#4 Devil's Bride manan ff part 42 in thread 5 link is on pg 1 - Page 56

Originally posted by: mishghan

hey Thanks for replying...

see i was a newbie here but with your threats I've been regularly commenting since a few updates...

Merry Christmas honey!⭐️

i hope Nandini will remain alive hamare monster devil manik ka dimagh line pe laane k liye...☺️

can i ask for a Christmas Gift please!!! Can i get an update by Sunday please😳

I won't insist coz i know its tough for a writer who pens down every emotion as if I am living it! but just a request...

looking forward to my Santa to fulfill my wish... if not possible i wont mind! its OK i can wait...😊

its just that moqa bhi tha and dastoor bhi lol *emotional blackmail* 😛😛

sunday updates mushkil hoga bcz kal sunday h or mene ek line nh likha h devils usko likhne ke liye at least three days or i worked on new ss prologue than also forceful kiss or devils are kinda big so i ssly need time for thm sorry dear but i can't at least not on sunday but i can manage it on Tuesday or Wednesday hope u don't mind please try to understand i ssly need time for devils its not easy for me writing devils is a tough task

Update Was Full Of Surprises!! Nandu Talks With Her Baby Was So Adorable So Emotional It Was Really Very Cute She's Really A Strong Girl. Nyonika Also Revealed Everthing About Her Relationship With Mr.Malhotra Itni Saari Mysteries!! She Has Faced So Many Things Alone & Also Dealed With Manik & Mukti's Hatred She's Also Strong Woman & Finally Manik Ne B Nandu Ko Sb Btadia Thank God In Next Update Manik Will Come To Know Bout Truth. You Wrote This Dark Track Really Well It Made Us Emotional We Felt Every Update Your Writing Is Superb Specially That Writers POV ;)
Keep It Up
Stay Blessed!!

It was damn awsm.. I just loved it... Amazing part... Desperate for next part

Ufff... Finally .. Finally the misunderstandings are gonna been cleared... Feeling happy... Manik even if the hurts her loves a lot...

Hey dear wen will u post the next part plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz do tell us know early waiting for ur story plzzz request upload the story soon plzzz

marvellous update...

at last nandu got to know the reason for maniks hatred towardsher...

hope everything will be cleared to him soon...
pls continue...

last update was awesome ...plz plz plz jaldi se next update karo ...plz plz plz...

Hii...

Hii dear
I start your story reading now... You know late cummer
I read your story ... Read about your DEVIL and his ANGEL ... Its an awesome story ...
In starting I laugh like lunatic ... Because of their pranks ... They look superb together ...
And nandu's mind is awesome ... I love that AIDS prank ... And after that I just burst into laughter ,... Thank god I was alone in the room otherwise I would be in mental hospital.. I heard alot about your ff from my manan friends ... And you know forum is not easy to be use on phone... And I hardly get my time to spend with lappy ... Because all day outside and raat ko neend ...
I m a big kumbhkaran ...
But for your ff I forget about my sleep ...
You are awesome ... Yr you really wait us a lot for their first love kiss ... And their talks about love was awesome ...
I love smurfy ... When he bite on manik's bum I was behaving like a mental ...
Now on writing you reply I m imagining that scene and laughing ...
But their encounter in hospital ... I mean when Dr. Said that she should abort her child ... Nandini's pain and Manik's comments make me shattered ... I was crying like hell and then I sleep while crying ...
In morning my eyes was superbly puffy ... Oh god ab bahar kaise jau ... Kisi ne dekha toh with the help of make up I managed myself to look presentable not zombie ...
2 days I can't concentrate on my work ... And I had no courage to read more because if I cry more then no make up would help me to not to look like zombie ...
I was afraid kya hoga ... What if she birth the child and died and manik get to know about the truth then what will he do ??? How he will live ... How he will forgive himself ...???? How??

After that they made love ... Manik Malhotra style ... Full on passionate ... And manik flew away to London ... Feeling sad ... But the way they both are missing each other and talking to pics was awesome ... I was feeling pls Aashna ... Goddess of this ff pls don't let them apart ... Pls make their more deep ... No Misunderstanding ... Only love pls ... But your warning at the end of update dried my blood ...

Nandu ne Kyun bheja manik ko London ... The way he was talking my breath choked ... I was Feeling devastated ... I wish life main kisi ke saath aaisa na ho ...
The writer's POV was superb ... Really trust is most important part of a relationship ...
I can't explain in words what I m feeling now.. Tears are not in my control and eyes also ... I wanted to stop myself to read that pain but I can't ...

When nandini told manik that she won't be there after child's birth ... My heart skip a beat ... Why people's don't confront each other ... If manik would have confront nandini what happened in London ... What is going on in his mind ... I think they would be happy then ... Why people's believe someone else rather than their own love ...

Manik loves nandini a lot then why those teasing words of dhruv and alya and nyonika's half conversation make him believe that she is planning something ... Why he can't find out from her acts ... From her eyes how much she loves him ... Why we always overhear half conversation ... And conclude everything ... Why this human nature ...

I wish we stop answer unanswered questions according to our assumptions then life make be become easy ...


I am sorry I won't be able to comment on your post every time dear ... I have some responsibilities to be fulfill ... But I promise you whenever I got time ... A big comment from my side ... Pls yr block mat kr dena ...

Originally posted by: Cuttie_Neha

Hii dear
I start your story reading now... You know late cummer
I read your story ... Read about your DEVIL and his ANGEL ... Its an awesome story ...
In starting I laugh like lunatic ... Because of their pranks ... They look superb together ...
And nandu's mind is awesome ... I love that AIDS prank ... And after that I just burst into laughter ,... Thank god I was alone in the room otherwise I would be in mental hospital.. I heard alot about your ff from my manan friends ... And you know forum is not easy to be use on phone... And I hardly get my time to spend with lappy ... Because all day outside and raat ko neend ...
I m a big kumbhkaran ...
But for your ff I forget about my sleep ...
You are awesome ... Yr you really wait us a lot for their first love kiss ... And their talks about love was awesome ...
I love smurfy ... When he bite on manik's bum I was behaving like a mental ...
Now on writing you reply I m imagining that scene and laughing ...
But their encounter in hospital ... I mean when Dr. Said that she should abort her child ... Nandini's pain and Manik's comments make me shattered ... I was crying like hell and then I sleep while crying ...
In morning my eyes was superbly puffy ... Oh god ab bahar kaise jau ... Kisi ne dekha toh with the help of make up I managed myself to look presentable not zombie ...
2 days I can't concentrate on my work ... And I had no courage to read more because if I cry more then no make up would help me to not to look like zombie ...
I was afraid kya hoga ... What if she birth the child and died and manik get to know about the truth then what will he do ??? How he will live ... How he will forgive himself ...???? How??

After that they made love ... Manik Malhotra style ... Full on passionate ... And manik flew away to London ... Feeling sad ... But the way they both are missing each other and talking to pics was awesome ... I was feeling pls Aashna ... Goddess of this ff pls don't let them apart ... Pls make their more deep ... No Misunderstanding ... Only love pls ... But your warning at the end of update dried my blood ...

Nandu ne Kyun bheja manik ko London ... The way he was talking my breath choked ... I was Feeling devastated ... I wish life main kisi ke saath aaisa na ho ...
The writer's POV was superb ... Really trust is most important part of a relationship ...
I can't explain in words what I m feeling now.. Tears are not in my control and eyes also ... I wanted to stop myself to read that pain but I can't ...

When nandini told manik that she won't be there after child's birth ... My heart skip a beat ... Why people's don't confront each other ... If manik would have confront nandini what happened in London ... What is going on in his mind ... I think they would be happy then ... Why people's believe someone else rather than their own love ...

Manik loves nandini a lot then why those teasing words of dhruv and alya and nyonika's half conversation make him believe that she is planning something ... Why he can't find out from her acts ... From her eyes how much she loves him ... Why we always overhear half conversation ... And conclude everything ... Why this human nature ...

I wish we stop answer unanswered questions according to our assumptions then life make be become easy ...


I am sorry I won't be able to comment on your post every time dear ... I have some responsibilities to be fulfill ... But I promise you whenever I got time ... A big comment from my side ... Pls yr block mat kr dena ...

oh god it was an awesome comment i am speechless what i am suppose to say you made me remind my whole devils journey sach me that aids scene ring tone scenes when i wrote them i used to laugh so hard or smurfy i love him more than manan in this but uska departure karna pda story se but no worry he left his mark than coming to the Romance i have read so many romantic things for those parts i just wrote my own imagination in first kiss and than coming to the love making i just wants to make that part full of love i don't success hu ya nahi but after reading comments i felt content than yeah devils dark zone its kinda based on humans insecurities some realistic facts also glad u like the concept or devils has happy ending so chill won't kill nandini and sorry for making you cry so much and yeah its ok you are having responsibilities comment whenever u got time i am okay with it would love to read your opinions on my ff or block kyu krungi this comment made my day or i never blocked someone it was just a dhamki but big thanks for this comment writing devils was an epic experience for me too its just something i can't explain in words so do comment whenever u feel like i am more than ok with it