**MaNan ff -'L@nd of $weetie$' updated chap 25 on pg 82* - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Arey yr this os nt fair manik ki entry nhh thi kaha hai abhi tak so rhh hai kya
Nice update
Loved their bonding
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: aditimanan

Arey yr this os nt fair manik ki entry nhh thi kaha hai abhi tak so rhh hai kya
Nice update
Loved their bonding


dont worry,, nxt update mai manik ki entry pakka promise and thank uu😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shruti1997

Awesome update
Loved it

Can u please pm me


thankuu😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: thamannamanan1

awesome
story

pls send pm


thank uu😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 3

A tall boy with well built body running toward auditorium in full speed (lagta h late ho gya h) and same time wearing blazer ,his hairs are flowing in air (don't misunderstand he have short hairs) ..he have a ping pong ball in his hand ,,he always carry that pingpong ball because someone special have gifted it to him.

Finally he stop outside auditorium ,,behind wall , he is standing like one hand in waist another in wall , ,breathing heavily ,,, becoz of running,,he peep inside and saw his all friends standing near door but separately..

He got confuse,,than got hint that they are punished than he murmur

"mere bina hi punishment ,,not fair"he smirk🤪

Inside auditorium,,

Mukti-damn it!! Wo idiot abtak ni aaya,,that means!!!

All slowly shout -punishment!!! fake crying😭

navya-ni aaj mai aisa hone hi ni dungi kuch karo guyyzz kuch karo😕

Alya said full of horrified expression-no no .not today yaaar ..its too sunny out side.showing her skin they all shake their head

Nandini-yes alya our earths ozone layer is getting damage and u kno sun's harmful rays can harm our skin and !!!

Abhi cut her in between and said bacchi abhi general knowledge ka time ni h baadme pura history bata dena ohhk...than nandini nod in yea and all sigh...

Navya-I think wo idiot aata hoga ,,hum door k paas khade hai use cover karke andar ghusa lenge ,,,,bahar dhup m khade hone se toh better hi h...

Cabir -wohoo navya ,,beauty with brain (in flirt style)😉

Navya tightly tap his food ,,,cabir was about to shout but abhi palm his mouth...😡

Abhi- chup be sunny deol ki aulad(son) ,,,jab dekho flirt karna zaroori h kya,,

Cabir replied controlling his pain -afcorse flirt karne se khun (blood) badta h🤢

Abhi ask being curious - kiska ??...all shhok their head in disbelief hearing their "ohh so important discussion"😲

Cabir - girls ka unki cheeks dekha h ekdum red hojati h tomato ki tarah..is navya ka bhi but ghusse se daayan kahiki😡

To which navya give him sarcastic smile...

Abhi-heyy toh vampire's should try this method 🤢,,,,tottaly irritated by thir stupid talks mukti shout

Mukti- can u plzz just shut ur mouth u mongoose

Abhi-mongoose kise bola😡,,angryly turn toward mukti

Alya - guyzz ,,bugger off plzz yaar mujhe mere skin ki tension ho ri h

nandini -mujhe bhi .than they both side hug each other and the other sigh and navya murmur hey bhagwan ji😭

After sometime something shine on nandini face she look toward direction(outside auditorium) and found a boy hiding behind wall signaling her,,she widened her eyes and signal him "wait"

Nandini -guyz its time to execute navya's plan ...they all got hing what she want to say.

Cabir look outside auditorium and saw him the boy wink him and and cabir gave him some sweet gali smiling sarcasticly..than cabir signal his frends to take position

He slowly slowly move backward than he saw rao is turning so he stand straight ,,than again start moving backwards..

Than he goes near door and the boy hide behind cabir...than abhi goes toward cabir than the boy hide behind abhi,,,

Than abhi took him to metal statue of soldier who is holding a shield and sword (royal school) than the boy hide behind that soilder statue..

He was abot to go but tab tak raita fail gya

His bag got stuck with soilder's sword and he fall on floor ... his ping pong ball got freedom and start jumping from right wall (broked the well framed certificates) to left wall (broked the well framed medels)

All students and teacher's hide their head with their bag and books

Cabir and abhi hide behind soilder statue shield

Navya hide under bench

Alya and mukti hide hehind their bags

And nandini palm her mouth full on shock

The pinpong ball celebrate his freedom for almost 3 min and finally caught by a flower pot

There is pin drop silence in whole auditorium

All students slowly came out were they were hiding (eg. Bags, books,bench) ,,they look around and found all the well frmaed certificates and medel are broken and the soilder's statue are lying on floor

Soon princi recover from his mini heart attack and came in mike and announce greeting his teeth- MR. MANIK MALHOTRA😡

Than all student look toward the boy who's bag is hanging on soildre's sword and he is lying on floor covering his head with soilder's shield

He slowly remove the shield from his head

The boy is none other than "THE PRINCE MANIK MALHOTRA"

He gave sheepish smile

And said sheepishly "ummm good morning sirr"😳 he stretch the word sir

Mukti nandini cabir abhi nanvya dhruv palm their faces...


(so howzz it wll i kno utna accha ni h but chalo manik ki entry ti ho gyi pheww ..i'll update nxt chapter tommorrow😊)

Edited by kyaramalhotra - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
hilllarious



rofl

😃


😃


how r u doing this
I just cant stop laughing
they were trying to stop him from getting punishment n here he did ?????????


now wht is princi going to give manik
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OMG its very interesting...lovey and awesome story and funny too loved it very much..plz continue waiting. Eagerly for next update...take care...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: thamannamanan1

hilllarious



rofl

😃


😃


how r u doing this
I just cant stop laughing
they were trying to stop him from getting punishment n here he did ?????????


now wht is princi going to give manik


thank u soo much ,,,today is my last xam .😃.i'll give update today😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: nanoNikki

OMG its very interesting...lovey and awesome story and funny too loved it very much..plz continue waiting. Eagerly for next update...take care...


heyy thank uu soo much😊,i'll give update today😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
wow this story is so nice.
they all are so cute.
such a great friend bond.
waiting for next part.
continue soon.

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