#4 Devil's Bride manan ff part 42 in thread 5 link is on pg 1

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NAVYA64

@NAVYA64

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Posted: 9 years ago

#921

awesome update

loved it

good one

emotional ending

cont soon

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nanoNikki

@nanoNikki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#922

Nice update...plz continue soon waiting very eagerly for next update...

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richa20298

@richa20298

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Posted: 9 years ago

#923

Amazing

Update loved it

Waiting for manao session...

Come soon

Waiting

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pinkypiku

@pinkypiku

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Posted: 9 years ago

#924

Wow. Wat a heart wrenching updatereally ab. Chahe nandu Han bole ya na wo dono hi case m right hogiclappings for u girl. kya awesome likha hai

bas Ho sake to be thoda sa early next tym if possible

baki. Wah ji wah tussi to Kamal kar dita

take care

and keep goin

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Mou Deb

@moudeb

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Posted: 9 years ago

#925

it just amazing updet dear.
u penned it very nicely.all flashback you added.
this apology part are just awsome.
i am happy finaly manik realize his life big mistake.
but the way manik confetion it just so lovely.
plz dear next part continue soon.

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Vandyandy

@Vandyandy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#926

Hi Aashna

Thks for the PM

Ufff !!! So much pain, Manik feeling guilty for his actions.

The damage was already done by him

It will be really very difficult for him to gain her love.

He broke her beyond repair.

All the good , mischievous memories he spend with nandani were flashing in his mind.

Humesha Jo dekhta hai woh sach ho essa Nahi hota.

One has to be sure about the doubt , n then take any action.

But Manik , hmmm !!!! What to say abh it will be tough.

Jabh woh nandani se baat Karne ghar aaya tha, toh baat kar lets, ussi wakt sabh clear hojata.

Bcoz of his past everything was ruined.

Getting peace at the orphanage won't help.

Good advice the little girl gave him, which in turn was also of nandu's advice.

I'm speechless , the way Manik said everything to nandani .

Infront of the press, business tycoons, one himself, it's not easy.

But he was firm on his task.

Accepting his deeds, mistake, crime whatever u say in front of the world, and when u r very popular is a big thing

Everything he said was commendable, felt sorry for him.

But it was high time he did this.

Good that he wants to earn her love , her forgiveness, her care.

Superb update

Just outstanding.

Waiting for Nandani's reaction.

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Arti Bhardwaj

@saiaarti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#927

Awww.

Feeling very sad and pity for manik. But it's all his fault. He has realised it but still as he said sorry is not enough.

He need to earn the forgiveness and better to not to break Nandini's heart again.

Now waiting for Nandini reaction. Don't know how she will react. Having doubt dat may be she won't forgive him dis time. But I m hopingbfor a happy eanding so just wish she will forgive.

Also waiting when Manik will come to know abt the truth of Nandini's pregnancy. Then he will realise his one more mistake I.e accusing Nandini for trying his baby to abort.

Very nice chapter.

Heart full sorry by Maink.

Nicely wrote.

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piyu008

@piyu008

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Posted: 9 years ago

#928

Manik apologising publicly nice move. .

Hope manik soon get to know about nandu's complication. .

Update soonish

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Angel

@asangel

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Posted: 9 years ago

#929

Awsmmm update!!!!! wonderfull!!!
But u never pm me since many updates..I always cmmnt on ur stry yaar...u can chk it... :(
but plzz do pm me yaar...i love ur stry...