MANAN- YOU ARE STILL THE ONE.(CHAPTER-38 on pg no.38)(15.1. 2017) - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER-9

Next day at college- Manik reached college and found his friends waiting for him at the parking.

He came to them and said- What's up guys. Tum log yahan kyu khade ho.

Viren- Tujhe tera target dikhane ke liye khade hai.

Manik- Target. What Target??

Jay- Arey wahi ladki jise tumhe phasana hai.

Manik- Oh.

Soha- Manik ek baat phir se sochlo. You don't have to do this.

Manik- Soha relax. It's just for fun. Don't worry.

Shaurya- Kyu dar gaya kya Manik.

Manik- Manik Malhotra kisise nai darta.

Jay- Guys ... She is here.

Manik turned to the direction where Jay was pointing and saw Nandini entering the college with Mukti.

Viren- Arey yaar ye Mukti ke sath kya kar rahi hai.

Manik kept staring at Nandini and didn't hear what they were saying.

He came out of his trance when Soha called his name.

Manik- Haan...

Soha - Guys let's get going now. See you in the canteen after the lectures.

Everyone agreed and went to their respective classes.

Manik, Viren, Priya and Jay were in 3rd year and Soha was in 2nd year along with Shaurya, Niyati and Khushi.

Nandini was walking in the corridor with Mukti when Nandini said.

Nandini- Thanks Mukti for helping me again by dropping me to college.

Mukti- Choti. Tu fir se shuru hogayi.

Nandini- OK OK sorry...

Mukti- Acha chal bye. See you after the class.

Nandini- Ya. Bye.

Nandini reached the class and the professor came and started the lecture.

Nandini was engrossed in the class whereas Soha was throwing mean looks at her.

The professor finished the lecture and informed the students that inter-college competitions are fast approaching and there would be various competitions in which they all have to take part.

Professor- Students, you have to participate in pairs i.e. one junior with one senior.

So come-on everyone write your names on the chits kept at the table over here and keep it in the bowl next to it.

Everyone wrote their names on the provided chits and folded the chits and kept it in the bowl.

Professor- The seniors will come and select one chit and the student in the chit will be paired with that senior.

He continued further -

There will be two competitions . One will be a quiz competition and another a dance competition.

First for the quiz competition, he called the seniors one by one.

First came Dhruv( He was in the Manik's class).

He picked up the chit and his face lit up seeing the name.

No points for guessing who it was.

Dhruv said- Nandini.

Nandini felt happy that she got paired with the topper of the college for the quiz competition.

Cabir got Priya

Mukti got Soha and the list continued.

Next came the turn for the dance competition.

Mukti got Shaurya.

Cabir got Niyati

Viren got Soha and so on.

Soha felt bad that she didn't got paired with Manik. She was curious to know who would be paired with Manik.

Then came Manik . He picked up a chit and smirked and said- NANDINI.

Nandini was hell shocked. She didn't expect that she would be paired with Manik.

Dhruv didn't participate in the dance performance and given his excellent academic performance, the professor considered his request.

After the pairing got over, the professor said-

So students , you all will have to give your 100% . We can't afford to loose this competition.
Your super seniors have never let the college down. I expect the same from you.

Before going to the competition you all will have an intra college competition and the best pairs will be shortlisted to enter the main competition.

So you all have one week to prepare for it.
All the best. Start the prepations ASAP.

Saying this he left the class.

Everyone started discussion about the competition.

Soha was fuming in anger that Manik got paired with Nandini and not her.

But Nandini on the other side wanted to withdraw her name from the dance competition.

She immediately rushed out to request the professor that she doesn't want to take part in the competition.

Done with another update.

Hope you guys like it.

A12609z thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
Suupperrbb
waiting for Manan
prologue
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real funn
bhagupur thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43



This is very interesting. ..

Manik see his target and agreed. .

Both paired for dancing. ..

Looking forward to seeing next.

Stay blessed keep writing.




Thanks.





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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER-10

Nandini goes to the professor's cabin and says- Sir I would like to withdraw my name from the dance competition as I am not good at it.

Professor- No no Nandini you can't say that. You have to participate in it.

It's a matter of prestige for our college and we cannot afford to be lenient in the selection. You guys have to participate in the competition.
And about dancing, who is your partner.

Nandini- Manik.

Professor called a peon to summon Manik.

After sometime Manik enters the Professor's cabin.

Professor- Ah... Here he is.

Nandini turns and looks at Manik.

Manik- Yes sir you have called me. Is there anything important.

Professor- Yes Manik. Come have a seat.

Manik came and took the chair beside Nandini.

Professor-As you know that Nandini is your dance partner for the competition.

Manik looked at Nandini and said- Of course sir.

Professor- She wants to withdraw her name from the competition. She says that she is not good at dance.

Nandini looked at Manik who was staring at her. She immediately looked away.

Professor(continued)-So Manik you have to help her out in this. And I want the best performance to be of you both. No excuses.

Nandini- But sir...

Professor- No ifs and buts. You are performing and that is final.

Nandini- OK sir.(She looked dejected)

Manik was continuously smirking seeing Nandini's state.

Manik to professor- Don't worry sir I will handle the matter.

Professor- Good. I expected it from you. OK now make a move . you don't have enough time for prepations.

Manik and Nandini in unison- OK sir.

Then they left the cabin.

Nandini was going to the library when Manik called her from back- Nandini ek minute ruko.

Nandini stopped hearing him.

Manik came to her and said-

Manik- So Miss Nandini doesn't know how to dance.

Nandini lowered her head and didn't say anything.

Manik- Don't worry. You don't have to be embarrassed. I will teach you .

Nandini looked at him and smiled weakly.

Manik- So when do we start our practice.

Nandini- Whenever you say.

Manik- Hmm... Let me think...

He thought for a while and said-

I think we should start from tomorrow...

Nandini- OK.

And she nodded.

Manik- OK then will see you tomorrow. Bye then.

Nandini- Bye.

With this Nandini left from there.

Manik smiled seeing Nandini's cuteness and said to himself- It will be too much fun.

His thoughts were broken by a tap on his shoulder.

He turned and saw his friends .

Viren- Yaar Manik baki sab to samajme aagaya but ek baat samajh me nahi ayi.

Manik- And what is it?

Viren- Is it coincidence or any of your tricks that you got Nandini's name in your chit.

Manik smirked on hearing this.

Manik- It is the magic of Manik Malhotra.
Mai Jo chahu wo kar sakta hu.

Jay- Ha ha. Very funny. Bata na yaar kaise kiya.

Manik- Kuch baatein secret rahe to hi Acha hai.
Saying this he went away from there.


Done with another update.

Hope you guys like it.


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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Awesome update...
So manik started his plan but I thought he has some soft corner towards nandhini
Sarahpeyton thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Hi guys...

Good morning.

I am really confused with the songs on which Manan will be performing in the competition.

For the intra college competition I have shortlisted 3 songs.

1. Madamiya( Tevar)
2. Kar gayi chul(kapoor n sons)
3. Cham cham(Baghi)

Please guys help me out with this in selecting 1.

And regarding the main competition I have thought about a romantic song.

Give your suggestions regarding the romantic song too. Which song should I choose.

Guys I am not an expert in writing unlike other writers on this forum . But I am trying to add such stuff to make my story more presentable. If you guys don't like any part of my work feel free to comment. Based on your suggestions I will try to improve in future.

P.S. Please don't ignore.

Thanks...

Edited by Sarahpeyton - 9 years ago
bhagupur thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47


The chapter was awesome. ...

So they will dance. ..

Manik planned it...

Looking forward to seeing what happened next. ..

And about song ...then I would love to see what you wrote. ..

Thanks for sharing this update.

Stay blessed keep writing.





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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazinggg update
Ye sb manik ne kiya nandu ko apna partnr bnane ke liye...lovd it...1&3 option
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
kar gayi chull

and u can show nandini in modern dress for the performance...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER-11

Nandini after talking to Manik went straight to the library.

She was searching for a book in the racks when Dhruv came from behind and said- Hi Nandini...

Nandini turned back and said- Oh hello Dhruv.

Dhruv- I wanted to talk about the competition.

Nandini- Yes Quiz competition na. You know Dhruv I am really excited to be part of this quiz competition. And you being my partner is icing on the cake.

Dhruv- Huhhh...

Nandini bit her tongue and said- Sorry... kuch zyada hogaya na.

Dhruv smiled seeing her. He got lost in her.

Nandini- Dhruv ...

Dhruv coming out of the trance- Haan...

Nandini- Kaha kho gaye...

Dhruv- Kahi nahi...

Nandini- To chale ...

Dhruv- Haan Chalo.

Nandini- Oh shit... Mai tu ek baat puchna hi bhool gayi.

Dhruv- Kya.

Nandini- Hume bahut saare preparations karne honge na.

Dhruv- Hmm...

Nandini- To kabse start karna hai studies.

Dhruv- Jab tum kaho.

Nandini- Let's start from today itself.

Dhruv- OK kaisa tum kaho.

They both sat in the classroom and discussed the time table for their prepations.

Then they studied for almost two hours.

Nandini kept asking him doubts in between and Dhruv explained each and every topic to her perfectly.

Nandini was so relieved that she got Dhruv as her partner. He was so got in academics.

After 2 hours Nandini was exhausted.

Dhruv observed this and said- Nandini agar tumhe break jahiye to...

Nandini- Thank God tumne puchliya. Warna to mai yahi baithe baithe sojati.

Dhruv- OK let's take a break.

Nandini- Actually Dhruv if you don't mind can we continue this from tomorrow.

Dhruv- Oh OK.

Nandini- Thanks. Bye.

Dhruv- Bye.

Nandini left from there and Dhruv smiled seeing her .
He adjusted his spects and went away.

It was almost 5pm. Nandini rushed outside .

She had come with Mukti to college in the morning . She dialled Mukti's number. Mukti picked up her call.

Mukti- Haan choti bol.

Nandini- Kaha ho Mukti. College me nahi ho kya.

Mukti- Mai apne friends ke sath hu.

Then she realized that she had forgotten to take Nandini along with her.

Mukti- Sorry Choti mai bhool gayi ki tum mere sath ayi thi morning me. Don't worry tum wahi ruko mai abhi aati hu.

Nandini- Nai Mukti it's OK. I will manage.

Mukti- Are you sure.

Nandini- Yes.

Mukti- Acha ek kaam karte hai. Mai Manik ko bolti hu wo tumhe drop kardega hostel.

Nandini- Manik ko. No it's OK . unnecessarily use kyu trouble karna.

Mukti- Arey isme trouble ki kya baat hai. Wo wahi college me hoga abhi bhi. Wait I will call him.

Nandini- Mukti but listen... Mai...

Before Nandini could complete , Mukti ended the call.

Mukti called Manik.

Manik- Haan Mukti bol.

Mukti- Manik ek favour chahiye tha yaar.

Manik- what?

Mukti- Tum log abhi bhi college me hi hona.

Manik- Haan.

Mukti- Wo actually mai Nandini ko sath lejana bhul gayi jaate waqt.

So please can you drop her at the hostel.

Manik smirked hearing this.

Manik- OK cool. But where is she?

Mukti - She may be at the college gate.

Please usey yaad se drop kardena.

Manik- Hmm.

Mukti- Thanks yaar. Mai rakhti hu . Bye.

Manik-Bye.

Manik told his friends who were busy in their conversation-
Guys listen. I got to go. Will see you tomorrow.

Soha- But Manik where are you going?

Manik- On my mission
and he smirked.

Soha- But Manik batake to ...

Manik left from there without giving Soha any chance to continue her questioning session.



Done with yet another update.

Hope you guys like it.

Guys please give long comments.
The response is not up to my satisfaction.
Are you guys not liking the story.

If yes then give your feedback so that I can improve further.

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