#2MANAN FF : WILL U BE MY GIRLFRIEND/PART 27 pg 39 & spl update pg

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yuhoo friends...

so finally i made it to the second thread... love you all for the support and love thank you.. thank you soo much... purae dil sae I LOVE YOU ALL GUYS... 🤗🤗🤗

i never expected this when i wrote the first part of the OS turned SS turned FF...😆😆😆

so as its second thread.. so its time for party... 🥳

so im here with the holi celebration of manan... enjoy the update... scroll down for the update... once again.. thank you sooo much.. and i was like 😳😳😳 my story reached to second thread... love you all sooo much... thank you... keep supporting and i will entertain u all till u people come to me and say " please neeraja for god's sake stop it...😆😆😆... so im not gonna leave you all so soon... hehehe... enough now.. enjoy the update


part 19 page 1

part 20 page 8

part 21 page 13

part 22 page 17

part 23 A& B page 22

part 24 page 24

part 25 page 29&30

Bonus Part pg 35

part 26 page 36

part 27 page 39

special update page 40

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Posted: 9 years ago
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part 19A :

Next morning college canteen:

All the boys were sitting in the canteen and girls were no where to be seen-

"guys did u here about that.." cabir said looking around and all the other boys frowned hearing this.

"what..??" dhruv said with a frown and all nodded their head as if asking him to continue and cabir continued

"arae wahi.. new admission.. vo ladki hai naa.. I heard that she is so hot and sexy..." cabir said in such a tone that increased everyone's curiosity but the least interested person was manik. His head was dug in his phone texting someone.

( Lets peep into Manik's phone )

M: plan has begin

N: good...so should I bring them now... ?

M: no not yet... ill tell you when to bring them..

N: do it fast naa.. im dying to see the couples fighting... how dare they create the mess between us... huhh

M ( smirking ) : so someone wants to clear the differences...

N ( blushing ) : no aaisa nahi hai... because of them I got hurt... tum jaisae MONSTER ki wajah sae...

M (angrily) : how dare u call me monster..??

N : monster ko monster nahi toh aur kya bulau... get back to work.. I cant handle them for long time.. bye.. waiting for your signal.

"Kya samajh thi hai khud ko.. itti si hai.. like rat... aur mujhae order kar rahi hai... tut oh gaya manik... is mary com sae pyaar tujhae bhari padnae wala hai..." manik thought and said looking at his friends

" guys ill be back in a minute..." and he walked out of the canteen and the rest continued to discuss about the new admission hot girl. And after 5 minutes what they saw made their jaw's drop to floor. Manik walked into the canteen with a girl. His hand was wrapped around her waist and she was clinging onto him. He came towards their table and said taking her in a side hug

"guys this is my friend Rose... she is a new admission... and humhari class mai hi hai..." and he turned to rose and said "rose they are my friends.. this is abhi ( pointing towards abhi ) this is cabir ( showing cabir ) this is Dhruv ( showing dhruv ) this is Aaryaman and harshad ( showing them respectively ) "

Everyone shook hands with her and everyone was talking to her cracking jokes when suddenly they saw which made their blood dry in their viens.

"what the hell is going on here.." mukthi screamed scaring the shit out of abhi. Abhi who was laughing till now got up from his chair and said moving towards her

"baby listen... why are u shouting.." he said in a calm tone and dhruv continued "bechari rose dar gayi.." and looked at the scared rose who wrapped herself in manik's arms fuming nandini and Aliya together. Aliya held dhruv's collars and dragged him out of the canteen and nandini pinched manik's back making him jump at his place and with that he pushed rose who landed in cabir's lap shocking cabir navya and rose at the same time. Navya palmed her eyes and said loudly

"hey matarani... yeh kya ho raha hai..." and turned to other direction. Rose got embarrassed and got up from cabir's lap and cabir too looked away and got up from there and moved towards navya who was running out of the canteen. Only manik-nandini abhi-mukthi and rose were standing.

"umm rose... I will see u in class.." manik said looking at rose and she nodded and left from there and the moment rose left abhi and manik got strong punches from their partners and the girls stormed out from there.

Same night :

All the girls were still angry and nandini was super angry as all other boys were just flirting with rose but manik was hugging her.. not actually hugging but was side hugging her. She was glaring him from time to time which he ignored and had his dinner.

"kal holi hai na bacchon.. so jaldee uth kae tayyar ho jana okay.." dj said as manik-nandini-mukthi were about to leave for their rooms. All of them nodded and left for their rooms.

In mukthi and nandini's room :

"mai usae nahi chodungi..." nandini said punching the pillow

"tu kya koi bhi usae nahi chodnae wala.. badi aayi marae boy friend kae saath flirt karnae wali... uski toh mai..." and mukthi continued with her cursing session when suddenly the door opened and they didn't need to turn their heads to see who it was.. it was manik standing on the door angrily. He walked to their bed and picked up nandini in his arms and moved to his room paying deaf ear to what nandini and mukthi were shouting. He locked his room door and thumped nandini on the bed and whisper- yelled

"what the hell is wrong with you.."

"accha what is wrong with me.. then tell me Mr.Malhotra what the hell is wrong with you.. itna kyu chipak rahae thae us ladki sae.. haan.." nandini roared like a tigress and manik smirked seeing her jealous

"oh so someone is jealous.." he said sitting beside her on the bed and she turned her face to the other side.

He slowly wrapped his hand around her shoulder and pulled her more close to himself and she shivered at his touch and shut her eyes tightly. he pulled her again and made nandini sit in his lap and wrapped his hands around her waist and said resting his head on her shoulder

"it was a part of the plan baby.. itna gussa kyu ho rahi ho tum... and she is my childhood friend... u need not feel jealous of her.." manik whispered in nandini's ear and nobbled it slightly making her shiver more and nandini just hummed in response. Manik adjusted her hair on one side of her shoulder and started placing wet kisses on her bare exposed shoulder and nandini clutched his hands which were wrapped around her waist. He kissed her nape and moved to her other shoulder and dug his face in her hair inhaling her scent.

"manik.." nandini called him in a hardly audible tone and he just hummed nuzzling in her hair and kissing her neck

"kal holi hai.." she said in the same low tone and again her hummed. Nandini got angry and slapped his hand which was around her waist and said

"chodo.. now sleep.. kal subah jaldee uthna hai.. dj nae bola tha bhul gayae.." and tried to get off his lap but he pulled her more close and said kissing her cheek hard

"toh kya.. hum uth jayangae naa jaldee.. now see don't disturb me... warna tomorrow ill not leave u.. u know holi colours..." and kissed her other cheek too actually smooched her cheek making her go all red at his naughty acts. She moved a little turning her head to see his face and said looking into his eyes

"manik we have to sleep now to get up tomorrow morning.. so u sleep and let me also sleep.."

Manik smiled at her and kissed her forehead and she closed her eyes in response. He then kissed her left eye and then right.. again placed kisses on her cheeks and then finally kissed her lips. The kiss started slow and grew passionate by each passing moment and manik laid on the bed with nandini on his top and flipped their positions after sometime. They broke the kiss feeling breathless and manik rested his forehead on her's and nandini cupped his face and said in a serious tone "I will not tolerate any other girl around you.. whoever it may be.." and manik nodded his head laughing on her cute warning. He laid down on the bed beside her and took nandini in a back hug wrapping her completely with his hands and legs and both drifted into sleep peacefully.

Edited by neeju_chinnu - 8 years ago
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HOLI : ( 6 AM )

All the elders gathered in the puja room and were waiting for manan and mukthi. Soon a half sleepy mukthi and manik with a enthusiastic nandini came down and the puja began.

"maa im feeling hell sleepy..." mukthi said as soon as the puja finished and pandith ji left.

" happy holi mukthi.." nandini exclaimed and hugged her tightly but mukthi's eyes were closed. Last night she was fighting with Abhi and had slept very late.

"chalo get ready fast.. your friends might be coming here soon.. holi hai beta.. stop being this sleepy all the time.. look at nandini..." Nyonika said looking at mukthi who was lying on the sofa with eyes closed.

"happy holi mumma papa" nandini said in a joyful tone and hugged Nyonika and raj.. followed by dadu and dj. All were happy seeing her happy and to increase the same nandini heard a voice

"happy holi beta.." shalini and Kishore exclaimed standing at the main door of malhotra mansion and nandini's eyes filled with tears of happiness and she straight away ran to them and hugged them tightly and said amidst her sobs " I missed you both.." they hugged her back and said " we missed you too.." Kishore broke the hug and said kissing nandu's forehead " happy holi baccha..." she hugged him and said " happy holi appa" and then breaking the hug she hugged shalini again and said " happy holi maa.."

"arae wahi pae khadae raho gae yaa andar aanae ka irada hai..." raj said from behind and all murthy's moved into the lounge. Nandini was sitting in between shalini and Kishore and opposite to them were manik raj dadu dj Nyonika and mukthi. All were talking about random stuffs and everything and anything. A perfect family time it was.

" happy holi everyone.." fab 4 with abhi navya aaryaman soha and harshad entered and greeted in unision.

All the kids were in the garden of the malhotras mansion throwing colours and colour water on each other and the elders were attending the guests.

They were divided into two teams. In first team were

Manik Abhi Mukthi Navya Soha Harshad

And the second team was

Nandini Dhruv Aliya Cabir Aaryaman

They were playing all around throwing colours running all around the garden of the mansion. A DJ was arranged and he was playing songs which filled the happy holi mood in the atmosphere.

"bacchon kuch kha toh lo.. phir kehl laena..." Nyonika called them and all paused for a while and moved to eat something as they were really hungry.

"Dhruv come here.." nandini called Dhruv as they were walking towards eating area

"kya hua nandini.." he asked worriedly and she whispered something in his ears hearing which first dhruv's eyes widened in shock and next moment he burst out laughing and said "its awesome nandu.. im in.. omg... u are too much.." he said laughing she smiled smirking

" so ready.." cabir came from behind and the trio shook hands seeing which Aliya and Aaryaman looked at each other and shrugged their shoulders as they knew that these ppl were upto something but would not tell them so they kept quite and decided to wait for them to execute their "khurafathi" plan.

All were eating sweets and were having juices when all of a sudden they heard a splashing sound and everyone rushed to pool side to see what it was. Manik Navya Abhi Mukthi Soha Harshad Aliya and Aaryaman along with all the elders were standing on the edge of the pool as they thought something really heavy fell in the pool and was not clearly visible as the water got disturbed. And all of a sudden BHOOM..!!!

Manik navya abhi mukthi soha and Harshad were in the pool and Aliya and Aaryaman started running as they just escaped the sudden push from nandini cabir and Dhruv. And the people who fell in pool were hell shocked on this sudden attack from the rival team.

All the elders burst out laughing and manik fumed in anger. He came out of the pool and ran behind nandini cabir and Dhruv. Cabir was quick enough to escape and manik's next target was Dhruv and nandini. He slipped twice while running after them making nandini laugh even more and he fumed more. Finally Dhruv also was saved by Aliya who pulled him to a safe corner. And the last target was nandini. Nandini ran into the house followed by manik who was yelling

"STOP IT NANDINI...OR ELSE U WILL HAVE TO PAY FOR IT...!!!"

And the answer from nandini was "CATCH ME IF YOU CAN..."

Nandini in a hurry entered manik's room and hid under his bed. She palmed her mouth to subside the sound of her heavy breathing due to continuous running. She was waiting for the door to open and manik to come in and go out on not finding her anywhere. And the same happened. Manik entered the room.. searched in the washroom for nandini.. yelled her name twice and left the room calling her to come out. She sighed in relief and crawled out from there when suddenly she felt hot breath on her shoulder and nandini gasped. And in next moment she was on bed pinned under him and her hands were locked by his and were above her head pinned to bed.

"manik.." nandini tried to speak but was shut by his lips that were kissing hers hungrily. She was shocked for a moment but kissed him back when he bit her lower lip making her moan loudly. Manik continued kissing her until she went breathless .

"don't u dare do something like that.." manik whispered breaking the kiss and nodded her head in approval half-heartedly.

"good.." manik said smiling and pecked her lips once again and murmured "happy holi.." to which she replied "happy holi to you too.." and giggled recollecting what happened just a while ago and manik glared at her.

"don't nandini..im warning you... stop giggling.." manik warned her in a low tone and nandini struggled to get out of his grip but he held her more tightly. she sighed and said "ok fine.. now leave me lets go down.. sab log kya sochangae.." and again tried to push manik but he pulled her more close and said " as if I care.." and tucked her hair behind her ear and eyed her lips. Nandini knew what was coming so she palmed his lips with her free hand and said "manik not now please.." and pleaded him making a cute face and manik pouted and said "abhi nahi toh kab nandu.." and started nuzzling her neck placing wet kisses on her neck and shoulder. Nandini composed herself and said "after holi party.." and manik's eyes twinkled and he asked in a babish tone "pakka.." to which nandini chuckled and said pinching his nose "jii pakka.." and he hugged her tightly and she too responded the hug with equal favour.

Down in the pool side :

"yaar what are they doing.." cabir asked sipping the mild bhang.

"manik ki toh nikal padi yaar.. nandini us sae normally behave kar rahi hai.. aur kal us canteen sceen kae baad sae hum sab ki girlfriends nae humhae paas bhi nahi aanae diya.." Dhruv said with a sad expression and all nodded in approval

"mukthi toh puri raath mujhsae jhagad rahi thi.. gosh.. kitta try kiya mainae usae convince karnae kae liyae but maan hi nahi rahi thi..." abhi too shared his worry with his friends and suddenly the trio looked at each other and said " kahi yeh sab manik nae toh nahi kiya naa.." and they got their answer immediately as they saw manik and nandini walking towards the party with big smiles on their faces.

"iski toh mai.." Dhruv said getting up but cabir stopped him and smirked evilly and said " let us deal both of them in our style.." and winked at abhi and Dhruv and both got his intentions and got back for the preparations.

Girls side :

"sharam nahi hai in mae sae ek ko bhi.. kaisae flirt kar rahae thae kal.. huh.. I just punched abhi after that rose left..." mukthi said gritting her teeth and Aliya nodded and said "mainae toh Dhruv ko apnae paas bhi nahi aanae diya after that... what the hell does he thinks of himself.."

"humane toh sapnae mai bhi nahi socha tha ki cabir ji aaisa karangae.." navya said with scared expressions making mukhlya giggle and she continued " aap dono has kyu rahae ho.." to which the duo nodded in a no. meanwhile mukthi got a text reading which her eyes widened in shock. Seeing her expression Aliya asked

"kya hua mukthi.. whats that message..?" and mukthi showed the message to Aliya and navya and both palmed their mouth with their palms and the next moment their shock was replaced by anger.

" we are in.." mukthi replied to the message and the trio left from there. Manan walked into the garden and searched for their friends but didn't find them anywhere and started searching for them.

"arae aa gayae tum dono.." they suddenly heard cabir's voice and the whole gang was present there and moved away from each other "acting" still angry seeing which the rest smirked.

"chalo nandu.." navya dragged nandini along with her and boys dragged manik with him.

After 30 minutes :

"where is nandini... nandu... nandu.." manik shouted and got up from his chair blinking his eyes and shaking his head to see the things in front of him properly as his vision was getting blurry and started walking searching for HIS nandini and rest of the boys smiled as their plan succeeded.

Other side :

"manik mera hai sirf mera okay...!!!" nandini said putting the fifth glass on the table and mukthi looked at Aliya and navya and all hi-fived virtually.

***************

Ahh.. their friends planned them to get drunk and then lock the couple in a room... uff... wasn't it too much.. ab kya hoga.. both manan drunk fully... ill try to post a chotu drunk update in a day or two... but cant promise... im planning to finish barfi before my eye operation.. and hope so ill do it...

NOTE : friends my stories are being posted on wattpad by achyutha to read this story there u can follow her she is also posting MOM DAD AND WE. Her id is @operaofdreams and even im there on wattpad and I will be posting THE SPY IN MY HOUSE and BARFI shortly.

Hope you enjoyed the update..

Take care..

Keep smiling..

Loads of love..

Neeraja...

Edited by neeju_chinnu - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing amazing update... Manan ka plan back fire home wala hai.. Hehehe... Drunk Manan another treat to read..
Loving the story sooo much.. Can't even tell kitna saaraa ..

Thank u so much for the update and the pm

Keep smiling
Stay blessed
😊
Edited by mehak_ahuja - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update
manan's plan was superb
but nandu was also angry on manik
now both r drunk
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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kabeer n gang found out that it wwas aprank by manan


now drunk manan

wow

awesome

😛





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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow wat an amazing update...
Manan nd de beautiful bonding...

Manik nd nandini ne kya plan banaya mazza agya...

Bt nw m so excited to c manan drunk nd locked in bedroom...


Plzzz update new part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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first of all a big
CONGRATULATIONS
for new thread,

tqq for pm
it was awesome
lobedot
haha thy so wnt to take revenge but
now they are paying back

aweww lpoved their cute scene
can't wait for drunken part
Tc xoxox
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow awesome update..
Manan and their plans oh god...
Luved jealous Nandu she was soo good...
Holi is here...
Luved the way Manan r getting soo lovey dovey...
Drunk Manan and tht too locked up in a room...
Can't wait...
Luved it..
Thnx for pm..
Update soon..
And yes lastly congrats for new thread...
U deserve it ..
Edited by Pari_mananholic - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update
Loved it
Manan plan was super
And jealous nandu haha
Cabir druv n nandu prank was super
Now all their frnds know abt Manan plan and they are locking them in one room
Interesting
Waiting for drunk Manan
thanks tc

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