#4 Devil's Bride manan ff part 42 in thread 5 link is on pg 1 - Page 90

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Posted: 9 years ago



Thanks for pm.dear

Amazing amazing update dear...
No word left to praised you. ...it was marvels. .
The way manik remember those beautiful moments of his life
was a peak of the sanity. ...and then realizations of his mistakes.
It going side by side. .and I feel like I am seeing him how sorry he is..
The way he chose for her forgiveness to earned was the highest level of today's chapter. ..amazing amazing thought. .šŸ‘šŸ‘.
. He replaced his dream too her beautiful dream of hospital. .and orphanage. .she was stunned to see this. .
Now I am image what will see do ..how she will handle his apologize face. .because he hurt her beyond repair. .
The way you write his realization was a great point of your amazing writing. Now I would love to see how she will react...
I want manik feel her each pain ...what was she going through. .
And now the biggest threats of his life ..her pregnancy. .
This was a much awaited chapter and you nailed it. .šŸ‘šŸ‘ā­ļø.
Very very beautifully written. .choice of words was amazing.
Looking forward to seeing her reaction to his apologies. .
Please try to update soon. ..
I know you will be busy in the wedding. .but please try early ..
Thanks for sharing this awesome chapter.


Stay blessed dear..





Thanks.




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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...so Manik apologised but yes hope not too late..lets c . hw Mandu reacts..pls update soon tx
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey dear..
aftr a long tym uh updated..
a big ty fr updating i always keep waiting
fr ur update it was an amazing update šŸ‘
i love the way uh portrait the manik character...n
ofcourse nandini too 😊 tysm dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
After reading this chap, can't wait for the next. Happy realization Manik! Felt bad n you've nicely penned it. Thank you n update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Omg..!!!manik confessed it in front of whole media ina confress...srsly man...are aisa cliff pe chod diya ???wat will be nandinis reaction...???
Continue soon..plz this time dont make us wait tooo long...hehehe..just kidding take ur time n ipdate...but lamba haan...
Loved it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb
Finally manik confessed his feelings

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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome
finally he apologized
waiting for nandu's reaction
waiting for the next part
thanx for the pm😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update. Manik's POV was beautifully penned. The way u penned this update was mindblowing. Hats off.this update showed ur writing skills.šŸ‘ Keep up the good work.the way u penned Manik flashback of their moments and his reaction at present for that memos was phenomenal.manik's state was well written. Manik and the small girl's talk was blissful. The way manik shocked nandini by news of construction of hospital was amazing. Most awesome part of the update the confession of manik was out of world.each and every word was beautifully penned. His words of "earn it" was phenomenal.finally he said those magical words to nandini.Totally an mindblowing update. Eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon.thanks for pm.
Keep writing.
Stay blessed😊😊
Edited by archu_asok - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update...
I just loved it...
When Manik was reminiscing his memories with nandini... It was just amazing...
Finally Manik realized and accepted his mistake in front of the whole world... He want to fulfill nandini's dream...
It was literally penned very beautifully...I just loved it...
Thanks for updating... And thanks for the pm...
Update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
It was an amazing update...I was also among the silent reader till date I started reading your story..I read it in one go...u r such an amazing writer..bow down..
I love your writing and story lineup..
I created account on India forum today to read your story further..Or else I won't create any account..so your writing is the reason I am here appreciating your story

Stay blessed always...
And have an awesome year ahead...

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