Voyage: A Manik-Nandini Fiction| *Completed* Ch11, Pg 27

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LoveIsManan

@LoveIsManan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Again only one word comes to my mind that is beautiful...

You have a really good grip on penning down emotions...

You have really very nicely written about his emotional state and vulnerability...

That is something I really like about your writing style...

Hope to read it more...

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kneha25

@kneha25

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

awesome written...his emotions are shown by you in a beautiful way that even i could see thru

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Lizbeth

@Lizbeth

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#63

U penned evrythng so beautifully.. U r really an awsm writer .lukin forward for the coming chapters..
Thanks fr the pm

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gauriangel

@gauriangel

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Hey, ..

So Manik is in realisation stage now...nice..next chapter would be nandini's realisation??

Not sure..or she already knows what they share is more than frndshp..

Nice chap..

I am waiting for collision update...

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wonderstar13

@wonderstar13

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Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Thanks a lot for the pm😊

I really like the way you write,very eloquent.

I guess Nandini's surprise and Mukti's comment were the push Manik needed to understand his real feelings for Nandu.

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: 19dishayadav
Stage 2 is gonna be interesting :p
Thanks for the PM! :)

That's the stage where I'll be actually tested, Realization and Confession have nothing much to plan for.. but there, I'll be either messed or I'll create a mess. Let's see.

Thanks though.

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Pooja2899

@Pooja2899

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Posted: 9 years ago

#67

thanks for pm.
nice update.
you have written really well.
waiting for next update.
continue soon.

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

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Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: LoveIsManan
Again only one word comes to my mind that is beautiful...
You have a really good grip on penning down emotions...
You have really very nicely written about his emotional state and vulnerability...
That is something I really like about your writing style...
Hope to read it more...

Thank you. I am pleased that people find my writing style good enough for them to read. ;P

You'll get to read more. Tomorrow.