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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys this is Eva..And for now am a uninvited guest in this forum..I think nobody knows me so let me introduce myself 😉 My name is Eva & am younger sister of your very own writer riyana7 urf Priya..Actually she is having cold flu because of this weather.. She had told me to write her story further because of her readers..Aur main thehri lazy Lady 😉 Abval number ki alsi..So seedha mana kardiya but when I saw her writing though phn my heart melted..So I changed my plan & decided to right by my own further as she has described the whole concept to me..But time to lagega..Par phirbhi I'll write only the sake of u guys ..So it's a sorry not on behalf of my di..She is really sick ..Pls do pray for her..She is seeking forgiveness from u all for delay..& This is a massage from me to the readers who keep nagging or bash writers or questions them for delay..So it's a request massage because as my sis has became a writer (in my perception) so i know writers don't play with the emotions of their readers..If they have stopped or halted writing for sometimes that means there is some problem in their life..Sabki life me problems hai so it's normal..But question someone like" if u didn't wanted to write then y u started??" it's not right ..Sorry I hurt anyone.. But seriously it's the truth am using her IF I'd for reading stories as I also like Manan madly ..So it caught in my mind so sorry ..
Uff I have talking problem 😉 I don't stop if I start it so Priya too gets irritate by me..OK now enough of talking.. I'll take one more day to write ..So the day after tomorrow I'll update the story..So it will b a collaboration one..Hope u will like it as b4..
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& take a good care of riyana di...get well soon riyana di..
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Tere Hoke Rahenge
Chapter 2A

MaNan left from the room..manik came outside with a smirk & nandu with an angry mood..All this scenario was seen by our evil Cabiraaa ...How he saw this?

FLASHBACK

After the announcement cabir texted mukti..

"Am here now & alone also ..So come quick"

"Yeah am too alone ..nandu has gone to the old library room..So here am coming in 2"

"Whoa what an coincidence"

"What ????"

"Nothing come here soon am waiting"

"yeah"

AFTER 2 MINUTES

MU: Hey cabir...

C: Hi mukti...

Mu: Um...

C: Um...

They were not able to find out how they will start their conversation.. Because except abhi's girlfriend they means fab5 didn't had any bff talk with mukti & so on mukti..They thought for a while..Then suddenly spoked together..

Mu & C: R u thinking the same what am thinking ?

" EMBARRASSED"

Mu & C: They love each other...

"Again"

Mu & C: Manik & Nandini...

"Dimaag ki batti jali...Yes they were here to talk & plan how to sort out their problem"

C: Accha listen I know u r best friend of Nandini & am manik's...Unlogoka dimaag kharab ho gaya hai ...Kya problem hai unlogo me huh ? Pyaar kartehe ek dusre se to..Problem kya hai ?

Mu: Exactly.. Yeh Manik ka dimaag hi kharab ho gaya hai shayad..Kya zaroorat thi soha k sath Milkar woh karneki ?

C: Yes..I know ..I am damn sure there will b some reason otherwise he wouldn't had done such stupidity ...& that too with nandini..Whom he love the most ? Yeh dono bouhat hi stubborn hai...

Mu: Correct ..If someone is going on wrong path then other should rectify that person but no..They won't do this because of their so called EGO...Aur yeh manik is wrong he should seek forgiveness from her yaar..

C: Yes..Now we will have to do it together..

Mu: Yes cabir Me & abhi owe to them yaar...

C: Oye me too...So I am there for Manik & u r for nandini..

Mu: Of course... But 1st we will have to find the reason y manik did this...

C: Manik to seedhe muh batayega nehi...Tou ...

Mu: Tou...

They thought for a while & excitedly screams..

Mu & C: SOHAAA 😃

Mu: Yes..Only she can tell us the truth..I know her she won't do like this to nandini ...She was our friend yaar.. am sure there must b some reason..

C: OK so we will have to follow her & manik..

Mu: Yes...So ek kaam kartihu..Main soha ko follow karungi aur tu Manik ko ..k ?

C: OK ..Done...

Mu: Look there is soha (She saw soha was talking with someone on the phone in some safe distance from them)

Mu: Soha to milgayi but manik kaha hai ?

C: Don't worry I saw him going towards the old library room & nandini bhi waha hai 😉 sooo 😉 What is going b/w them ? 😉

Mu: Owww...Soo that's y u were saying what a coincidence right 😉

C: Correct samjhi balikey 😉

Mu: Balikey like seriously cabir ? hehehe

C: Hahaha

they high 5-ed while laughing..

C: Accha now stop laughing & follow her..Pata karo whom she is talking & am going to find what is Manik hiding from us...

Mu: OK...All the best...

C: To u too 😉

They left ..Mukti for soha & cabir for Manik...

END OF FLASHBACK

Cabir was smiling evilly & texted his partner In crime..

"Oye muku waha ka kya haal hai ? Kuch pata chala ?"

"Nehi yaar It was aryamaan "

"Toh soha ne manik or nandini ke baareme kuch discuss kiya kya ?"

"Nehi cabiraa 😔 Wohi baby when will u come ? Have u taken ur dinner ? What will u take in lunch ? I am missing u ..pls come back soon blah blah blah...Typical girlfriend 😉 "

"Hehehehehe lunch abhi aaya nehi aur kya lega woh bhi puch rahi thi seriously ? "

"Seriously "

"Hahahahaha"

"Hehehehehehe"

"Accha muku band kaar hasi..Sun ab soha se ya manik se hi pata karna padega warna mission MaNan milap band.. "

"Haan yar seriously.. Kuch to karna padega..Let's beat it "

now she spoke with an exited tone & cabir sighs..

"Now u r talking like old lady bheem 😉 "

"Accha chuck it ab bta waha ka kya hot scene hai [;)) "

She spoked excitedly & here he in return gave an evil grin..

"Arey yaha to pura scene hi hot hai 😉 ..U know what they KISSED 😃 .."

"WHATTT 😲 ?"

SCENE CHANGE

Nandu is trying to call muku but her phn is unavailable & here manik is also trying to find cabir ...

N: Ufff yeh mukti kahan chaligayi ? Phn bhi unavailable hai...Lagtahain Abhi se baatein karrahihai...😡 ufff yeh ladki bhi na..


M: Cabiiirrr...Kaha hai yeh joker ?

Suddenly he saw nandini coming from other side with an angry mood looking @ her phn...He smiled seeing her pouty face & quickly changed his expression... He then saw that nandu was watching him with moist eyes...He understood that nandu till now haven't believed him..Now he was in damn problem...

Nandu was walking slowly towards him with moist eyes & he was just standing at his place...Nandu was in 10 step distance from him then agayi SOHA...He sighs..& starts smiling & they hugged...Seeing this nandu's heart again broke into many pieces..

SCENE CHANGE

"What? Kya baat karrahahai 😲 😃 Hawww cabir kisi ki privet moment witness karna its not good 😉 Tune nehi dekha na 😉Jaldi bata cabiraa 😉 "

"Nehi yar itna bhi kamina nehi hu Jo yeh sab dekhunga 😭 😉 "

"I know it yaar I was just teasing u..Accha chod (she was talking in phn with him just then while talking mukti saw soha was hugging manik & nandu was standing in front of them with a disappointing and a damn angry or u can say with a jealous look...

"O Teri 😲 ..Uski to mai 😡 "

"Kya hua lady bheem ? Godzilla ko dekhliya kya ? 😉 "

"Shut up cabir..Kabhi to serious ho .."

"Ok bol "

" cabiraa u know what that witch is hugging manik in front of nandu 😡"

"What ? r u saying ? 😲 "

"Yes yaar...Tu kaha hai come here in XYZ place am here ..Jaldiii "

"Ok coming in 5"

SCENE CHANGE

S: Owww baby where r u ? I was missing u...(after breaking the hug)

M: Um..Soha I was also missing u..Accha let's go in some private place ..U no a lot of peoples r around here (looking @ nandu & after hearing this nandu fumes in anger)

Nanduz POV

What the hell 😡 a lot of people around here? is she kidding me ? Iam feeling like to kill both of them with a sword...& she was hugging him ? Damn y am behaving like this..Chuck it nandu just ignore them..

end of POV

Saying this she starts walking after taking 3 step suddenly her phone starts ringing & a romantic guitar tune starts playing (guys Manan wala remember? o yaara song me manik sang fr nandu that tune) hearing the tune manan's eyes became teary ..they goes in their past memory lane ..

FLASHBACK

Manik was in bad mood..He was sitting in jamming room..Nandu was searching him when she found him she back hugged her& he smiles..

N: Manik y r u sad ?

M:chodo I don't wanna talk with u (faking anger..hearing this she made a o shape)

N: Hawww Maine kya kiya ?

M: Ekbhi song full complete nehi hua & on top of that Tumne muje yesterday wala dose bhi nehi diya 😉

N: Hawww besharam 😳 Accha chodo woh sab koi idea aya ?

M: aahan no 😔

N: Accha do 1 thing tumne mujhe bola tha na that when u see me in front of u lyrics apne aap bahar aajate hai 😉 aur ekbaar hua bhi tha ? Remember my bucket list wishes ? 😃

M: Yes 😃 U know what nandu u r my savior ..Ummah (saying this he kissed her cheek & she blushed 😳 & he gave a smirk 😉 kyun ki mouke pe chouka jo mardiya 😉 )

M: OK let me try this...

He thinks for sometime & starts tuning his guitar.. When he was going to start the song nandu stopped him..

N: Manik stop stop stop..

M: What happened ?

N: Pls ek baar phirse yeh tune play karo na I wanna record it..

M: Y ? (he gave a confuse look )

N: Because I want to make this as my phn ringtone..This tune describes us..This tune is ours..It will always remind me of urs.So whenever this tune will ring I will only remember u..So that our love 😃

Manik was really touched By this new invention of hers..He just hugged her & she too reciprocated ...

End of flashback

Manik's POV

Yes this ringtone is ..She has still this in her phn..Am feeling so happy but nandu sorry I can't help it 😭 ..

End of POV

They got their senses when for 2nd time her cell starts ringing...nandu realized this and came in the world..Manik was looking at her only Soha saw this & she shook him because he was only looking at her continuously...

S: Baby w8 r u doing here ? Let's go this commoner is disturbing us by this stupid ringtone of hers..

Nandu again got angry hearing this word..She picked the phn..

N: Yes dad..

Nandu's dad: Beta I want to tell u something (in a restless tone)

N: Dad..dad..What's wrong ? r u OK na? BP phirse badh gaya? Aur suddenly what do u wanna tell ? What happened? U just wait am coming now..

She was panicking all this while..Manik also heard her what she was saying..He too gets scared & stayed in the same place where he was..Saying this she starts to leave but her dad stopped her..

Varun murthy: Arey nehi nehi beta ..Haan woh blood pressure low ho gaya tha now it's OK ..Sid (his PA) gave me the medicines..

She sighed & at that moment mukti & cabir stands in front of her..She waved @ them & the also did that..MukBir smirks seeing manik..Nandu again starts her convo...

N: Thank god..Now tell me y r u so restless?

V: Woh...Woh...Am..am..Sorry beta 😔

N: Dad y r u stammering? & sorry for what?

Her dad was saying something to her but she couldn't paid any heed to his words because her only concentration was on soha who was flirting with manik ..She saw this through notice board glass which was open & they were visible on that..& here mukbir gave a wink to each other...She again got hell angry & what she heard next left her spellbinding shocked 😲

V: & princess last but not the least truth which I've hiding it till now is that I'VE SELECTED A BOY FOR U & U R GOING TO ENGAGED WITH HIM NEXT WEEK THAT MEANS AFTER 4 DAYS

N: Whattt ? 😲 (she shouted & mukbir along with manik & soha looked @ her keenly)

Mukti shook her as she wasn't getting any positive vibes by her talking.. Nandu's eyes became teary & manik got scared..He got hell worried..

N:Dad what r u saying ?(in a soft tone) Dad apne mujhse puchna zaroori nehi samjhe? Kya apne mujhe puchneke liye important nehi samjhey?

V; No..no beta it's not ..I knew k tum shaadi se duur bhagti ho but it's your time to get settled with your new family..

N: But dad itna bada decision mujhse bina bataye le li aur meri SHAADI tay kardi 😭

MukBirMan shouted in unison: SHAAADI?😲

Everyone got an heart attack & manik he was surely dead..Mukbir were numb & shocked because their MaNan Milap Mission ko todneki dushman bangaye nandu ki papa 😉

V: But beta samjha karo..It's the best time & I bet this will b the best decision of mine which till now I've taken..And only u will tell Me this..Do mark my word..

N: But dad..

V: Beta I've seen his family also they r great..U can continue ur studies further after marriage if u want to..& also they don't have any problem with ur lifestyle also..So don't worry..They r very humble dear..They will love u as their daughter.. Pls maan jao beti..It's for your own good..

She was crying listening her father..

N: OK dad if u want this only then alright.. Am ready for this..For this...this MARRIAGE..(Another shocking news for everyone) I know dad u will do whatever is good for me..I trust in your choice..So am IN..Do tell them..

,her father's happiness knew no bounds..

V: Thank u beta ..Trust me u will never ever feel dissatisfaction with my decision.. Am proud of u beta..God bless u..& ya am coming on the day b4 your engagement ..I'll have to do the preparation na? 😉
OK now am hanging up I'll have to tell them also..Once again tysm for believing me..

Saying this he cut the call happily & here she was blank & mukti burst upon her..

M: Princess do u even know what u have done? Y did u agreed for this marriage ? 😡..& After 4 days ? Seriously? Itni short time pe ? 😡

N: I didn't have any choice muku..Till now he haven't asked one thing from me today when he is asking something then how could I denied him? If this decision of mine gives him happiness then it's right only..Aur waise bhi abhi toh kuch baccha hi nehi hai meri life me..So I had to do this..

Manik's eyes were also teary...

His POV

So finally she got a chance to move on..Now she will also could move on frm me 2..So it's good for her & only I want her happiness.. Nothing else...

End of POV

He then looked @ nandu & she also turned and saw him..They had an eye lock..Manik & soha left from there...Cabir also left from there as he was getting missed calls from navya..

OUTSIDE

M: Thank u so much soha for ur help..I can't even describe what u have done for the sake of friendship..Thank u so much..I'll always owe to u for this help..

S: It's OK manik..But pls tell me what is the reason of ur this kind of behavior which left me breaking my friendship with her?

M: Actually mera shaadi tay ho chuka hai...

S: What??? 😲 pehle nandu aur now tumhara bhi ?

M: Nehi it had happened b4 that's y I made this plan with u..

S: Then y didn't u tell this to her? She was madly in love with u & as I can see u too...Then y?

M: Only for this..Yes..If I told this to her then she would told me to accept the proposal for my parents happiness..But andar hi andar she would have been broken..Woh mujhe aise nehi dekhsakti thi...So I wanted her to hate me because only that could help her forgetting me only 😭 & for that I hurt her so immensely..

He started crying.. & soha starts consoling him.

S: Its OK manik..I don't no y god is doing this with u both...Its hard for someone to give pain to his/her lover...God bless u both..U have to b strong Manik for her..

M: Yes (wiped his tears) ..I will thank u once again..

S: hey anytime..OK bye I'll have to leave.

M: yeah bye..

He starts walking only then he got a call from his mom..he removed his corner tears then answered the call.

M: Yeah mom..tell me.

Nyo: Manik 😃

M: Yes mom tell me y R u so happy ?

Ny: it's because beta they accepted the proposal.. Yes NEXT WEEK IS UR ENGAGEMENT..IN 4 DAYS U R GOING TO ENGAGED..

M: (he sighed) Next week aur mera engagement 😭 😔 OK..😔

N: Beta aren't u happy?

M: And y r u feeling so ? 😔

N: I know beta u r not happy with this but samjho beta ur dad's friend is very humble..We personally know him dear..It will b a good relationship further trust me..

M: Yes mom I trust u .that's y I agreed with u both..I know whatever u will choose it will b good for me..

N: But beta don't u wanna see her ? Ekbar dekhto lete ?

M: Have u seen her?

N: Yes..

M: Then am OK..I'll meet her final on engagement day only... 😔

Ny: OK as u say..

Seeing this she cut the call ..Here nandu starts leaving for her home & he too starts going to his car for leaving home..

Now here all this conversation was again heard by CABIR ..He was just damn shocked to react..First nandini' s marriage now his..

Cabir's POV

When I end up my talk with navya I heard manik's voice.. He was saying thank u to someone when I saw the person my blood started boiling...I saw soha there..But when I heard about HIS ENGAGEMENT & the shocking news my mind just blew away from my head..Then after hearing his truth I got to know his point of hurting nandu..It's not right to hurt ur love ones..but I think it was only for nandu.. But the thing is same he hurted nandu for no reason...So I quickly called mukti..By gods grace she was in premises only.So she quickly came to me..I told her all & here this lady bheem was damn furious to know that her friend her soul sister has cried for this reason..She was about to pounce on manik for his behavior...But thank god I calmed her down..After lots of calming session I sent her to home & I decided to go on manik's place to talk with him..

End of pov

But when he was going he got a call from navya..That they both will have to leave for Delhi as her mother is not well & she wished to see them both..So unwillingly he had to go with her..& here mukti was with nandu..It had been 3 days both MaNan haven't gone in college after the revelation of Their engagement date..Nandu cried silently when muku wasn't with her..& here Manik was also sad..Sometimes he too cried..Finally cabir came from Delhi as now she was f9 enough to handle..So he decided to confront him ..So he directly after dropping navya he came to Malhotra mansion...

AT MALHOTRA MANSION

Manik was sitting in his room with his guitar.. He was roughly playing the guitar & tears were flowing from his eyes..He was remembering his days with nandu..Only her wedding thing was running through his mind..Suddenly cabir came & pat his shoulder..& he quickly rubbed his tears away..

He looked @ him..& cabir sad beside him..

M: Cabir tu kab aya..Aur navya ki mom kaisi hai ?

c: Haan ab vo thik hai...

Both were silent for sometime..Cabir stand up & turn to a photo frame which was containing MaNan's smiling pic..It was a secret 1..Only they knew about this.. without seeing him cabir starts speaking...

C: See manik don't give pain urself & her also..Aisi kya majburi thi yeh sab karneka ?

Manik got a mild heart attack hearing him..then without any eye contact he starts blabbering..

M:What do u mean by hurting myself & her?U know that she is not Mu type..So I liked soha then I moved on from her..

Hearing this cabir got damn angry..

C: O just stop it manik just stop ur shits..What do u think u will hide this from me? U can deceive ur soul but not me..I know u from in and out..If u r not wrong then y u reacted when nandini talked about her engagement? & y r u crying? Tell me just tell me the bloody reason..😡

He was looking here & there..Cabir couldn't control himself & after getting up blurred sarcastically..

C: Oh sorry whom am asking..The Manik Malhotra..& tujhse janke bhi abhi kya karunga jab sach mujhe pehle hi pta chal gaya tha... 😡

Now it fell like a bomb on manik & he was numb..

M: W..what ? r u saying?

C: Yes I know u r getting engaged in 2 days..Only tomorrow's day is left for the event..😭

M: Tujhe pata tha ? kaise ?

C: When u were talking with soha in college after talking with navya I heard everything.. Now I want to know this from ur mouth so just tell me...[calmly]

He lowers his gaze & tears started welled up again & he after told everything to him.
He was crying badly cabir was consoling him..He was thinking how to reunite his friend with her beloved.. Then he decided to talk with manik's parents...& mukti to talk with nandu's parents...

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Guys just wait for sometime..It's coming..

B4 u guys starts bashing me for making a mistake in manik's writing outfit description let me clarify It's Off brown maybe 😉 galtise white likhdi thi 😉
Maaf kardena 😉

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Chapter 2B

Next Morning

Cabir has stayed @ Malhotra mansion last night because of Manik...

He came down after fresh n up ..He saw nyonika was checking wedding cards...all things...

They saw him & they wished each other happily...Cabir was like a second son for manik's parents like manik..So he too call them mom dad like manik...[FYI his parents r dead that's y they love him like manik]

C:Mom yeh kya manik ki engagement bhi tay kardi aur apne mujhe bataya bhi nehi ? Aur agar kal mujhe pata nehi chalta to main to nehi janpata yeh Sab...

Nyo: Arey beta sb bouhat jaldi jaldi hogaya na isiliye..

C: OK..but tell me something ladki kaisi hai?
aur manik ko pasand aya ?

Ny: Arey beta jab dekhega tab na pasand ayega..aur nam bhi nehi pucha..

C: Kyaaa 😲 Saadi kRne wala hai aur naam tak nehi pucha ? I know usne kaha hoga I trust ur choice blah blah blah..

Ny: Hehehe correct..

C: BTW ladki ki naam kya hai ?

Ny: Arey naam kya photo hi dekhlo ..invitation ki card p hi chapvayi hai...

C: Wah kya baat ..Ab name k jagah photo 😉 kitna 1st hogayi hai generation😉

saying this he looked @ the girls photo & Eureka BOOM..His mouth shut open...He was shocked to the core...

C: O Teri 😲 NANDINI 😲

Ny: Haan uski name nandini murthy hai...Bouhat hi pyaari bacchi aur dhusri ladkiyo se bouhat alag hai 😊

Cabir's heart was dancing with joy..Because bina kaam k faal Jo milgaya use 😉 He was just grinning.. Nyonika was confused..

Ny: Beta y r u smiling ?

C: Mom apne manik ko card dikhayi hai kya?

N: Nope..He told me he will directly meet her in engagement day only...😔

Dimaag ki batti jali 😉

C: Boom..Then u will have to something for me..Don't ask y..Just don't show him this card till engagement..😉 Or u will have to promise that u won't tell him her name & won't let anybody tell him..OK bye..See u ..

He told her in one go & left hurriedly ..

After coming College.. He called mukti & here mukti was also calling him in the same time..But only they found it busy..They called each other again n again..Mukti got frustrated..

Mu: Yeh cabir bhi na ek second navya se baat na kara to iska jaan hi nikaal jata hai...

When she was thinking then she got a call from cabir she forgot what was happening so she again was exited to tell him something...

Mu; Thank god u called me..Cabir I wanna tell u a dhamakedar news 😃

C:😃 aur mujhe bhi...Accha pehle tu bata...

Mu: OK u no nandini ki jiske sath shaadi hone wali hai WO koun hai ? 😃

C: Manik 😃

Mu: Hawww tujhe kaise pata 😲

Muku shocked 😲 cabiraa rocked 😉

He told her everything how he got to know & she was very happily listening all..

C:OK now tell me how u got to know?

Mu: Arey buddhu nandu ne batayi thi na uncle aaj hi aNe waley hai because tomorrow is the engagement..

C: Yes..

Mu: So when I got the chance I asked him about the boy & eureka I got to know it's manik only 😃 & on top of that nandu doesn't know his name yet..

C: Arey yaar yaha bhi same haal hai...😃

Mu: So let's don't tell them now..Kal bouhat maza ayega 😉

C: Haan...

NEXT MORNING

THE ENGAGEMENT DAY...

IN MALHOTRA MANSION



@6:30 pm (guys I won't give the morning details ..Photos search karte katre am tired..Am sorry)

All were checking all things..Nyo was giving orders to the butlers to keep all the stuffs in car properly ..Cabir came there with abhi & dhruv ..(guys b4 u get confused let me clarify cabir & mukti has told f4 everything)

C: Hey mom where is the dulhe raja 😉

Nyo; Woh upar hai...Cabir beta jaldi se jaake dekh kya woh ready hua ya nehi ? We will have to leave @ 7..

C: OK..Bhailog (abhi & dhruv )u wait here I am coming with him..
Saying this he went upstairs & saw manik was sitting in his bed taking a photo frame in his hand & was sad..

It didn't took & time to know that it was MaNan only..Cabir smiles..

C: Manik Don't b sad yaar..Jo hogaya so hogaya ab mood kharab karke koi fayda nehi.. Am sure today will b one of your best days 😉

manik was confused..

M: Mtlb ?

C: Kuch nehi Kuch nehi..Yeh le apna outfit pehenle..

Saying this he handed over his White Sherwani with maroon pajama...



He jelled his hairs upwards.. He was looking like a Greek god...

Then cabir escorted him from his room & came downstairs.. Still manik was sad but after seeing his mom & dad he smiled faintly...

Soon they left for murthy mansion..

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MEANWHILE IN MURTHY MANSION



everything was in hustle & bustle ..All were busy...Guests had started coming from quite a while ago..Nandu was in her room..Mukti & navya ws their to see her..

She was sad..Because whom she is gonna engaged she didn't knew him properly & on top of that she haven't got over yet from manik..after remembering him she again gets angry how he ditched her..Soon she was back to the world by the shaking..She heard she & navya was blabbering something..

MukYa: Wow nandu u r looking super duper stunning.. Ladke walo ki toh hosh hi udd jayenge 😉 Aaj toh dulhe raja gaye 😉 I swear if he didn't bold out by this LOOK then do change our name..

She was all looking downwards.. For a second of then she didn't looked herself in mirror..When she looked herself in mirror when muku hold her chin to look @ she was very impressed by the makeover..





She was wearing a Velvet fabric Maroon color lehenga choli...Her belly was half exposed as the upper part top was till her half belly..Her skirt was making her ethereal beautiful with matching earrings &other jewelers...

She gave a faint smile to them & they gave a victory grin..Suddenly nandu felt that her heart was pounding fast..She could feel Manik near her but she pushed the thought aside...

And till then Malhotra family also reached @ murthy mansion.. All were highly impressed by the look of Murthy Mansion.. It's interior design was just complimenting the house more...Soon Mr.Varun Murthy came & Greeted them wholeheartedly... Manik came ahead & touched his hands & he smilingly blessed him...Soon they were inside..Manik's heart were thumping so fast that it will came out very soon...He was feeling very uneasy...Soon pundit asked to call the soon to be bride downstairs.. Nandu's father asked a girl to call her..

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INSIDE NANDU'S ROOM

NavNiTi were chatting on some random topics..Soon the girl knocked & asked them to came downwards..

NavTi grinned evilly & took her to downwards.. When they were going to turn her to the stairs from there she could see them (groom family)clearly,..So when she was about to turn mukti whispered near nandu's ear..

M: Princess get ready for the biggest surprise & shock of ur life 😉

She couldn't get her so confusingly she turnd & HOLY CRAP ..

Which she saw left her dumbfounded.. Shocked...

N: AIYAPPA 😲

Soon Her father saw her on the top he declared happily ..

V: There is my doll 😃

All looked @ that direction but manik didn't look upwards..His gaze was still in down because he didn't cared.

Cabir saw this & smirked..

C: Arey mere bhai Zara teri LAILA ko to dekh..Kitni Stunning lagrahihai (still not paying any heed & he continued smirkingly) TERI NANDU 😉

Hearing TERI NANDU manik was shocked 😲 he looked @ cabir shockingly & he nods..Then he slowly looked upwards & HE WAS DEAD..b4 his dead only a Word came from his Mouth ..

M: NANDINI ? 😲
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Hayeee Meri khuda Meri toh haath hi dukhgaye 😭 Oh god Itni badiii 😲 Am literally dead by now...Seriously Now I got it how much painful experience is this for the writers & for my sister too 😭 I pity u di 😉 Haan di se yaad aaya..Good news for The readers..My di is lil well now 😃 all credits goes to u all guys..Next part wedding 😉 I don't know what I've written.. This part is completely by me guys so if u didn't liked it then don't bash my di...She has nothing to do with this chapter.. Sorry I broke my promise ..but it has some reason also pictures dhundte dhundte thak gayi...I don't know if the pictures has uploaded or not 😔
If not then do forgive me as I am a guest so I'll gave to go..Do give your feedbacks..I'll b more then happy by reading them 😳 But for now am feeling very sleepy..So stay blessed & do pray for me & Priya..

Love u all

Priya & Eva 😊 ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
awesm story line ...hshaha jor kaaa jhatkaaa hayeee joro se laga.update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
tnx u tnx u tnx u so much...4 this long update...
wo bhi ek nahi doe doe update...tnx u so much...
manan takdeer ek7 ha toe wo log alag kasa ho shakta ha???
I'm just imaging kya halat hogi manan jab engagement venue mae ek dusre ko dakha hoga...
plz next part asap...
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#58
Awwweeesssooommeee

But
confusingg
Manik ese kese Sadi k liye Man gaya agar wo Nandu ko itna chahata tha???? Nandu sadi k liye mani bcoz Manik n cht kia but Manik kiyu sadi k liye mana??? Agar wo Nandu naa hui hoti tooo???
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#59
Manik neeeddd to learn a lesssooonn wo esse kese sadi k liye man gaya Nandu ko itna hurt kia
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
awesome update
loved it
good one
amazing
cont soon

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