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<font size="5">[COLOR=PINK]MaNan TS [/COLOR]</font>
<font size="6">Tere Hoke Rahenge</font>
A girl wearing a short kurti with a matching leggings was searching a boy in her college premises.. She was damn happy..Because she was going to confess her feelings & also some secrets to HIM...So while searching him when she was passing through a window she heard some giggles...She immediately recognized HIS voice..but wait she also heard some girl's chuckling voice..That voice seems like that if she knew that person..So she peeped inside & what she saw that skipped the ground underneath from her feet..She saw that whom she loved that person was standing with a girl & his hands were wrapped on her waist & that girl's hands were near his neck like they were going to Smooch each other
...Girl's back was seen able to her..So to get a clear view of that girls she starts moving further peeping through the window till then her eyes had started filling with tears but b4 that what she heard that broke her heart into pieces..She heard him saying I LOVE U to that girl.. Tears welled up in her eyes she immediately storm inside kicking the door calling his name loudly MANIK...They both 1st got startled but didn't moved apart...HE gave a annoyed look to her ...
Manik: What the heck NANDINI MURTHY don't u have any manners ? Don't u no k kisike private moments k bich me ana bouhat hi ghalat baat hai ?
She was shocked...She also starts...
Nandini: What r u doing manik with SOHA ?
M: So what ? that's none of ur business...
(She got shattered...) N: So what .Manik ? Kal hi tumne bola tha that u love ME & now same u r telling her ?
she told crying bitterly.. He & Soha starts laughing sarcastically ..Soha moved towards nandini..
Soha: Tch tch tch tch oh my my nandu baby u r so innocent.. He told u & u believed? If u r thinking him that he is that kind of person who will stick only with a girl then u r highly mistaken.. & about that I love u thing manik na jaane kitney ladkiyo ko I love u kaha hai ..& I don't know y he did said to u that ? [she turned to him ] Manik tumne iss behenji ko I love u kyun bola ? Ladkiyo ki kya crisis thi iss college mein ? I know u have good choise unlike her then y?
Then he also starts walking towards nandu & stands right beside soha where she was standing.. Then he puts his hand on soha's waist pulling her towards him...
M: Soha baby u know what this was all a drama...Tum he kya yeh lagtatha I will love this old fashion queen ? Just look at her yaar she looks like a behenji...Not my type..Just look @ her hair style, dressing sense ,no makeup yuck..& she don't have any class..She is a COMMONER .. & look at us we r rich & we also have a standard..& look @ her She is so blend...I need someone like u not like her...
All this he was saying with a disgusting tone & here she was so heartbroken ..Tears were flowing like rain...He further continued..
M: Aur rahi baat woh I love u ki tou u know soha she had once slapped me ? For ragging her ?
S: Yeah..
M: So all this is for that...I wanted a revenge...& see now I've completed that...MISSION NANDINI MURTHY ACCOMPLISHED ...& I am BORED from her as well so bye bye u COMMONER...
He finished his rubbish talking in a sarcastic tone but hearing the word commoner behenji & bored she was fuming in anger..He has hurt her ego..Now she cannot let him go She SLAPPED HIM tight on his cheek..Manik & soha was shocked they didn't expected this ..
N: Mr Manik Malhotra u were using me?..You played with my emotions ? I will never forgive you...U will have to pay hard for this..I HATE U MR. MANIK MALHOTRA ..I just hate u .. & Soha main tum he apni FRIEND samajhti thi na ? Tou y did u do this to me ? & what about aryamaan ? He was your BOYFRIEND na ? Then ?
S: That's none of ur business...Apne aapko dekha hai kya mirror me? Huh chali ayi soha khurrana ki friend banne ..& aryamaan accha tha but he is kya bolu uske baare me ? he is so annoying.. Kya koi kisiko itna pyaar kartahain ? he is cool,handsome But I thought manik is better choice than him so I left him..
N: I will never forgive u..I will never forgive u both...I hate u Soha...I hate u Manik Malhotra...I just hate u both...& u soha u backstabbed me...Aryamaan is not here now but when he will return from Paris he will talk with u...U both u haven't seen the real nandini murthy yet...In fact no one in India hv seen me...But now u all will face the real.me...Just wait & watch...
She spoked determindly...They were shocked because they didn't knew nandini could b like this...Because they hv always seen her calm ...
Saying this she left running from there just then soha checked the door if she has gone or not...She saw that she had gone then she turned to him ...
S: She is left Manik...
Manik smiles sarcastically & kneeled down while laughing sadly..
SCENE CHANGE
In a apartment a girl was crying her heart out...& that girl was nandini...
.
Nandu's POV
Y did u do this to me Manik ? Kyun kiya tumne aisa ? I had trusted u..Nandini Murthy trusted a guy & also gave him her heart 😭 & It's just next to impossible.. But Maine yeh kiya tha...Main isiliye isiliye I didn't wanted to come this bloody place 😡 ..That's y I didn't wanted to come India...But dad 😭 Because of him I came here...But now I know what I'll have to do next..I so wanted to go back U.S but no no no I won't run like a coward.. I'll take it's revenge.. Manik Malhotra u will hv to pay for this...
POV end
But that wasn't helping her although she was trying to console herself by so many ways...But alas! that wasn't helping her a bit...Only Manik & Soha's tauntfully talks were ringing in her ears...
"OH NANDU BABY U R SO INNOCENT HE TOLD U & U BELIEVED ? YEH TOU KITNI SARI LADKIYO KO I LOVE U BOL CHUKA HAI & U THOUGHT THAT'S TRUE ? "
"MANIK LADKIYO KI KYA CRISIS THI ISS COLLEGE MEIN JO TUMNE ISS 'BEHENJI' KO I LOVE U BOLA ? I KNOW U HAVE BETTER CHOICE UNLIKE HER " Soha's taunts were ringing & here she was crying vigorously...
"SOHA BABY U THOUGHT I'LL STICK TO THIS OLD FASHION QUEEN ? JUST LOOK @ HER FASHION SENSE ..SHE LOOKS LIKE A BEHENJI...JUST LOOK @ HER FACE ,HER DRESSING & HAIR STYLE.. SHE IS JUST A COMMONER " Soon Manik's words also starts haunting her...She was in a vulnerable state but that only hurt her ego..But she she was THE NANDINI MURTHY she was damn adamant to take her revenge...He spoked about her fashion & dressing sense...That gave her support to cope up...She wiped her tears & stands up determinedly...She took her mobile & dialed a number...
Soon the call was taken & a voice his late forty was heard from the other side..
Person: Hello...
Nandini: Hello DAD...
<font size="6">[COLOR=RED]CHARACTER SKETCH[/RED]</font>
<font size="5">Nandini Murthy:</font> Rich ,Powerful, Modern,elegant ,cute & of course beautiful.. She is the daughter of VARUN Murthy..She lives in U.S with her dad..She is 20.After the death of her mom she and her father moved to U.S...There his father did a great work..After some times he became a big businessman of U.S...& had great name both in U.S & other countries...She was a fashion Diva with stunning & hot look...She was calm,Understanding,Loving type person..Her passion was music..So while her studies she took 1 years time from her dad to learn music & complete her passion in India in her dad's college S.P.A.C.E..Her dad was a trustee of that college... It was a multi curricular college... In that she also could study further if she want to...1st she didn't wanted to come to India alone leaving her father alone but he didn't paid any heed to her...So he send her to their country...Her dad was a crazy country lover so she was sent to India's most prestigious & famous academy S.P.A.C.E ..Because of his daughter could cope up with the environment of Space that's y he became a trustee of that college... He loves his daughter like any precious thing ever
..Space was a music academy & her passion was music..So to complete her passion her dad sent her to India.. Although in U.S there were various kinds of renowned institutions but as I told that her dad was a complete country lover & what could b great then his own country... So here she was in India...She was calm type but really adamant & stubborn.. Always run away from the talk of marriage.. She had great knowledge about Indian cultures (all credit goes to her father)So she preferred to stay simple as long as she stays @ India..Her dad had their own Mansion in india because her dad always don't lose any chance to come India if it b any small or big work or meetings...But after having a big mansion still nandu decided to stay in a apartment... She wanted to lead a simple life like others do...So her father brought an 3d apartment for his loving daughter...
<font size="5">VARUN MURTHY :</font> A big businessman Of U.S..A very loving father..Totally country lover..Always wanted to marry her one & only daughter with an Indian boy not a firangi 😉 hehehe.. Have good communications with India's people [businessman & others] Has a business partnership in India ...He secretly had searched a suitable boy in India...He liked his childhood friend's son (intro in story ;) ) for his daughter & they also liked his daughter... So he had given words to his friend about their marriage as soon as his daughter agrees...& they agreed..Because they knew nandu will never say no to him...& Also they knew him too that he will succeed...
<font size="5">MANIK MALHOTRA:</font>Cool,Handsome guy of S.P.A.C.E academy...He is 21..His mom is a trustee of his college.He is a good son...He is the one & only son of NYONIKA MALHOTRA & RAJ MALHOTRA... He is cool,arrogant, stubborn ,Casanova from outside but pure heart & loving from inside... Only his close friends & his parents knew him...Only they knew if manik has hurt someone then there might b some reason of doing that...He had many girlfriends but never crossed his level with anyone... He in fact didn't had kissed anyone... Only hugs & cheek kisses...He really loved Nandini but y he hurt her using her besty that will b revealed soon..
<font size="5">NYONIKA MALHOTRA & RAJ MALHOTRA:</font>They r Manik's parents... They r sweet..Loving & understanding parents...Raj is a big businessman of India & is a very good friend of VARUN MURTHY ..
SOHA KHURRANA: She is sweet hot,preety...In relationship with Aryamaan khanna ...She loves him madly.She is20.She is nandini's best friend in India..& also a good friend of Manik...(guys she is good in my story..I liked her a person so thought to make her good ;) )
ARYAMAAN KHANNA: He is 20.handsome, cool & sweet from heart..He loves his girlfriend like a crazy person... He handles his dad's business along with studies...
& other characters r same as show but cabir is not gay..is married with Navya...Dhrulya & mukbhi r together... Abhi is not sick...He is Maniks cousin brother..Fab 5 knew about nandini & manik ..They liked nandini so nandini was in their good books...Buy they didn't knew about the break up reason of Manik..So they were trying to Solve their problem...
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<font size="5">Hey guys this is Priya..Am a reader of this forum from past few months..I loved to read Manan FF 's ,TS,OS,SS etc..Am a huge fan of the writers...Because I am inspired from all of them...Specially Mawara,Ashna ,Apurva,Kajal & some of my close friends whom I've found in this forum...Writing a TS this idea was popping me from so many days..So decided to penned it down..It could b a dark one but not that much but it will be a romantic one for sure...It will maybe 2 or three shot...I am giving a sneak peak & character sketch for now...But i'll continue the 1st shot by this sneak peaks's story line... By the end of this week my exam will over...Then i'll post the 1st shot...If i get proper response only then i will continue...I am writing this from so many days ...Hope u all will like my idea...If you liked this then do press the like button and do left your comments..I will love to read them..Criticism are always welcome...</font>
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#PRIYA
<font size="6">Tere Hoke Rahenge</font>
A girl wearing a short kurti with a matching leggings was searching a boy in her college premises.. She was damn happy..Because she was going to confess her feelings & also some secrets to HIM...So while searching him when she was passing through a window she heard some giggles...She immediately recognized HIS voice..but wait she also heard some girl's chuckling voice..That voice seems like that if she knew that person..So she peeped inside & what she saw that skipped the ground underneath from her feet..She saw that whom she loved that person was standing with a girl & his hands were wrapped on her waist & that girl's hands were near his neck like they were going to Smooch each other
...Girl's back was seen able to her..So to get a clear view of that girls she starts moving further peeping through the window till then her eyes had started filling with tears but b4 that what she heard that broke her heart into pieces..She heard him saying I LOVE U to that girl.. Tears welled up in her eyes she immediately storm inside kicking the door calling his name loudly MANIK...They both 1st got startled but didn't moved apart...HE gave a annoyed look to her ...
Manik: What the heck NANDINI MURTHY don't u have any manners ? Don't u no k kisike private moments k bich me ana bouhat hi ghalat baat hai ?
She was shocked...She also starts...
Nandini: What r u doing manik with SOHA ?
M: So what ? that's none of ur business...
(She got shattered...) N: So what .Manik ? Kal hi tumne bola tha that u love ME & now same u r telling her ?
she told crying bitterly.. He & Soha starts laughing sarcastically ..Soha moved towards nandini..
Soha: Tch tch tch tch oh my my nandu baby u r so innocent.. He told u & u believed? If u r thinking him that he is that kind of person who will stick only with a girl then u r highly mistaken.. & about that I love u thing manik na jaane kitney ladkiyo ko I love u kaha hai ..& I don't know y he did said to u that ? [she turned to him ] Manik tumne iss behenji ko I love u kyun bola ? Ladkiyo ki kya crisis thi iss college mein ? I know u have good choise unlike her then y?
Then he also starts walking towards nandu & stands right beside soha where she was standing.. Then he puts his hand on soha's waist pulling her towards him...
M: Soha baby u know what this was all a drama...Tum he kya yeh lagtatha I will love this old fashion queen ? Just look at her yaar she looks like a behenji...Not my type..Just look @ her hair style, dressing sense ,no makeup yuck..& she don't have any class..She is a COMMONER .. & look at us we r rich & we also have a standard..& look @ her She is so blend...I need someone like u not like her...
All this he was saying with a disgusting tone & here she was so heartbroken ..Tears were flowing like rain...He further continued..
M: Aur rahi baat woh I love u ki tou u know soha she had once slapped me ? For ragging her ?
S: Yeah..
M: So all this is for that...I wanted a revenge...& see now I've completed that...MISSION NANDINI MURTHY ACCOMPLISHED ...& I am BORED from her as well so bye bye u COMMONER...
He finished his rubbish talking in a sarcastic tone but hearing the word commoner behenji & bored she was fuming in anger..He has hurt her ego..Now she cannot let him go She SLAPPED HIM tight on his cheek..Manik & soha was shocked they didn't expected this ..
N: Mr Manik Malhotra u were using me?..You played with my emotions ? I will never forgive you...U will have to pay hard for this..I HATE U MR. MANIK MALHOTRA ..I just hate u .. & Soha main tum he apni FRIEND samajhti thi na ? Tou y did u do this to me ? & what about aryamaan ? He was your BOYFRIEND na ? Then ?
S: That's none of ur business...Apne aapko dekha hai kya mirror me? Huh chali ayi soha khurrana ki friend banne ..& aryamaan accha tha but he is kya bolu uske baare me ? he is so annoying.. Kya koi kisiko itna pyaar kartahain ? he is cool,handsome But I thought manik is better choice than him so I left him..
N: I will never forgive u..I will never forgive u both...I hate u Soha...I hate u Manik Malhotra...I just hate u both...& u soha u backstabbed me...Aryamaan is not here now but when he will return from Paris he will talk with u...U both u haven't seen the real nandini murthy yet...In fact no one in India hv seen me...But now u all will face the real.me...Just wait & watch...
She spoked determindly...They were shocked because they didn't knew nandini could b like this...Because they hv always seen her calm ...
Saying this she left running from there just then soha checked the door if she has gone or not...She saw that she had gone then she turned to him ...
S: She is left Manik...
Manik smiles sarcastically & kneeled down while laughing sadly..
SCENE CHANGE
In a apartment a girl was crying her heart out...& that girl was nandini...
.
Nandu's POV
Y did u do this to me Manik ? Kyun kiya tumne aisa ? I had trusted u..Nandini Murthy trusted a guy & also gave him her heart 😭 & It's just next to impossible.. But Maine yeh kiya tha...Main isiliye isiliye I didn't wanted to come this bloody place 😡 ..That's y I didn't wanted to come India...But dad 😭 Because of him I came here...But now I know what I'll have to do next..I so wanted to go back U.S but no no no I won't run like a coward.. I'll take it's revenge.. Manik Malhotra u will hv to pay for this...
POV end
But that wasn't helping her although she was trying to console herself by so many ways...But alas! that wasn't helping her a bit...Only Manik & Soha's tauntfully talks were ringing in her ears...
"OH NANDU BABY U R SO INNOCENT HE TOLD U & U BELIEVED ? YEH TOU KITNI SARI LADKIYO KO I LOVE U BOL CHUKA HAI & U THOUGHT THAT'S TRUE ? "
"MANIK LADKIYO KI KYA CRISIS THI ISS COLLEGE MEIN JO TUMNE ISS 'BEHENJI' KO I LOVE U BOLA ? I KNOW U HAVE BETTER CHOICE UNLIKE HER " Soha's taunts were ringing & here she was crying vigorously...
"SOHA BABY U THOUGHT I'LL STICK TO THIS OLD FASHION QUEEN ? JUST LOOK @ HER FASHION SENSE ..SHE LOOKS LIKE A BEHENJI...JUST LOOK @ HER FACE ,HER DRESSING & HAIR STYLE.. SHE IS JUST A COMMONER " Soon Manik's words also starts haunting her...She was in a vulnerable state but that only hurt her ego..But she she was THE NANDINI MURTHY she was damn adamant to take her revenge...He spoked about her fashion & dressing sense...That gave her support to cope up...She wiped her tears & stands up determinedly...She took her mobile & dialed a number...
Soon the call was taken & a voice his late forty was heard from the other side..
Person: Hello...
Nandini: Hello DAD...
<font size="6">[COLOR=RED]CHARACTER SKETCH[/RED]</font>
<font size="5">Nandini Murthy:</font> Rich ,Powerful, Modern,elegant ,cute & of course beautiful.. She is the daughter of VARUN Murthy..She lives in U.S with her dad..She is 20.After the death of her mom she and her father moved to U.S...There his father did a great work..After some times he became a big businessman of U.S...& had great name both in U.S & other countries...She was a fashion Diva with stunning & hot look...She was calm,Understanding,Loving type person..Her passion was music..So while her studies she took 1 years time from her dad to learn music & complete her passion in India in her dad's college S.P.A.C.E..Her dad was a trustee of that college... It was a multi curricular college... In that she also could study further if she want to...1st she didn't wanted to come to India alone leaving her father alone but he didn't paid any heed to her...So he send her to their country...Her dad was a crazy country lover so she was sent to India's most prestigious & famous academy S.P.A.C.E ..Because of his daughter could cope up with the environment of Space that's y he became a trustee of that college... He loves his daughter like any precious thing ever
..Space was a music academy & her passion was music..So to complete her passion her dad sent her to India.. Although in U.S there were various kinds of renowned institutions but as I told that her dad was a complete country lover & what could b great then his own country... So here she was in India...She was calm type but really adamant & stubborn.. Always run away from the talk of marriage.. She had great knowledge about Indian cultures (all credit goes to her father)So she preferred to stay simple as long as she stays @ India..Her dad had their own Mansion in india because her dad always don't lose any chance to come India if it b any small or big work or meetings...But after having a big mansion still nandu decided to stay in a apartment... She wanted to lead a simple life like others do...So her father brought an 3d apartment for his loving daughter...
<font size="5">VARUN MURTHY :</font> A big businessman Of U.S..A very loving father..Totally country lover..Always wanted to marry her one & only daughter with an Indian boy not a firangi 😉 hehehe.. Have good communications with India's people [businessman & others] Has a business partnership in India ...He secretly had searched a suitable boy in India...He liked his childhood friend's son (intro in story ;) ) for his daughter & they also liked his daughter... So he had given words to his friend about their marriage as soon as his daughter agrees...& they agreed..Because they knew nandu will never say no to him...& Also they knew him too that he will succeed...
<font size="5">MANIK MALHOTRA:</font>Cool,Handsome guy of S.P.A.C.E academy...He is 21..His mom is a trustee of his college.He is a good son...He is the one & only son of NYONIKA MALHOTRA & RAJ MALHOTRA... He is cool,arrogant, stubborn ,Casanova from outside but pure heart & loving from inside... Only his close friends & his parents knew him...Only they knew if manik has hurt someone then there might b some reason of doing that...He had many girlfriends but never crossed his level with anyone... He in fact didn't had kissed anyone... Only hugs & cheek kisses...He really loved Nandini but y he hurt her using her besty that will b revealed soon..
<font size="5">NYONIKA MALHOTRA & RAJ MALHOTRA:</font>They r Manik's parents... They r sweet..Loving & understanding parents...Raj is a big businessman of India & is a very good friend of VARUN MURTHY ..
SOHA KHURRANA: She is sweet hot,preety...In relationship with Aryamaan khanna ...She loves him madly.She is20.She is nandini's best friend in India..& also a good friend of Manik...(guys she is good in my story..I liked her a person so thought to make her good ;) )
ARYAMAAN KHANNA: He is 20.handsome, cool & sweet from heart..He loves his girlfriend like a crazy person... He handles his dad's business along with studies...
& other characters r same as show but cabir is not gay..is married with Navya...Dhrulya & mukbhi r together... Abhi is not sick...He is Maniks cousin brother..Fab 5 knew about nandini & manik ..They liked nandini so nandini was in their good books...Buy they didn't knew about the break up reason of Manik..So they were trying to Solve their problem...
~~~~~~~~
<font size="5">Hey guys this is Priya..Am a reader of this forum from past few months..I loved to read Manan FF 's ,TS,OS,SS etc..Am a huge fan of the writers...Because I am inspired from all of them...Specially Mawara,Ashna ,Apurva,Kajal & some of my close friends whom I've found in this forum...Writing a TS this idea was popping me from so many days..So decided to penned it down..It could b a dark one but not that much but it will be a romantic one for sure...It will maybe 2 or three shot...I am giving a sneak peak & character sketch for now...But i'll continue the 1st shot by this sneak peaks's story line... By the end of this week my exam will over...Then i'll post the 1st shot...If i get proper response only then i will continue...I am writing this from so many days ...Hope u all will like my idea...If you liked this then do press the like button and do left your comments..I will love to read them..Criticism are always welcome...</font>
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