MaNan TS: Tere Hoke Rahenge(Chap2A/B-on pg 9 updated ) - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
hey...i unressed on pg 3...do have a look plz.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
It's awesome
I feel in love with it
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Interesting concept

Superb concept

Waiting for the next part

Update the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Amazing..awesome...


Poor manik.. 😭 ..i want to know his reason
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: krazzy_parthian

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hey priya

awesome chappy...

so...mukti and nandu...heehe...unki revenge planning...mast hai

manik kyun kar raha hai aisa...

cabir...he's a real cupid...

ooo...so bomb phoot gaya...

waiting for the full revenge things...

continue soon


LOVE
SANJANA



Thank u Sanju dear 😊 ..hope I can call u that 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
such a nice story
loved muku nandu revenge planning
why man in is doin this
update soon
and possible do pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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such a nice story
loved muku nandu revenge planning
why manik is doin this
update soon
and possible do pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
seriously... this story has a "WOW" factor...
it's prologue & 1st awsm...nothing 2 say...
manan ki shadi toe fixed ha...ha ha ha..
but manik aisa kyu kar raha nandini ka 7a???
nandini ki real avatar kar diya manik freeze...
plz next post it asap...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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[COLOR=PINK]Manan TS[COLOR]
Tere Hoke Rahenge
[SIZE =4]Chapter 1B[/SIZE]

Suddenly a red Lexus 420 entered in the college premises & everyone looked @ that car with interest because except fab5 no one has that big & fantastic car like that.Like this they knew but today it proved wrong...

So everyone starts watching that way along with fab5...Then mukti came out 1st everyone was like WoW..Although they have seen mukti b4 in modern way but today she was looking awesome... Sh was wearing a mid thigh length fitted skin color skirt & a loose off white crop top with a round aviator specs & her hairs were lil curly... She was looking not less a diva...Everyone was glaring her & abhi !! Bechara he was not able to close his mouth 😉 ..Fab4 saw this & they smiles on his majnu giri 😉

Manik: Abhi shut your mouth or else mosquitoes will enter in your mouth 😉

Abhi: It's OK ..janedo 😉 😳 (Still in trance)

Fab4: hehehehe...

Manik was laughing more then cabir spoke In a angry tone behaving like he is still angry on him..

C: Just shut your mouth..We r not talking with u 😡

He felt hurt as his best friend was still angry on his stupidity... But suddenly he heard all students were complimenting on somebody.. He looked at that direction & Everybody's mouth shut open in shock 😲 Everyone was shocked from the shit out of them but manik got an heart attack...Only a word came from his mouth..

M: NANDINI 😲 ...

He saw that nandini was coming out from the driver seat ..She was wearing a off shoulder red sleeveless crop top & short leathery black & red combined skirt which was till her mid thigh..& a goggles were hiding her enticing eyes...Her hairs were full open which reaches till her waist..Her hairs were lil curly which were waving in the mild breezes ..She had a red handbag in her left hand with a red heel boots.. She was looking stunning + hot...She had a good curved body...The dress was enhancing her beauty more..She was looking like a cute doll angel...Everybody's specially boys mouth was open & manik 😉 He was clean bold out...

Manik's POV

Omg my nandu is looking so stunning 😃 I Neva knew it...She has a good curved body..Pls dear just put out your goggles I wanna see your eyes.. Pls I beg pls pls pls..(suddenly nandu put down her goggles.. Again he was stun..Her eyes were looking killer because of the deep kohl & she had lil make up.. her lips were in dark shade smoky red...)...Wow she is indeed looking like a diva...So beautiful 😳

POV end

His mouth was still open...& cabir saw this..Seeing him like this he almost forgot the anger & starts teasing him...

C: Abhi look he was teasing u na that mosquitoes will enter in your mouth ? & look @ his face now am damn sure mosquitoes will surely enter in his mouth & they also could do bhangra inside his mouth 😉

All fab4 starts laughing but manik still he was in trance...Cabir was noticing manik.

Cabir POV

It's 100% clear that manik is madly in love with nandini..So that nandini (he noticed her eyes were lil teary seeing manik)..Now I'll have to do something for them..But I need someone with me...But who ?(he then looked@ mukti who is in deep thought & is thinking something looking at him ) yes...Mukti can help me for sure...But 1st I'll have to still keep this angry mask on my face because I know manik can't bear the ignorance of me...So what is the problem only manik can tell me that...So Manan b ready cabira is there for u 😉

POV end..

Nandu is still walking ..seeing the effects of their on students mukti whispers..

M: Nandu look I'd told u na u r looking like a pataka..See sabki muh khulaka khula hai 😉

N: Shut up Muku..We will have to meet the principal..

M: OK..(Then she saw soha was still hanging with manik ..So that nandu couldn't see them & get hurt she tried to avoid them)

M: Nandu chal na canteen..(she couldn't continued she saw nandu was already seeing them with anger filled eyes 😡 ..It was clear that she was feeling jealous 😉 mukti smiles)

Mukti POV

U r great god..Seriously.. Like ek taraf nandu is showing she is angry but on the other side she is feeling jealous from soha ? Am sure she still loves him..She helped me to get my life.. My abhi...Now it's my turn to repay it.. But kaise main apni plan ko anjam dungi ? kiske sath ? I obviously need a partner..(then she saw cabir is thinking something seeing manik then her)got it cabir.yes I think he is also thinking the same...Yes Manik 's bff...I'll hv to talk with him..yes 😃

POV end

She came to fab4 who were in lil difference from Manik & nandu was already present there...

C: Whoa behna (he called her that) not bad..U r looking stunning 😃 (they hugged)

N: Thank u bhai 😊

Abhi: Correct 😊 & mukti baby come main tumhe ek jadoo ki jhappi de deti hu aao 😉

Saying this hanged on mukti & all burst out in laugh..

All fab 4 complimented them 😊 & every students who were passing through them they for sure complimented them ..

C: Behna ek baat bata yeh sati savitri sunny Leone kab bangayi 😉

N: What ?

C: I mean sorry very bad joke...But really how did u change in a night ?

She looked @ manik & he looked other side to avoid contact & she glared him..

N:Time k sath everyone has to change...Sab change hogaye hai so y not me ?

Dhrulya: that's true..
Then they heard principal was calling everyone in auditorium...

C: Let's see ab kounsa bulava aya hai..

Abhi: Chalo guys..

nandu left from there & only fab4 was there..

C: Um..mukti mujhe tujhse baat karni hai...

Mu: Yes me too..

Abhi & navya: kiske baare me ?

C& Mu:Apsi mamla hai 😉 baad me batayenge..pehle hum to baat karle..phir tumlogoko shamil karlenge...

C: So mukti do meet me after the announcement of principal...

Mu: Where ? Um..Here ..what's say ?

C; Done...Let's go guys..

All left the place after final glaring manik & he ws too hurt..

S: Manik I think u also should go..

M: But...

S: U will have to bear it manik..because u deserve it..U hv hurt a innocent soul..So it's ur punishment.. That's y I told u sab sach batado...

M: Forget it soha..They will Neva forgive me..Let's go...

S: No first u go..I'l have to talk with aryamaan..

M: OK ..come fast..

He left from there & soha called aryamaan..

S: Hello aryamaan...

A: Baby I'll call u after sometime am in a meeting..

S: OK baby ..All the best..& Do call me I need to talk with u really important.. It's about Manik & Nandini..

A: What ? Pls tell me..U no nandu is my best friend.. So pls tell me what is the problem between manik & her ?

S: I'll tell u later..I also need to go Audi..U after finishing ur meeting do call me OK ?

Arya: Accha..bye...

Then soha went towards the Audi.

AUDITORIUM

P: Good morning students.. I know u all r thinking that suddenly y I called u here...I'll have to make an announcement.. But b4 the announcement I called nandini murthy on stage...

all were surprised ...She went on stage..

P: So students u all wanted to know na who is the third trustee's daughter, who is from US is reading in our college ?so here is she...Nandini Murthy the only daughter of Varun Murthy a special trustee of this college...

All were shocked because all these days she was secretly reading here disguised in simple, is nandini ..All knew that she was damn powerful like manik...But when they know actually she is the same so world collapsed in their feet..Because the very 1st day all had insulted her very badly ...But fab5 were happy it was completely shown on their faces...

P: So students dispersed...

All left from the audi : after that announcement manik was walking through the corridor... Suddenly he felt a pull & in a franking sec he was in a classroom..He didn't freaked out because he knew that who it was..So immediately he put on his fake face...

M: What is this nandini ? let me go ..

(She blocked his way by putting her both hands on the wall...he was scared 😉 because he haven't seen this angry nandini.. But he was really enjoying this side of her 😉 😳 )

N: So did u got that ? I hope u have got the right answer.. & How dare u called me a commoner ..aaah let me remember u had called me a behenji right ..& & & am a old fashion queen..I don't have any sense of dressing or style...Am like a old queen Madhubala right ? Yehi tumne kaha tha na? Haan Mr Malhotra ? 😡 Tum...

She was damn angry so she barked on him sarcastically but she couldn't continue because she was shushed by him ..He twirled her & shushed her.. How ? I think u all know that 😉 Yes...He kissed her...She was shocked ..Her eyes became like a big marble 😉 ..this sudden kiss made her startled but here Mr Malhotra was enjoying it 😉 y not he was kissing his girl that wasn't wrong but for now she was angry so to cool her he didn't get a better idea ..specially when he was with her 😉 He was dominating ..Chewing & biting her lips but she didn't response...Because she was still in shock...He left her & smiles..

M: Now I got it 😉 but ek chiz maine nehi kaha..U said that u r a old queen & kya tha?Haan ..Madhubala na ? But Maine tou woh nehi kaha tha 😉

He spoked so innocently like he doesn't know anything...& here she was numb how to react...& he smiled shamelessly..

M: Waise u taste good 😉

Saying this he left whistling & nandu was damn shocked...She touched her lips & lil just lil blushed...

N: But u taste good Mr.Malhotra 😉

Then suddenly reality strikes her...

N: No I can't let him over me 😡 no I can't..

Saying this she left the place angrily...

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Sorry guys for this shitty update.. I don't know what I've written. Actually am lil depressed.. So don't know ..I didn't even read it for once...And sorry people I can't pm ..Because I don't know how to pm everyone in one time & I can't pm everyone personally because it cause a lot of time & I don't have time... So sorry who wait for my pm or updates... hope u all will like this part...

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[SIZE=PINK][COLOR=5]Priya[/COLOR][/SIZE]


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing update Loved it Kiss was superb Continue soon :-)

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