#4 Devil's Bride manan ff part 42 in thread 5 link is on pg 1 - Page 92

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finally manik said sorry to her... schi now can't wait for next part...jldi update it...

awesome ...the apology part was superb it was much needed fr a fresh start... it was not easy to do...
nandini will surly give him a chance... but the fact is she don't have that much time. let's see when manik will know the truth about hr pregnancy what will be the reaction... cont...soon
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Originally posted by: Sofiafarooq

first of All I want to say something about ur note u gave at start of update, how kindly u asked for criticism. I realy appriciate ur kindness. How nicely u asked people that they should criticise but they should not jump at character. I realy like ur patience. I realy respect ur words. A story was very close to my heart. But one day a reader said that she didn't like something and writer replied her very rudely. Even she said her to get lost from her page. That time I didn't give any response but from that day she lost her respect in my eyes. I didn't read any update after that day. Bcz I can't appriciate her work. Sorry may be u will be thinking how rude I'm but seriously on that day I felt she doesn't deserve mine even single word and I left her page and that story. I just lost her respect as well as charm of her story.

And about ur update that was amazing mindblowing
I realy liked that part where u described small small patches of their lovely memories.
At the end manik's sorry speech that was amazing work. U realy did an amazing job.

One thing that I loved the most in this update were manik's words" u should not forgive me bcz I want to earn ur forgiveness I want to earn ur trust I will make u fall in love again" That was definately a deep thinking.
I will wait for next update.

well can't say anything about that writer some times readers are rude too i did the same with that who pointed a finger on my character her other comments didn't irked but that character one she has no right to point any finger on my character
or your not at all rude i can understand if we can't share our views on the story than we shouldn't read it what is the harm in good criticism it can help us we can improve but i just found forums writers aren't good with criticism we are not some god or anything who can't commits a mistake if u like that's the wrong thing i or some other writer shouldn't show do share with them don't know about others but feel free to do with me i am just trying to improve myself or a good criticism can help so please help me or yeah its just a start of his journey long way to go for malhotra bhot papad belne h usey

From where to start..
I am also little confused like Manik..
The beautiful memories of past was so fresh..
But the tragedy brutal act of Manik was really painful..
Public apology maybe it can be work..
But what about Nandini..
Her pregnancy complications..
Again u ended in a cliff..
Tanq for pm..
Eagerly waiting..
Continue soon..

Love
Suji :-)

nice update.
know finally realizing all his mistakes.
waiting for when manik comes to know about her pregnancy Truth.
waiting for next part.
continue soon.

Fabulous update dear
Apology part was awesome
U described every emotion in a correct manner:)
For that from my side a standing ovation to u :)
Continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next update:)

nice update
finally manik confess everything
it is actually very hard for him and nandani too
I know manik was wrong but I want him to earn her forgiveness
and I want nandu to forgive him
it's actually very hard to describe their inner turmoil in words which you did very beautifully
the flashback portion was so cute
continue soon
stay blessed and be happy

Thnxx for the lovly update diii... 👏
Finally good days starts... Fianlly manik realised his mistake... 😳 👏
Waitng for ur update frm soo long.. Thnxxx
I know i dont reply before .. Bt ur story is my favrt one.. I just love ur story...
U put so much emotions in ur story... Nd the reltn of manan is so mstt... Thier fight , their tease , their anger , their romance evry thng is damm awsm... Now just wnt to see how mani earn nandu trust nd love... Thnxx again for ths lo ly storyy ... Sorry for not replying before.


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