**MaNan ff -'L@nd of $weetie$' updated chap 25 on pg 82* - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: thamannamanan1

fab update

really enjoyed thr frndship

manik was so cool about the punjshment

but kabeer gave him one punch n then others followed hihihi

song was good

good work
😛


thank uu😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
awww,just awesome...
their punishment and padhna rules ko..was so good
loved it...
waiting for more...😛😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
nice update.
what a great friendship.
waiting for next part.
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
heyy guzz!! again this is kyara ..so here are the pics of school and kasoli place😉



" (school)
(shops)

(grave yard and church)


ok guyzz toh howz place ,,and ya i'll post everyone's house in chapter okk ,,,😊
Edited by kyaramalhotra - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
ur story is jst amazing n too cute 😳
i luvd ol d updates
der bond is so strong n nice
manan r cutiepies 😉
wud luv to read more
update soon
lots of love
sanaa 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: cutiesanaa

ur story is jst amazing n too cute 😳
i luvd ol d updates
der bond is so strong n nice
manan r cutiepies 😉
wud luv to read more
update soon
lots of love
sanaa 😊


hey sana ,, thank uu so much ..i'll try to give update tomorrow 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Amazing update...

Full of masti...fun...

School days...
Frindship...
Love...
Crush...
Filrting...
Wow.,..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
😊
Edited by kyaramalhotra - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39

chapter 5

after doing lot of hungama inside outside of school ,, they all are sitting in big jam room mukti alya and navya they are sitting on bean bag and all boys are sitting on floor waiting for the bell to rang (the big bell) ..actually they have got full day punishment they are not allowed to attend any class and teacher's cant take risk to leave them alone outside school(reason u kno😉)

(jam room- its royal school thats y they have their persnal jam room)

cabir is listening musing in his phone in earphone ,,manik and abhi they are fighting with scale (fake fighting like warriors) ,,navya is making notes for herself and afcorse for her frends also...dhruv and mukti thay are playing snake and ladder in dhruv's phone and alya she is dezining a dress...

after getting hell bored by listeng music cabir finnaly cried kya yaar isse accha toh class hi attend karlete kam se kam ye zulm to ni sehna padta 😭

navya -zulm?? Kon karra h tujhpe zulm...😕

Cabir instantly replied time

Navya questioned time???

Cabir lightly slap her forehead and replied yes stupid !!! this bloody boring time cabir said almost cryinng lying back on floor😭


Than abhi said making sad face ha yaar subah k baad abtak mary mam ko ni dekha ,, aaj unka do periods tha ,,,tch shit yaar I missed it...than he beat manik with the scale he was holding and gave him look like "it all becoz of u" and manik laugh..😆

But suddenly mukti shout loudly guyzzz

Every one palm their ear and glare her😲

Than she said sorry !!! ha mai bol ri thi ki bacchi ab tak ni aayi..

Everyone instantly alert specially manikk

Manic ask worriedly ya wo toh washroom gyi thi n a than he check his watch its been almost 20 min she left

Dhruv said playfully kahi washroom ka history toh ni padne baith gyi all chuckle😆

Manic stand up and fix his blazer and said guyzz mai jata hu use dhund ke leke aata hu..

Mukti stop him and said ruk mai bhi aati hu

Cabir also stop them and said after getting up and stretching his hand to hum yha kya karenge ..chalo toda hum bhi school tour karke aaate h than he put his arm around dhruv

Than they all agree and disperse

Girls left to washroom to find nandini and boys they are finding nandini in every class

at last they all gather near auditorium

mukti ask them little worried mili kya they all shook their head in no

manik become worried and murmur kha chali gyi yaar

Cabir said I think ...but stop ,, they hear familier voice coming from auditorium they peep inside and smile 😊

They saw nandini is sitting on auditorium's stage folding her legs and talking with old lady who is cleaning the mess which in morning the prince have created ,, actually nandini is talking and she is listenging her every talk smilingly and calmly...

Nandini- and u kno aunty I have pet his name is froggu... she said grinningly

Lady- is he is frog little curious

To which nandini cutely blink her eye and replied yes yes and grin and lady chuckle😆

Than she was about to start next topic but her all friends attack on her

Mukti alya and navya hug her tightly than mukti lightly slap her and said u scared me my idiot bacchi where were u huhh!! While nandini gave her sheepish smile

than manik lightly push mukti aside and and side hug nandini and ask her washroom se direct auditorium !! raaste me fairy mil gyi thii kya tweety(he call her tweety) than he poke her nose to which nandini laugh

by hearing her all time fav name she grin and replied are manik mai jam room hi aane wali thi but raaste mai mujhe aunty(pointing toward old lady) mil gyi she is new hear na so unhe pata nit tha ki auditorium kha h so I help her ,,,or wo yhape akele kaam karti toh bore ho jati isliye maine unhe company de diya .. to which manik smile she too smile back and peck his cheek ,,to which manik blush 😳 but no one saw that ..

after sometime abhi playfully ask that old lady waise aunty bacchi ne aapko pareshan toh ni kiya na ..nandini make angry pout and manik and mukti puch abhi and abhi laugh

than that old lady smilingly said no beta she is such a sweetheart (to which everyone ) or ha usne mujhe abtak is school or kasouli ka pura history bata diya she laughingly said and left

they all chuckle as they know that something has happen like this and nandini tried to smirk (to abhi) but it turn into cute expression

to which every one laugh again and nandini become confuse

now they all are sitting on auditorium's stage gossiping

alya and navya went to washroom

suddenly navya came from no where running shoutingly guyzz guyzz and

* booom *

damn she fall..😛

(hey guyzz so here is the update now socho wat's the good news😉 )

Edited by kyaramalhotra - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Amazing update manans scenes were cute update soon waiting for manans romance

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