MANAN- YOU ARE STILL THE ONE.(CHAPTER-38 on pg no.38)(15.1. 2017) - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
Soorryy mene last part m comment nehi kia thaa n mene ajj part 6 n 7 read kiaa

part 6 was short but good
n part 7 was long but too much Soha stuff but thank God Manik POV tha...n yes lyk Bold stuffs but luv Manan wala Bold stuffs not ths Soha wid Manik plzzz


hope jabb Manan start hoga then u ll also add Manan bold scenes..


Plzzz Start Manan ASAP Start the real concept plzzz plzz reallyyy Desperatelllyyy waiting for Prologue wala stuff n starting of Manan plzzz plzzz

plzz Update Dailyy plzz
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Soorryy mene last part m comment nehi kia thaa n mene ajj part 6 n 7 read kiaa

part 6 was short but good
n part 7 was long but too much Soha stuff but thank God Manik POV tha...n yes lyk Bold stuffs but luv Manan wala Bold stuffs not ths Soha wid Manik plzzz


hope jabb Manan start hoga then u ll also add Manan bold scenes..


Plzzz Start Manan ASAP Start the real concept plzzz plzz reallyyy Desperatelllyyy waiting for Prologue wala stuff n starting of Manan plzzz plzzz

plzz Update Dailyy plzz
Update Next ASAP plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Want more n more n more Manan plzz plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
you're doing a great job with the story
it's going pretty well!
and you even give regular updates
waiting for the story to progress!
keep updating (longer pleaseee 😛)
i like this one a lot!!
take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER-8

Soha walked in with her friends (Viren, Shaurya ,Jay , Niyati , Khushi and Priya)
They came and settled themselves at the poolside.

Manik went and sat with them.
They were talking on random things when Manik noticed Soha.

She was very upset with whatever happened in her room.

Manik felt bad that he said all those things to her and thought that he shouldn't have been so impulsive .

He tried talking to her but she avoided him.

Manik thought to himself-
She loved me there was no doubt in it but then I wasn't prepared to take our relationship further without myself being sure about it.

Manik's thought's were broken by Viren who asked Soha what the matter was as she wasn't interested in their talks.

Manik thought that it was because of him but she said otherwise.

Soha- Nothing yaar I was just thinking about something. There's one girl in my class. She thinks that she is really smart and every time tries to insult me in front of others.

I have tried everything but failed to bring her down.

Priya agreed with her.
She said that we have to do something about her.
She is really getting on our nerves.

Soha- Guys I have a plan. If you guys support me then we can execute our plan.

She discussed the plan and everyone including Manik agreed.

They had to find a guy to execute the plan.

Jay suggested that Manik was the perfect guy to execute the plan.

Soha didn't expect this and said-

No . not Manik. Why not any of you guys?

I can't let Manik go near her. I can't tolerate that girl around him.

Everyone said that their reputation in college is not so good and that girl won't believe them so easily.

Manik- Guys guys. I am not doing this. Keep me out of it.

Jay- Come-on Manik it's just for fun. We are not telling you to get seriously involved.

Shaurya- And BTW you are good in charming girls. And you have never lost a challenge before.

So accept it as a challenge.

I dare you to make the girl fall for you in 15 days.

Manik thought for a while and said-

OK Challenge accepted.

I am Manik Malhotra. No one can escape my charm.

By the way who is the girl.

Soha- But Manik..

Manik- Soha relax . It's just a bet .

Soha- OK.

Khushi- So Manik your time starts from tomorrow .
We will show you the girl at college from where you can take over.

Manik- Cool...

Viren- Guys now let's start the party.

With this they partied all night and then slept there itself as it was not safe to drive because they were fully drunk.

But Manik said that he will meet them at college and left to his house.

Soha was now happy that Nandini will fall in their trap and she could get her revenge but she didn't want Manik to be involved in this.

But then she couldn't do anything as now Manik won't listen to her as he had taken up a challenge and no one can stop him now.

Thinking of all this she feel asleep.

Done with another update.

Please ignore the typos if any.

Guys please don't throw rotten tomatoes and eggs for writing such crap.

This is all I could think of for now.

But I promise you will get more of Manan in the coming chapters.

Hope you like this.

P.S. Please don't bash me.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Awesome update...
So manik is gonna trap nandhini for his bet.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
amazing update
waiting for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Finallyyy
lyk finalllyyy
Manan ayegaaa
m
sooo
sooo
happpyyy
excited
despratellyy waiting
plzz update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Finallyyy
lyk finalllyyy
Manan ayegaaa
m
sooo
sooo
happpyyy
excited
despratellyy waiting
plzz update jaldi jaldi ASAP
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40


Very interesting story. ..

Read full parts. ..

Looking forward to seeing more. ..

Thanks for sharing this.

Stay blessed keep writing.



Thanks.




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