands away but couldn't as I realised that he had tied my hands.. how dare he.. I was not able to move my hands and my legs were also trapped with that idiots legs.. and his hands were all over upper body setting it on fire. I was feeling not only butterflies but the whole zoo in my stomach because of his naughty hands.

"mani.." I tried speaking between the kiss but as always he hushed me. His hands were roaming on my back and they were going down slowly making my eyes pop out my sockets but thankfully he stopped at my waist caressing them sensually.. oh manik.. what are you doing to me... I wanted to ask him but couldn't as he wasn't giving me a second to speak.. forget speaking he just gave me minimum time just to inhale sufficient amount of oxygen before sucking the life out of me. The kissing marathon continued to I don't know how long when he finally stopped.

"manik.." I said his name with great difficulty as I was scared that he wouldn't let me speak again. And he just hummed in response. I took it as a positive sign and said

"open my hands.." to which he nodded his head in a NO making me frown seeing which he replied "not so soon baby.." and my breath hitched in my throat "what does he mean my not so soon.. what was still left.. is he going to let me sleep tonight or not.. aaiyappa what is he going to do ..?" several questions popped up in my mind and I looked at him and his smirk grew wider and I was feeling nervous all of a sudden don't know why.

"nandu darling.." he said in a husky tone coming close to my face and I just hummed in response like a scared rabbit.

"I love you sooo much.." he confessed again and kissed my cheeks and I smiled nervously not knowing what to do.

"bolo naa that you also love him.." he demanded like a kid who was deprived of his chocolate and without any further delay I replied

"of course I love you manik.."

"nandu you are very bad girl.. tume ne mera dairy padh liya in which I have my secrets.." he said and pouted, what was wrong with him ?? why is he pouting all of a sudden.

"manik.. im sorry.. vo mukti naa.. she told me that you have a secret dairy and I searched for it and when I found it I couldn't hold back my curiosity and I read it and I fell in love with you a little more after reading it.." I said genuinely and he smiled. A very very beautiful smile. Though the lights were dim I could see his face which was glowing with happiness. He slowly untied my hands and kissed my wrists and mouthed a sorry before kissing me again. This time I forcefully broke the kiss and said

"enough manik.. my lips are already swollen .. not stop it.." I said in a stern tone and he looked grumpy.. what ??? like seriously... I again turned back and winced when my shoulder touched the pillow all thanks to his love bites. He caressed them gently and again started placing feather kisses over them. Didn't he have enough tonight ??

"manik.. leave me and sleep NOW.. otherwise ill sleep with mukti tonight.." I threatened him and like finally he stopped kissing but just back hugged me tightly and slept mumbling an I LOVE YOU BABY again.. I smiled and I too slept within few minutes as I was soo tired because of todays events.


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Edited by neeju_chinnu - 8 years ago
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Part B:

The next morning dadu didn't come and wake us up for jogging and I wondered why... I woke up at 7 because of my stupid alarm and tried to get up from the bed but manik held me soo tightly that it was almost impossible for me to move an inch.

"manik.." I called him but he was sleeping like a log...

"manik.." I called him again.. no response

"manik.." this time I called him a little louder but again no response

Argghhh... I slapped his arm which was around my waist and he just hummed in response.. such a buffalo ...! No he is hippopotamus .. no he is giraffe .. no he is a donkey... aaiyappaaa...

"manik utho..." I said in a annoyed tone and he again hummed mnuzzling his face in my neck and now I was angry.. so angry..

"manik.. common wake up.." I warned him in a stern tone and he chuckled in response..; seriously.. whats his problem.. was I joking .. no right ?

"nandu.. you sleep and let me sleep for a little more time.." he said in a sleepy tone pulling me more close if that was possible.

"manik.. you sleep.. mujhe neend nahi aa rahi.. I have to use the washroom.. leave me.." I pleaded him.. I was feeling little uneasy and I also know why.. but this duffer Malhotra was busy romancing in the morning itself.

"baby please naa.." he said in a husky tone kissing my earlobe but no I was in no mood to entertain this idiot in the morning that too in that condition.

"manik I said leave.." I told him in a frustrated tone and finally he opened his eyes. He looked at me and said

"subah subah itna gussa kyun kar rahi ho nandu..?" he said in a baby tone and that's it I had it enough.. I pushed him and got up from the bed and without turning back I ran to mukti's room leaving behind a stunned manik on the bed behind.

Manik's POV:

I was sleeping peacefully with the love of my life in my arms. She was cutely wrapped around me.. her head on my chest.. her tiny little hands around my waist and her legs tangled with mine.

She tried to wake me up but I wanted to sleep for a little more time as I couldn't have her in my arms till the end of the day. I tried my level best to convince her but she was getting irritated and all of a sudden she pushed me and ran to mukti's room without turning back.. my jaw touched the ground in surprise because of her actions. I wondered what happened to her . I decided not to get angry because last night she cried because of me and the beautiful day had a black mark on it because of me and my anger.

I got up and checked my phone for any messages but when my eyes fell on a notification which was indicating something related to her, my eyes widened like saucers.. how could I forget.. it was her.. ahem... umm.. those special days.. guys don't tell nandini haan.. she will kill me for keeping track of her period dates.. but common yaar I should know that right.. and don't ask me how I got to know about it.. hahaha (evil smile) I Manik Malhotra have my own ways...

I placed my phone on the table beside my bed and got up to get ready.. my poor baby must be in pain.. I have to handle her carefully these 5 days.. she has terrible mood swings and she gets emotional very easily.

After getting and taking my bag and my car keys along with my phone I reached the dining table and noticed nandini sitting there wearing a shirt and a jeans .. why did she wear that ?? it will hurt her tummy... doesn't she know even that.. stupid girl.. ill ask her to change.. she will not be comfortable in these clothes for the whole day... and her eyes were also swollen as if she cried.. wait why did she cry.. is the pain so much that my baby had to cry.. I have to talk to her.

She was also not eating properly .. which is so not her.. mom gave her milk but she denied it also.. but she has to drink milk its good for her.. she nodded her head looking at dj and mom and suddenly got up and ran towards her room crying.. now this was scaring me.. mom and dj looked at each other and looked at mukti and she just blinked her eyes in assurance.. what was this look-look game between the ladies. I was totally not able to understand. I got up to check on her when mom called me

"manik.. tu ruk.. mai jaake dekh kae aati hun.." and she walked towards her room. And here I was getting impatient.. I wanted to hold her carefully in my arms and take care of her but no.. how could that happen.. why did mom go.. argghh... this is so frustrating...

Nandini's POV:

As I reached mukti's room she looked at me and I couldn't hold more. I hugged her and started crying. She just rubbed my back and asked me

"kya hua nandu.. did you and bhai fight ??" but I nodded my head in a no

"phir ??" she asked and I cried more

"nandu you are scaring me.. tell me na baba ki kya hua ??" she asked me rubbing my back in a soothing manner and I hiccupped and said

"tummy.. is ... paining.." I said between my sobs and she understood I guess.. and said

"its ok.. don't come to college today.. take rest at home.." she said taking me to bed but I immediately nodded my head in a NO

"nai.. ill come to college.. mai shower leke aati hun.." I said breaking the hug and walked into the washroom

I finished my shower and I looked at the mirror... arghhh I groaned in frustration looking at my neck and shoulder.. thank god mukti didn't notice this... today because of that monster I had to wear a top that covered my shoulders because of his excess love last night.. I looked at those marks and some had turned purple. I touched them and winced as it still hurt.. and I guess it will take some 5-6 days for the marks to fade away.. he is not going to repeat this again.. huhh...

I chose a loose collar neck top and matched it with one of my jeans and covered my neck with my hair.. great now they were not visible.. I smiled looking at my creativity and came out of washroom and mukti looked at me surprisingly and said

"you are gonna wear jeans in your periods.. it might not be comfortable nandu.." she said but I nodded my head in NO

"its okay mukti.. aaj mera half day hi hai.. I can manage.. after classes I thought ill got to library to study but ill come back home as I dont think ill be able to manage a full day there.." I said applying kajal to my eyes as I don't want to look like a patient.. these days irritate me so much that sometimes I feel that if I was a boy I would have been saved from this monthly torture (how many of you think so.. I do because I hate it to hell and back.. it irritates the sh!t out of me.. :( )

I came down to have breakfast but I didn't feel like eating anything.. mom and dj immediately understood looking at my tired face and mom caressed my hair lovingly and I felt so good because of that small gesture. Dj served me my favourite paratha but I just didn't feel like eating anything. Mom brought my favourite chocolate milk but ewww.. I didn't even wanted to smell it.. aaiyappaaa.. why me..?? I thought with tears in my eyes and looked at mom and dj and I just got up and ran to my room.. I was feeling so frustrated and the pain in my lower abdomen wasn't helping any better.

Mom came after me to the room and sat beside me on the bed. I just kept my head in her lap and was crying. She didn't say anything and was just caressing my hair lovingly and after a while I was in deep sleep.

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Part C:

Manik's POV:

Mom came after sometime and asked us to leave to college and said that nandini was sleeping and she wont be coming today. I couldn't go just like that.. I just told mukti to be ready and I will join her in 5 minutes. I lied saying that I forgot my book and will get that.

I slowly opened mukti's room door and nandini was sleeping with frowns on her chotu forehead. I sighed and I walked to her cupboard and pulled out a soft comfortable night pant and a loose top of hers and walked towards her bed. I unbuttoned her jeans and pulled it slowly not waking her up and carefully made her wear the night pant then slowly I unbuttoned the shirt she was wearing and removed it very slowly and what I saw made my eyes pop out of my sockets.. sh!t.. those marks on her shoulders... I did that last night.. my god.. some of them turned purple.. it must be hurting her... stupid manik.. idiot manik.. donkey manik.. I mentally kicked myself for loosing control around her... sorry nandu.. I mumbled guiltily and placed feather kisses over them and she hissed a little in her sleep... manik what did you do.. I asked myself but argghhh.. I don't know what got into me last night that I behaved in that manner.. I made her wear that soft loose top and buttoned it back carefully... she stirred a little in sleep but I patted her head slowly and she was sleeping again. I kissed her forehead and walked down half heartedly where mukti was waiting for me and we both left for college

The day was so dull without her.. no silly fights.. no arguments with cabir over stupid things.. no teaming up of cabir navya nandu and dhruv against the rest of us.. nothing.. cabir was sulking like an idiot in the lunch break as nandu was not there with him to share his food. Navya, mukti and aliya were also not talking as their chirpy friend was absent. Dhruv and abi were also silent giving me company as they knew how it feels when your girl is absent to college even if its just one single freaking day.

"guys enough of this moun wrat (I hope you understood the word) I am going to meet nandini.. those who want to come with me come rest got to hell.. I am going.." cabir said getting up and immediately navya got up followed by other girls and dhruv.. last was me and abhi.

After 40 minutes we were in home and the sight in front of us made our jaws drop to the floor.

Fuat the whck ...!!!!!

Nandini's POV:

I don't know how long I slept but I woke up after what felt like eternity and now I was feeling better and hungry too.. my pain was also reduced because of the looonggg peaceful sleep. I stretched my hands and legs to get rid of the sleepy feeling and sat on the bed lazily. I looked at the clock and it was 12.. wow.. I slept for nearly 2 hours.. and now my tummy was growling... I was hungry.. I pushed the blanket and got down from my bed and walked towards the washroom to freshen up.. I washed my face and wiped it with the towel and then my eyes fell on my clothes.. what the hell.. I was not wearing this when I was sleeping.. who changed them then ??? who "??? Who was that ?? mom ?? mukti ?? I was thinking hard to guess who could have done than and then it stuck me... it was MANIK... that idiot.. I will kill him... how dare he changed my clothes without my permission.. I will kill him today..!!! but I didn't change my clothes as I was totally comfortable in them.

Determined with my thought to show him stars in daylight and sun in the night I walked down to the lounge where dadu dj and mom were sitting.

"mom.. im hungry.." I said cutely rubbing my tummy and laid on the couch with my head in dj's lap.

"abhi tere liye kuch laati hun.." she said getting up and walked towards the kitchen.

"ab kaisa hai mera bacha ??" dj asked running her fingers in my hair and I closed my eyes and said in a annoyed tone "abhi im fine.. subah pata nahi kya ho gaya tha mujhe.." to which she chuckled.

"chal uth aur kuch kha le... sab tera favourite hi hai.." mom said giving me a plate with 2 parathas and my favourite butter chicken and a big bowl of gajar (carrot) halwa... my mouth started watering just seeing them.. I snatched the plate from her and started eating as if I was hungry from ages.

After 20 minutes my plate was empty and my tummy was full. I kissed mom and dj for the delicious food and tiptoed towards the sofa where dadu was sitting.

I wrapped my hands around his neck and said sweetly

"I love you dadu.." and kissed his cheek

"bolo kya chahiye??" he was straight to the point and I pouted.. how did he know I wanted something...

"mujhe sab pata hai.. dadu hun mai manik nahi.." he said and winked at me as if reading my mind and my mouth hung open...

"hawww.. daduuu... aapka matlab hai ki manik ko kuch samajh nahi aata ??" I asked putting my hands on my waist and he nodded his head in a no and I started laughing.. only if manik was here.. his face would be watch worthy...

"haan haan vo theek hai.. khana bhi kah liya usne.." mom was talking on phone and she passed the phone to me

"beta tu kaisi hai ?? ab tu theek hai na ??" dad asked from other side and tears welled up in my eyes.. they loved me so much... I was blessed to be a part of this family.

"jii boyfriend jii im totally fine.. aur hoti bhi kaise nai aap sab itna khayal jo rakhte ho mera.." I said and blinked my eyes to prevent the tears to fall down from my eyes. And suddenly a plan hit my mind

"boyfriend..!!!" I exclaimed in the phone and said in a excited tone

"aap agar free ho to ghar aa jao naa.. I have a super plan.." I said jumping on the sofa ..

"umm.. okay.. give me 30 minutes ill finish my work and come home.." he said

"yaieee... I love you... muuaahhh" I kissed him on the phone and cut the call.. so many arrangements were pending.

"plan kya hai..?" dadu asked and I told him what I wanted and we both hi-fied.

Exactly after 30 minutes dad was home and he was surprised to see the setup that was made.

"wow.." he said and I pushed him into his room asking him to change and come

And when he came the movie started. Actually I made a small arrangement near the TV by pulling the curtains.. making the lounge dark by switching of all the lights.. pushing the sofa so that it was exactly in front of the TV and I pulled a small table to put the pop corn tub and cold drinks bottle.

Mom and dad were sitting on one sofa and dadu and dj on the other. I was in between both of the chairs on the rug which was laid. And then the horror movie started.

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Posted: 8 years ago
After so long u finally update
It's was awesome loved it
Pls continue soon
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
superb update naughty manik and affectionate manik just awsum then nandini and manik family just lovely bond
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awsm update 😉
Loved it
Wowww manik proposed her so beautifully 😳
But his anger 😡
U have written it amazingly
Its an amazing story update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ohhh god wat a superb update
Manan nd der hot sexy romance
Manan love for each other
Manik's al tym naughtiness...:::
Manik's care for nandu dats so sweet...:::
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hehehe...Manik got angry after getting his gift...he proposed her in private and also in front of the whole world as well as family members...so sweet...
He remembered her date.. .seriously it is so painful...hahhh...and did the change...
Continue soon...

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