first of All I want to say something about ur note u gave at start of update, how kindly u asked for criticism. I realy appriciate ur kindness. How nicely u asked people that they should criticise but they should not jump at character. I realy like ur patience. I realy respect ur words. A story was very close to my heart. But one day a reader said that she didn't like something and writer replied her very rudely. Even she said her to get lost from her page. That time I didn't give any response but from that day she lost her respect in my eyes. I didn't read any update after that day. Bcz I can't appriciate her work. Sorry may be u will be thinking how rude I'm but seriously on that day I felt she doesn't deserve mine even single word and I left her page and that story. I just lost her respect as well as charm of her story.
And about ur update that was amazing mindblowing
I realy liked that part where u described small small patches of their lovely memories.
At the end manik's sorry speech that was amazing work. U realy did an amazing job.
One thing that I loved the most in this update were manik's words" u should not forgive me bcz I want to earn ur forgiveness I want to earn ur trust I will make u fall in love again" That was definately a deep thinking.
I will wait for next update.
Edited by Sofiafarooq - 9 years ago
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