**MaNan ff -'L@nd of $weetie$' updated chap 25 on pg 82* - Page 3

wow this story is so nice.
they all are so cute.
such a great friend bond they all share.
waiting for next part.
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Mindblowing...

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Beautifully written...

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8 BFFs...cant live widout each other...true frendship...

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Chap 4

They (muku ,nandu , alya navya cabir dhruv abhi and manik) all are standing outside school ,, in hot weather ,,they all are totally sweaty but they are not allowed to open their blazer as punishment they are standing silently none is talking (wo bolte h n silence before strom )..

Flashback

Manik is still lying in floor "umm good morning sir"

Princi - can I have any proper explanation mr.malhotra ..trying hard to contol his anger

At first manik chuckle seeing princi red face may be becoz of "ghussa"

Manik - are wo sir ...before he can say anything

Principal shout - out so loudly that evry student and teacher shake at their place ,,princi's eyes are buldging out becoz of ghussa

Manik - but sir..but again

Princi -out and u (pointing toward muku ,nandu , alya navya cabir abhi who were silently sneaking from there) also get out, get lost right now .. full on tigress mood

Dhruv came for rescue - sir let them go its not their fault

Princi - and u also out ,,, every body out!!! Out right now !!

Than manic get up from floor and took his bag and start walking toward princi

Princi shout -what??😡

Manic took his soo special' ping pong ball and said my ball sirrr..again stretching the word sir

And quickly run from their laughingly...

flashback end

Cabir wiping his forehead sweat full on dramatic style m melting yaar🤢

Dhruv-shut up ,,u r not ice sarcasticly

Cabir-but am cool with smirk😉

Abhi finally broking his mon vrat' shouted impatiently- u idiots moron's stupid kutto correction suwar(pig) bola tha yaar maine is tupid extra hot sun ke niche ni khade rehna mujhe aakhir ghuma fira key hi aana pada na...finnaly stop breathing heavily hands around waist

Manik -chill guyzz,,, he said so coolly as if nothing happened

They all bend their head in side way to look at his face than cabir came in front of him and tightly punch his stomach

Than he said holding his collar- saale ye sab tere karan hua hai😡

nandini also punch him in his arm and said I second u cabir u idiot nonsence kha tha ha kar kya rha tha ...mannik was about to say something

navya -exactly humsha tere karan humlogo ko punishment milti hai fakecrying😭😭

alya - good yaar m burning it soo hot than she tighly slap manik arm😡🤢

dhruv and abhi said exactly soo hot looking toward mary mam(English teacher)

mukti kick their ass they both fell on ground than she said donkey's while they give her angly glare rubbing their ass

than manic said coming in front of them ohh come on guyzz they all look toward him its our last year in this scul ,,let just enjor it fully

than he put his hand around nandini shoulder aur tumlogo ne suna ni "sometime mistakes are the best memories"than he peck nandini cheek

than he put his hand in air and said guyzz let just show our wild side than they all grin and smile evilly

than nandini and mukti said with smirk phaad dete hai

cabir and dhruv said horrifiedly kiskooo!!!😲

Alya and navya said rules ko😉

Manik showing yo - yo guyzz than they all shout loosecontrol😉

Cabir and abhi wore there cap

Than cabir and abhi start their rap (from always kabhi kabhi movie school ke ye din songs)

Yo listen up now, school's out.

Hear the bell ring.Tera kya hoga
I'm do my thing.
I'll be rich, dressed in bling.
I'm a spread ishq can make you sing

Than manik and dhruv join them

Yo listen up now, school's out.

Hear the bell ring.Tera kya hoga
I'm do my thing.
I'll be rich, dressed in bling.
I'm a spread ishq can make you sing (all student gather their)

Than manik start singing smilingly

Gum koi aankhon mein jo meethe meethe sapne, kya yeh dil kare( he walk with students and shows his heart with hs hand)
Pehle pehle din ki yeh nayi nayi subah, aao chill karein(he run toward garden with his all friend and they lye in grass)
Gham ko chabatein jaaye, sabko ko batatein jaaye, apni hasratein(he took nandini in his back and they fall on their friends)
Yaar mat bhoole jagah, hai yeh badi cool, suno suno zara let me say(than they all start laughing)

They all stand in line and entwine with eachother and sand together-

Bhoolenge hum toh nahin, sochenge hum bhi kabhi
School ke yeh din sabhi aayenge na, na na na(they show their bumb and shake it to indicate nanana')
Seekhenge hum yeh yahin, hai kya galat kya sahi
School ke yeh din sabhi aayenge na, na na na (they did some dance move and again show their bumb)
Aayenge na, aayenge na na na na (they did some step like they are running in slow motion)

Than again abhi rap taking round of mukti pulling her hair

Cabir winking some girls

Dhruv irritating alya

Manic and nandini doing some robot dance

Yo listen up now, school's out.
Hear the bell ring.
Tera kya hoga
I'm do my thing.
I'll be rich, dressed in bling.
I'm a spread ishq can make you sing

Theory mein kamzor hai, practical champion(cabir sang holding bio book sadly but grin when it says practical)
Tod de hum deewaron ko, hai bones mein calcium(manic sang showing a skelton in physics lab)
Padhne se jo ho na ho, teacher se pyaar ho(abhi sang throwing the book and he gave rose to mary mam)
Future ho raste pe, aankhon mein stars ho..(than dhruv sang sitting beside sme student than they all lye on school entrance stair and smilingly sang "aakho m stars ho")

Darr bare ghar chodhe, jo bhi mile usse chhede, masti mein chale(they pull one of the student pant and run from their)
Keede ban khaane lage aise kyun kitaabon ko, chasme lag gaye(they all wore big specs and holding book to show chasme lag gye')
Science padhe, Arts padhe, din padhe-raat padhe, kuch bhi na padhe (abhi and alya sang showing books but atlast they throw all the books )
Sar pe jo dandey hain, syllabus gandhe hain, phir bhi hum kahe hain(than they show teacher's beating them ,,,and they are having paper in their hand than all student throw that paper on sky)

And they again start dance They all stand in line and entwine with eachother and sang together

Bhoolenge hum toh nahin, sochenge hum bhi kabhi
School ke yeh din sabhi aayenge Na, Na Na Na
Seekhenge hum yeh yahin, hai kya galat kya sahi
School ke yeh din sabhi aayenge na, na na na
Aayenge na, aayenge na

At last they all group hug tightly😉

Originally posted by: ruchi116

Awesome update loved it

thank uu😊

Originally posted by: pujadas187

Awsome concept...

Amazing...

Mindblowing...

Funnny...

Hillarious...

Beautifully written...

Really liked ur story...

8 BFFs...cant live widout each other...true frendship...

Eagarly waiting...

Continue soon...

Nd pm me also...
PLZZZ...

thnk u soo much😊 ur guyzz comments means a lot to me

Awesome update their masti is superb loved how manik kissed nandu oho manik is in love with her

Awesome awesome awesome awesome...so lovely update...loved it ...this story is so close to my heart...ur an awesome writer...u nailed it yr...plz update next part soon...waiting very eagerly for next update...plz take care...god bless you

Originally posted by: nanoNikki

Awesome awesome awesome awesome...so lovely update...loved it ...this story is so close to my heart...ur an awesome writer...u nailed it yr...plz update next part soon...waiting very eagerly for next update...plz take care...god bless you

awww thank u soo much 😃 love u..

Originally posted by: ruchi116

Awesome update their masti is superb loved how manik kissed nandu oho manik is in love with her

thank uu😊