#4 Devil's Bride manan ff part 42 in thread 5 link is on pg 1 - Page 87

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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazingly written...the way u pen it...its super awesome...eagerly waiting for nandini's reaction...continue soon..!;)
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Posted: 9 years ago
[Font]Font[/FONT] THNKS . . . . THNKS FOR THE UPDATE . . . . . . I WAS CRAVING FOR IT . . . NOW CAN SLEEP PEACeFULLY . . . .:-) . . .nXT UPDATE thori jaldi karna
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Posted: 9 years ago
u made me cry at this tym by maniks words yarrr :'( n I have a presentation tomorrow n I m crying here uhuuu well maniks mistake is bigger then any crime thats what I feel I will never ever b able to forgive that person but will try n as it is our nandu I want her to make manik on his knees yar for an apology coz its nt a simple mistake so ya but at the end its manan n I trust u completely I was waiting for the update dude ur writing awesome seriously awesome mtlb how u manage to think all this hattsss offf pls come here to mumbai we need such kind of writers... tqq for the pm but can u update soon sach mai I can't wait anymore for nandus reaction
ps: ur biggest fan!!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
thanq so much for this update

was really waiting for it

manik s pov was emotional
he remembering all those past moments were really hurting


the way he hurt her
the words he told her
his actions towards her


everything that he did to hurt her

he goes to the orphanage n his convo with that little gal

then the press meet

he cancelled his project now he s gonna build a hospital


but after that did he spoke or it was in his mind only

he openly accepted his mistake or was it his mind talk

nandini s reaction wht it will be ??


now also manik don't know about nandini s health condition so ???????????

iam not supporting manik I really want him to try real HARD to get her back

not so easily

SORRY is not enough



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Posted: 9 years ago
Veryyy toucchhyyy...nicelyyy potrayed...no words to say jst speechlss...waitng fr d othr side of storyyy...sooo plzzz update soonnn...plzzz
S.h.e.e.t.a.l thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautifully written update
All those meories with manik's thought it was superb
And that last apology was nice

solayhakhan thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
its awesome love it plzz next chp soon
analaxmi23 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update dear
it's so emotional
continu soon
take care
fireflies10 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing update finally manik kp realize hua...taliyaaan manik and that cute chotu si girl ki convo was sweet and she unknowingly said nandu di that was awesone manik ka last dailogue was mind blowing loved it waiting for next update soon take care ty for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update. Waiting for next next part.

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