**MaNan ff -'L@nd of $weetie$' updated chap 25 on pg 82*

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Hey guyzzz!!! My self kyara u can call me jerry well forget it!! M big fan of all the manan ff writers guyzz love uu ...u guyzz are fabulous ...really appreciate ur works...i think jitna accha u guyzz write utna accha ky2 ka scripts bhi ni hoga ..ok so am starting new manan ff ,,,its my first ever ff ohh god m soo excited ...well it just I want to write manan ff because bohot man thaa to write well I cant compete with any if writers but yaahh little try ..actually m crazy about fairies don't worry story is not about fairies,,,but have little effect like that ...ok so I think maine bohot bore kardiya sorry ,,,,noow back to story


😊😛😡 School Life😭😳🤢

About story and charactersketch

This story is about 8 best frirnd forever from childhood ,, they all live in kasoli,,,,kasoli is the name of place ,,it is just like fairy world yes,,,,, well kasoli was ruled by royal family "the malhotras" the king and now it is ruled by raj malhotra but he lives in London with his wife ,,,here everybody is in peace,,, kasoli is not so big but a very beautiful and mesmerizing city ,,,,which have all facalities ..big school shops river lake and the beautiful scenary,,,,and here we have 8 bff's who can die for eachother ,,, they are the jaan of kasoli ,,, they all are teenager student of saint terresa school aka saintese in short ,,,,,,,they are eachothers jaan they cannot live without eachother ...its story of kasoli cow boys(boys group name)and fairies(girls group name)

Character sketch

Manik malhotra - the handsome hunk of kasoli, he belongs to royal family but they live simple life,they visit castle just foe vacation,18 year old in 12th class,,loves music and dancing but not more than his friends ,,richest ,,he is soo sweet caring guy ,,down to earth,,, and very jolly person,mastiokhor naught latelatif becoz of him sabko punishment milti h ,,, the flirt ,,free bird , loves his mom and dad nyonika and raj so much who lives in London for their royal business..and ya care for nandini , she is more than frend for him...

Cabir dhawan - he is handsome and every one favrouite , 18 year old in 12th class ,,love to play drums,,he is also rich ,,,,flop comedian in mukti words,,,, but can change sad atmosphere into happy atmosphere and the flirt ,chuddy-buddy of manic and abhimanyu ,,,,,,,, lives with his mom anamika dhawan he is like mumma's boy love to get pamper she is also a business women loves his son and his friend soo much..prankster partner of nandini and mukti

Dhruv vedant - he is same as like kabir ,,but he is little shy type but only in front of teacher as iff he is innocent puppy ,,, loves his friend soo much ,, guitarist,,he is orphan lives with his sister navya love her like anything ,,,,always irritate alya but secretly having feeling for her ,,,,

Abhimanyu Fernandez - he is handsom boy ,, always believe in spreading smile cant see anyone in pain or sorrow ,,, loves mukti but they always fight with eachother like tom and jerry but at end they patch up but they again start fight becoz abhi says its his mistake than mukti says ni its her mistake than they again start fighting loves his frends soo much love dancing and painting..have special place for nandini as brother calls her bacchi ,,,crime partner of manic and cabir...

Nandini murty- sweet bubbly beautiful girl with petie figure ,curly hairs (just like niti's music video), she is bachi yaar,,,,every ones jaan extra pamper kid and always pamper by every one ,, she is a bundle of joy ,,,, her life is full off happiness ,,, loves her bff's,,,she love everything music and dancing painting etc in short she is chalti firti encyclopedia ,,,17 year old but still study in 12th class,,,she is rich but down to earth,,,crazy for fairies ,,lives in kasoli with her cousin sister mukti ,, her parents lives in London for business love their daughter soo much ..love shopping and the mastikhorrr pure heart...

Navya vedant-she is sweet girl lives with her brother,,,full of drama always serious about study ,,she love cooking but no one love her cooking but they have to eat bcoz if navya start cry no one can stop her accept cabir and nandu,,, loves her bff's soo much...

Mukti murty- she is stong girl with perfect figure loves abhimanyu but cant express,,,,she is nandu's chachu's daughter orphan but nandu's mom dad love her like their own daughter she did'nt felt that her parents r no more bcoz she have sis like nandu she is 1 year elder than nandu treat her like little sister calls her bacchi she love to irritate abhi but love him also ..at 12th class 18 year loves her bade pop's and badimom so much..prankstor partner of nandini and cabir..

Alya saxena - the beauty bee ,,, crazy abt only one thing shopping' ,, alya and nandini they both love shopping and they run their own fashion dezining site only foe their family anf friends,,they both always got confuse so sometimes they buy whole shop ya that's true,,,,have done lots of date but waiting for his prince at same class 17 year old,,,..anyone can make her fool easily

(rest of character's I'll tell u in story like their teachers parents friends neighbours etc..)

Character sketch in pg.1**

chapter 1 ~ 1**

chapter 2 ~ 2**

chapter 3 ~ 3**

chapter 4 ~ 4**

kasauli pics on pg 5*

chapter 5 ~ 6**

chapter 6 ~ 8**

chapter 7 ~ 10**

chapter 8 ~ 13**

chapter 9 ~ 14**

chapter 10 ~ 17**

C.S of parents on pg 20*

chapter 11 ~ 22**

chapter 12 ~ 25**

chapter 13 ~ 27**

promo on pg 29*

chapter 14 ~ 31**

chapter 15 ~ 33**

chapter 16 ~ 36**

chapter 17 ~ 40**

chapter 18 A/B/C ~ 45**

chapter 19A/B/C/D ~50 & 51**

chapter 20 ~ 58**

chapter 21 ~ 64 **

chapter 22 ~ 71 **

chapter 23A/B/C ~ 78**

chapter 24 ~ 81**

chapter 25 ~ 82**


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hey !! m kavya kyara's lil sis she is not present here so m giving update..and because of my stupidity maine is ff ka 1 or page bana diya shitt so pardom me di""" and yahh here is 1st update by kyara Chapter 1


A girl having pale white skin wearing baby pink colour floral frock having beautiful wing on her back flying on sky catching stars and fireflies and collecting them on her jar



,, she is flying higher higher and higher she have collected almost 100 of fireflies and 9 stars .she was about to catch a star ki suddenly

Ba ba ba ba ba na na ,,,ba ba ban a ba na na bananaaa (minion song)

Potato nah bananhhh ... good morning

She woke up with a jerk (she is wearing cute peach colour nightdress) and glare at her minion alarm watch who in return gave her a innocent with scared smile (ya she think that evry non living things also have feelings or emotion and can talk)

She than look out from window and sigh dreamly all the time smiling thinking about her beautiful dream which is disturbed by her very own minion she sighly whisper dreamly ohh god '

Than suddenly she shout ohhh god as she saw her room clock hit 7:15 am

Than she jump from her bed and run toward next room shouting happily muktiii' and jump on her bed

At first mukti got mini heart attack by this sudden attack by her sweet innocent sister.. than she release her breath than give a fake glare to her lill sis(she is wearind cute polka dot shorts and loose t-shirt nightdress)

Who gave her a sheepish smile ,,,,than hopped in mukti's arm smilingly and said goody woody morning muku'

After awing at her lill sis cute antic she also hug her back tightly good morning bacchi

Suddenly mukti shouted ohh freak ' ... nandini jump on her place and did some kungfu move with her hand with scare expression ...at first mukti got shock that she laugh out loud to which nandini make a cute pout.. to which mukti again aww at her give her a big tight hug..she than pull her cheek and said "aww by googlie wooglie"

Than mukti said hurry up bacchi other wise firse gate pe chadkar school k andar ghusna padega..

To which nandini giggle and mukti gave her shut up' look and than they both start laughing...

Flashback

Mukti and nandini ,,,, they got late for school ...when they reach they saw school gate is closed

Suddenly an idea hit nandini...after some time nandini climb on gate and thn she jump inside ...than next is mukti she easily climb but when its time for jump she got hell scared,,,,nandini loudly whisper " mukti just jump nothing will hapeen !!!u trust me na" than mukti nodded than nandini smile when she saw mukti jumping her all smile faded ...

After sometime nandini was lying on floor and mukti was lying on nandini

Flashback end

Both sister were laughing like maniac holding their stomach ,

than mukti slap her arm lightly and said "hurry up bacchi fast" nandini nodded smilingly peck her cheek and left to her room running like bunny ********than suddenly

"Booom"

Nandinii fell on floor she rub her arm and murmer " bloody carpet ,,,ouch lagi mujhe ufff"

Mukti came running to her and check her than she ask " r u ok ,,lagi to ni I told u na samhal k chala kar"

Than nandini said "arey I mai giri ni actually floor was feeling lonely so I just hug him !! she said sheepishly...than mukti smile at her cute antiq .than suddenly again

Ba ba ba ba ban a na ,,,ba ba ban a ban a na bananaaa (minion song)

Potato nah bananhhh 7:45 get ready...

Than they both run to their room but they both got hit by their room door they both rub their fore head and shout together "mai theek hu" they giggle and hurridly left to their room...

Continue...



Edited by kyaramalhotra - 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: riyaparo

Nice start
continue soon


thank uu😊
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Hey
Nice story
Loved the cs of everyone
Do cont soon
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Originally posted by: aditimanan

Hey
Nice story
Loved the cs of everyone
Do cont soon


thank uu so much 😊
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hey,thanks for the story...it's cute and lovely..
without any daily soap wala masala..
i loved it..
plz continue...
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Originally posted by: elsaanna

hey,thanks for the story...it's cute and lovely..

without any daily soap wala masala..
i loved it..
plz continue...


thankuu soo much well its really not like daily soaps ,,its just abt school life and friendship😊
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Chapter 2

Nandini hurriedly run to washroom ,,she took a quick shower she came out in bathrobe ,than she open her extra large closet which have uncountable branded dresses ,, accesries,,, bags ,,,shoes etc

She wore her uniform (grey short skirt,white shirt ,blue jacket ,with tie),she made side braid and took her school bag ...and left after pecking her cute pet froogy(a cute little green frog)

Than she run downstair and found mukti (in school uniform open hair) hurridly buttering bread for nandini ,,,,she came to mukti and was about to say something mukti put that buttered bread in her mouth and said "hurry up" and was about to go but nandini grabbed another bread and stuff her mouth too...and said lets go' mukti glare at her while nnandini grabb another bread and walk away

,,than mukti took her car keys and they both left for school...

Saint terresa one of the biggest school of india " "

EXTERIOR-big castle royal school,have beautiful coaridors ,bog goldem dombs ,everywhere big colourful flags,it have big bell which only rang for 3 time for starting,lunch and ending of school,it is 3 floored schood ,,it have big terrace in 2nd floor were student can go

INTERIOR-it have big classroom (having projector in every class),big ball room for prom night,,big drama reharsel room with allover big red curtains and red carpet with golden pillars and attached costume and props room for boys and girls..it have big auditorium for students, were school's aall important certificates medels founder of school's photo hanging on wall well framed,,big hall for dancers ,,have jam room,,drawing classes,,big auditorium for any function's of school which have big stage ,, swimming pool ,,playground,,big staff room,,special room for princi and trusty and having all labs(bio physics chem. labs)

GARDEN-it have big garden every where.coconut tree colour ful flowers,,benches for studentand special place for atudents and staff if they want to plant.

In scul outside the auditorium 2 boys are hidind behind wall wearing uniform(grey trouser ,white shirt ,blue blazer with red tie) having bags in their one shoulder peeping inside auditorium than boy wisper to other boy

Abhi-abbe cabir jaldi dekh na yaar or late gye toh band baj jaegi,,waise bhi its too sunny yaar muje bahar khade ni hona hai

Cabir-mere abhi abhi mu band ni kiya na tere sare dat(tooth) tod dunga ,,,ek toh andar jhak jhak k mere gardan(neck ) ki band baj gyi or tuje kya lagra h mai yha lungi dance karra hu...

Abhi-mujhe kya pata ho sakta h andar andar lungi dance karra ho,,,,, while cabir gave him disbelief look

Cabir-yaar upaarse ye rao(sports teacher) ullu banke door k pas khada hai bloody idiot,,andar ni ja sakte,,

Abhi - saaale teri wajah se late ho gye

Cabir-ohh hello ladki ko tuney dekha tha mai toh bas uske piche gya

Abhi-accha toh ab maine pehle dekha tab to bada bol ra tha ki "maine pehle dekha"

Cabir-thik h tune pehle dekha khush rakhle ,,than they both again started peeping inside

After exactly 1 min someone tap their shoulder,,,they both got scared and tightly closed their eyes and murmer "shitt" ,,they tun toward the person with closed eyes and start begging with close eyes

"we r really sorry wo puncture mai tyre ho gyi ni ni tyre puncture ho gyi ,,we are sorry"

Not getting any response cabir open his one eye and found mukti and nandini laughing palming their moth so that no one can hear ,

Than cabir open his both eye and found abhi still closed eyes sayind "we are sorry"

Than mukti slap abhi than said "ur apology is accepted"

Than abhi also replied who's asking for ur apologi miss chipkalii

Mukti -haha ye joke tha (sarcastingly) crossing arms

Abhi -tha toh ,,putting hand around his waist

Mukti -I don't like jokes ,,full on tigrss mood ,,and cabir and nandini look at eachother and sigh as they know what is going to be nxt

Abhi I don't like u,,that's it mukti and abhi they pull each other hair than nandini and cabir stop them

Cabir-are mere k2h2 k rahull anjali aise ladoge toh baccho ko kya sikhao ge they glare cabir and turn their heads opposite direction

Nandini -ok guyzz enough ,,rahul anjali say sorry

Abhi - no bacchi its her fault

Mukti -haww u monkey don't manipulate my sister bacchi its his fault

Than nandini said full irritated by them -fine is prblm ka solution badme nikal te h pehle lets go in,,than she put her head on abhi's shoulder

Mukti- waise abhi tak yha kya karrete andar kyo ni gye she ask to cabir and abhimanyu

Cabir- rao banke ullu khada leke thullu

Than abhi gives bg tune -pampam paraaa,,,

Than nandini and mukti giggle and said now wat??

Cabir- wait I'll see ,,than he peep inside than said "guyzz rao round pe gya h lets go in but niche jhukke jana padega"

Than they all agrees ,,they all crawl inside and and finnalyy they succedded they sat in last row where two girls were alredy sitting

Cabir naughtily wink girl and greet her "hey navy(navya)"

navya glare them and said shut up u bandar kha tha or tu abhi tujhse ummed ni thii and muku nandu tum dono toh chod hi do 12 class k 1st day koi late aata h kya

mukti and nandini said chod dete h than they both high5 eachother

navya make angry face than nandini and mukti both sat beside her and take her in side hug and said are navu tujhe pata h na humse jaldi ni utha jata u kno janm sidh adhikar an all,,to which navya smile

cabir and abhi they both are winking some girls and suddenly nandini said guyzz kuch suna ,than they hear slow snoring they look beside mukti and found alya sleeping they aaccidently laugh loudly to which alya woke up and every body attention goes towrd them

than princi stop his speech said u 6 student go and stand there(near door)separately..shouting

they murmer some galii for princy and stand near door separately

mukti whisper to alya -raat ko kya karri thi alya dont tell me ki stars gin rhi thi

cabir-ha ha alya kya karri thi or druv bhi ni dikhra h,not letting her to say anything

navya -shut up u Bandar dhruv monika mam k pas h speech disscuss karra h,,than they all look toward 1st row where monnika mam is sitting and dhruv like obedient student standing beside her

than dhruv wink them

abhi -saale ko class m aane de fir batata hu😡

nandini -waise monika mam se yaad aaya where is MANIK ,,they all look toward her and said "ohhh shitt"😲

(ohhk guyzz so manik entry will be in nxt chappy tk and yahh good night )


Edited by kyaramalhotra - 9 years ago
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awesome
story

pls send pm
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Awesome update
Loved it

Can u please pm me

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