#4 Devil's Bride manan ff part 42 in thread 5 link is on pg 1 - Page 86

Very nice update... Happy realisation of Manik... Loved reading

finallu...like finally tuney update karhi diya...chalo...nyc chapie...was very curious tujhe toh pata hi dimag kha gayi...anyways enjoy ur cousin's marriage...hv lots of fun...aur haa dekhna kahi ffs ki tarah tujhe bhi iss function main koi manik na mill jaye *wink* :P
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Writer of MaNan:LOVE BUGS

Amazing update
I loved the update
The apology part was great
Much needed and couldn't
Even imagine that a simple sorry
Could be described in such a beautiful
Way! Manik's realisation was blissful
And when he was remincing
Their memories it felt as if I was reliving them
On my own!!!
The only suggestion I could give u is
Pls update daily(sorry thoda zaada hogaya)
But can't help I'm so stuck with this beautifull
Web that u have woven with words that I feel
There's no way out of this!ty for pm!!!and . Wateva happens love the story
Love the update love the words love the expressions love you !!! Live everything about this peice of art
Which is flowery and simple at the same time , elegant and funny combined, love and hatred beautifully carved and not to forget manik and Nandini
Austoundely woven into a single,pure and beautiful thread of manan
Through words !!!
Once again ty for the update and the pm!!
(And I really don't mind reading devils daily!!) 😃

Omg... it was walk to the memory down the lane...

Thank you ... thank you ... thank you sooo much ❤️
for updating ...
I was latterly dying to read ...
my mind is having lots of thoughts ... what will happen next ???

really you make me suffer a lot dear ❤️
now let me tell u about the update ...

you wrote so well dear ...
I wish I could think like you ...
you are an awesome writer ❤️

love u ..

awsm update dear .. m happie that manik realise his mistake ... w8ng fr nandini's reaction .. loved the chptr ...

Awesome update
Loved it
Too gud
The memories which he was
Remembering was so beautiful
So blissful
The talk with the little girl
Was so cute
Finally he realised his mistake
And apologised in front of everyone
That part was amazing
What would be her reaction
Waiting for the next update
Update soon

Niceee

Hey very emotional part. It is heart touching part.. i hope nandu accept his sry. PlZ update soon.

Yaar can't see him in this pain,
but what to do? The mistake he has committed is absolutely unforgivable.