MaNan TS: Tere Hoke Rahenge(Chap2A/B-on pg 9 updated ) - Page 2

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The plot of the story is too gud
Cont soon!
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Superb starting
very interesting
nandu was amazing
she slapped manik twice
plzzz continue soon
take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awwweeesssooommmeee
plzzz want stubbbooorrrnnn veryyy angryyy Nandini n jealous Manik plzzz plzzz plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hii Priya
A warm welcome to your story dear...
It's really very interesting... Story line was too good...Manan are so mad for each other but something is stopping him...and a misunderstanding ruined everything...
Soha is good now that's amazing...
I think aapko isse SS banaane chaayiye...
Its upto you...bring it on...
Continue soon
Take care stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Snehasn

Hii Priya
A warm welcome to your story dear...
It's really very interesting... Story line was too good...Manan are so mad for each other but something is stopping him...and a misunderstanding ruined everything...
Soha is good now that's amazing...
I think aapko isse SS banaane chaayiye...
Its upto you...bring it on...
Continue soon
Take care stay blessed



Thank u so much dear...I'll try to make it but if I get good response 😊
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Originally posted by: A12609z

Awwweeesssooommmeee
plzzz want stubbbooorrrnnn veryyy angryyy Nandini n jealous Manik plzzz plzzz plzzz



Don't worry it's on way 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: nubula


awesome concept dear.

liked it so much.
pm me when you update.
cont soon



For pm dear u will have to send me buddy request.. Only then I'll b able to send pms...
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Nice & interesting concept...
Luved it...
Plz update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing story.. line... dear...
I think... mr. Murthy... n mr. Mahlortra fix manik n nandini marriage in childhood.
N manik is doing... all this.. becoz... of that vachan... but he don't know that she is nandini only.

I think...
Vaise... waiting. Wht will u... show...
Vaise... more... i like nandini's character

Waiting for the part...

Love mehak


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MUJHE TERI ZAROORAT HAI (MANAN DARK SS)
TUM HI HO (MANAN FF)
KHAMOSHIYAAN(manan ss)
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[COLOR=PINK]MaNan TS[/COLOR]
Tere Hoke Rahenge

Chapter 1A

(Guys slightly change Fab 5 is not same like the show...In fab 5 there is manik,dhruv,alya,cabir & abhi not Mukti...Mukti is nandu's soul sister like Soha...This three were together. but now it's two only Nandini & Mukti...& Nandu was very close to mukti .Mukti knew all about her whereabouts... But she was mum fr the sake of her friend... But mukti & abhi were together because of Manan so they are trying to solve their problem.. & other is same as b4)

After coming from college she directly called mukti & within half an hour Mukti came in running...

Mu: What happened doll ? Y r u crying ?

She was freaking out of worry seeing her crying...


N: Mukti y did he do this to me ? & soha she back stabbed me...She told us that she was in relationship with aryamaan but here she was with manik 😭

Mukti was shocked... Then nandu told all about the college thing & muku was hell shocked+ angry...

m: That bi**h soha am not gonna spare her..but Barbie did u thought once y they did all this ?

Nandu also get lil conscious ...

M: As far as I know manik is mad about u ..And I've seen in his eyes...Hr won't deceive u...

N: woh sab ek drama tha muku...He didn't liked me...You know I've never touched Indian clothes but here am wearing this..
U know in US I was never like this...Am a fashionista... & u know if my US friends see me like this na then surely they will faint ..

She chuckled and Also mukti...But mukti was damn furious on manik & soha for crying nandu...

M: But nandu don't u think u should teach some lesson to them ? who the hell is he to talk About ur dressing ?

N: Yes..I was also thinking like this...Umm.
Let me call dad...

N: Hello dad..😡

Varun Murthy: What happened baccha ? Aaj itne gusse me kyun ?Kisine Kuch kaha kya ? Agar Kaha hai just tell me his or her name I'll not spare that person 😡

N: Leave that to me dad... Me & mukti are enough.. (her dad knew about mukti)

V: Accha OK...

N: OK dad remember u had told me not to change my lifestyle here in India..U wanted me to led the same life as i used to do in US..but I didn't listened you..

V: Yeah...

N: So dad now onwards I'll listen only u...Which u will ask me to do I'll listen.. So dad I don't wanna live in this apartment anymore... Send my personal car .I'll live in our Mansion...

He was shocked...She was telling him like a angry women ..Which was screaming to him that she was damn furious on somebody..& was ready to kill that person..

V: Baccha u OK na ?

N: Yes dad ...& u will have to do something..

V: Ur wish is my command my baccha...

N: So listen..******************************...

She was telling her plan to him & he was hearing every word with keen interest..

N: So here is the plan got it ?

V: Yes madam..

She chuckled a bit hearing the word madam...

V: But princess I wanna ask u something.

N: Yes dad.

V: Do u want to show someone the real u ? Or this is just like nothing..

She was startled for a bit but managed..

N: Something like that dad..Someone questioned me about my dressing sense...so I wanna show them..

She while telling her dad remembered manik & soha..& her very first day when she was wearing simple dress all the students of Space were laughing at her..This only added fuel to her already burning fire...So to avoid further questions she quickly distracted him..

N: So good night dad...Sleep well
.bye bye..

V: Are..sun.nandu...

but alas! nandu had hanged up...

M: So done 😉

N: Yes

M: So tomorrow the whole Space academy will face the new ,different Nandini Murthy..

N:Now that manik will see that who is Nandini Murthy..He told Me behenji na ? If tomorrow he did not get the correct answer na then my name is not nandini murthy 😡 but really yaar on second thought Manik is not like that...But then y did he do this to me ? I know manik loves me & I also love him too..Then y ? I've seen his love for me in his eyes...I can't b wrong...But what is the reason of his doing ? I'll have to find out y did he broke up with me ?
But He spoke about my lifestyle 😡 am not gonna spare him ...I'll find the reason later but for now it's time to tech him some lesson...

M: OK so Mission teach manik lesson start 😉

N: What ? hehehe ..

M: Really ..he he he...

N: Bouhat hasi arahi hai na tujhe ruk..

She starts ticking her & she was also laughing like maniac... This was NiTi (nandu & mukti)..They defined friendship...

(BG music: Yaaro Dosti )

Then suddenly someone belled the ring to stop them...

N: Ufff ab koun ..Accha muku ruk am coming...

M: Nope M also coming...

N: Ok..

When she opened the door she found a man was standing in front of her..

N: Yes..

Person: Nandini Murthy ?

N: yes its me..

P: Oh good evening mam..Here is your new car key ...

She & muku looked behind him & found a red dashing Lexus 420 ...She was highly impressed by the choice of her father..

She thanked him & after that she thanked her father..

M: Wow nandu uncles choice is great...

N: Yeah...

M: So congrats for new car ;)

N: Oh thank u 😉 accha muku can u live for some days with me In my mansion ?

M: But ..me how..

N: Ufff u r my sister na...I'll talk with aunty..

M:Arey she is not a problem... She doesn't even know how I am..she don't care yaar if I die or alive...

She gets emotional & nandu cursed herself for talking about her mom...So to cheer the atmosphere she spoke excitedly..

N: then nothing to worry..U r living with me till then am in India...

M:Oye it was some days...not year 😲

N: Nope plan change y did u get emotional? Now u r living with me it's final..

M: nope

N: yes..If it's no then katti 😉

She moved her head to the other side with a pout & muku smiles..

M: OK..Dramebaaz kahiki 😉

N: he he he...

M: Accha now am going to pack my bags OK ?

N: OK..come soon.

M: yeah ..bye

(they were neighbors of that apartment.. Muku in upper flat & the next flat was nandu's..)
They hugged & muku left for her home...In way she also told abhi about all & he was such a sweetheart ...

Nandu then packed her bags & moved to her own mansion...In their mansion she had two cupboard of clothes 😉 so nothing to worry ...Then muku came & again wished her...Then they changed themselves into crop tops & shorts ..Then after having dinner they moved to bed..After doing some tang khichayi & fun they moved to bed ..& Slept..After many time they r sleeping together ...Otherwise it was nandu & muku who used to land up each others apartment & slept...It was a pleaceful moment...

NEXT MORNING

NiTi woke up @ 7..They were happy...After many time two besties were together...

M: Nandu aaj ka kya plan hai ?

N: wahi jo dad ko bataya...Tujhe ek kaam karna hoga..

M: Haan bol..

N: Muku select a dress for me..

M: huh itna sa...Sure..

She opened her cupboards & starts selecting a dress...

M: Here it is...It will look awesome on u..

N: Wow...it's beautiful..

M: Go ..quickly change karke aa.

N: Abhi aya...& u take this..U also change.

M: OK..

they left for dressing room & after sometime they together came out & Mukti was like "WOWWW"


M:Nandu u r looking like a Pataka...

N: Ufff muku tu bhi na...U r also looking like a bomb 😉

M: hehehe ..accha chal let's hv breakfast..

N: Sure..

After having their breakfast they left in Nandu's new car playing some rocking music & they were enjoying...


In S.P.A.C.E

Every students were in college premises talking & laughing... Fab 5 came there ..Once they reached soha came there hugged manik in front of everyone... Fab4 was shocked as they knew that MaNan were together...

S: Hi baby...I missed u...

M: Aah I missed u too baby..

This was something which made all freeze on their spot...They were hell surprised.. No one was able to speak a single word...So after gathering some conscious cabir spoke..

C: Manik have u gone mad ? What r u doing ? if nandini sees this then what will happened ? Have u thought that ?

M: Koun nandini ?

All shaped their mouth in round O 😲

S: Baby that plain Jane...

M: Oops ..I forgot...Oh that nandini We broke up...Actually not we ..it's me who broke up with her...I was bored yaar...She is nice but not my type...

He was speaking all this in a sarcastic tone...Everyone was numb on their places...

Alya: Manik have u gone mad ?

D: She is such a sweetheart yaar...

Abhi: How could u do this bro ?

All were bursting on him only cabir was left..He then with a sarcastic tone..

M: Ab tu bhi bolde...ab kya mohurat nikalu tere liye ? Y r u silent ?

C: Manik yeh sab kab hua?

M: Yesterday ...[:/]

"Thud"

Manik was shocked & also everyone...Navya slapped him...

N: tumne nandu ko itna hurt kiya & now u r speaking like that ki u don't care...Bhai mana tha tumko...Aur tumne kya kiya ? Usiki friend k sath chi...sharam aani chahiye...Aur soha how could u do this huh ?
C: navya chalo...

N: nehi cabir bolnedo mujhe..Haan bolo manik kyun kiya tumne aisa ?

M: Do u remember she had slapped me when I was ragging her ? That's y I thought to take revenge from her...

He was blurring & all were damn furious on him...

C: OK then ...Agar yaha par nandini nehi hogi then we r not with u..We can't accept soha replaced nandini...

Manik shocked manik didn't expected this...

D: Yes ..am with cabir...From now we r not your friends...

A: Yes..Now only we will meet in rehearsal..Fab 5 won't break but nothing will b like b4...We will not party with u or nor we r gonna talk with u .Bye.

They starts moving..

M: But guys u can't do this to me..U can't leave me for that..that..co.mo. ..commoner.

He was having immense pain while calling Ber commoner...

N: She is not a commoner u got that ? Chalo cabir...

He was still standing there...Not able to understand y he was doing that.

Cabir POV

I don't know y he is hurting himself ? I know he loves her...I can see that ..There must b some reason of his doings...I'll hv to find out..for this I'll have to talk with him...Yes..I will...

POV end

Then he left from there...Manik was standing numb..He was hurt..Tears were flowing...

S: Manik r u OK ?

M: I destroyed everything.. My love ..my friends has gone far away from me...Now what will I do without them ?

S: Manik I think u should tell them the truth..I think it will b a good idea..

M: No.It won't...Am sorry because of me u had to break ur friendship with ur best friend 😭

S: Woh to hai manik...

M: Accha listen tumne aryamaan ko toh humare plan ke bareme bataya na ?

S: Oh god shit ..I forgot...He had told me that he had came India but for urgency he had to left without talking with me...but 1 thing u shouldn't have called her commoner yaar..It must b hurting her badly...

M: What will I do? I had to do this..

Saying this a lone tear escaped from his eyes...& to comfort her friend she side hugged him...& bingo cabir saw this...He was listening all their talks from behind hiding in a bush...

Cabir's POV

See I knew it manik can't do this...He has a valid reason.. & woh kya hai I'll hv to find it out...Don't worry my Manan main tumlogoko milakar hi rhunga 😉

POV end

& then suddenly a Red Lexus entered in the college premises & everyone including fab5 & soha all students looked at that car with keen interest.. Just then when A girl came out from that car everyone like WoW' .MUKTI...When the other girl who were in driver seat came out everyone was shocked 😲 In fact fab5 & other students were numb at their places...More shocked was manik only a word came from his mouth...

M: NANDINI... 😲
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OMG like seriously I stopped in such a suspense..Sorry guys don't know what I've written. I know its a crap..But seriously thank u guys..Jitna bhi mila hai I didn't thought muje woh bhi nehi milega.I thought no one will comment or like it because it's a big crap...As I've got 2 days break b4 my chemistry exam I thought to write one part..I'll post the next part very soon...Hope u all will liked this part 😊
Stay blessed...

Priya

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