#4 Devil's Bride manan ff part 42 in thread 5 link is on pg 1 - Page 54

awesome...
lvd it...
cntinuesoon...
thanks fr the pm

Originally posted by: uzmaaqil

Well what to say .. I'm just lack of words man!!! The chapter was superb.. The way u portray each and every character that's amazing ..Hats off to you girl.. Seriously!!!! Today I'm accepting that writing the devil's story isn't an easy job.. Because its not like any other ff .. And I'm really thankful to you for giving us "THE DEVIL'S BRIDE" I don't want you to end this .. but I can't even force you to write further .. But i expect a new story from you after ending this please !!!You're an amazing writer trust me .. I really mean it .. Anyway please continue soon !Take care !

Actually story is coming to the end what i will show after reunion can't drag more other wise it will loose its charm so i am bound to do this well i am going to kill nandini chill it has happy ending glad u like my skills thnk u

Originally posted by: alisha_ash

oh my god such an amazing chp I can't believe that someone can write to such an extend u know I literally felt each n every emotion n word of it itss do awesome hattssoff how u do it any inspiration? ? pls let us know well this is a story which ki really i dnt wanted it to end pls take it a lil n a lil more pls dont end it soon its one of the bestests story I have come across cant believe the way u write it yarr its grttt really grt I m feeling each n every letter n word that u have written I can imagine the whole situation trust me on that pls dont end it I have lots to say but it just that I m too tired now I will for sure for now u r amazing n the bestests person writer I have come across pls keep it up u r just amazing! ! hatssofff n tq for the pm pls update soon u keep us waiting allott ps ur biggest fan! !

10 Parts means around two months limited story i have can't drag more yar kya kru me but me try krungi thode happy chapters dene ki if it can increase or inspiration toh i have i can't express myself so easily so i choose writing in this way i can express myself thanks fr the comment dear 😊

Originally posted by: Boomchelesa

Woaaahhh...!!! U knw wht... I didnt cry while reading previous update of urs...although it used to pain... Bt trust me today whn nandini was writing tht letter for her child...i couldnt stop myself crying...it was soo heart wrenching yaar...the fact tht she wont see her child..gave me jitters...u tottally stole my heart...! Manik talks everyday with his daughter whn nandini sleeps...thts a very awww part of the story... He loves her daughtr to the infinity...!

But this was the one thing tht i wanted to happens frm very starting whn the musunderstanding happend... & tht clarification happened today...! Its too late yaa... I feel bad for both of thm... N they both stand correct at their places... Both were not sensble enough to talk over this matter..clear everything... Nandini would hv tried fighting fr this relation... Bt i think she was exausted this tym..coz this was the thing tht she been doing frm the starting of their relation... But ab kya... Now toh everything is over...!

I dont knw if in ur story nandini will b alive or not... She would die giving birth or not... Or if some miracle happens... I so want the miracle to happen...finally manik ko sab pata chalega..i knw he would regret his deciosion..feel angry on himself...will b too numb to react may b ...tht he was the one who riuned everything...! It makes me very sad... After predicting the ending tht it might not b a happy family in tge end...! But m pisitive...

I never got a tought of leaving the story...was coz i knew one day stars would shine... Manik will understand everything... They willl b a happy couple... Tht Hope kept me going...n reading ur update always...Anyways now toh u r ending the FF with 10 more epi... But let me tell u it was the best Dark FF i hv ever read on forum..! If u end this one do come up with another new FF... Love ur writing like anything... U made me addicted ya... Ur way of expressing the feelings... Make me go gaga over ur writing..hahaha...!!
UPDATE SOON.../GIVE US A PRECAP...!!!!!!
God Bless U

Omg your comment i am on cloud nine now thank u so much for this awesome comment or story is going to over i know you love it but can't drag more i am bound to do this what i will do after this reunion if i will drag it will loose its charm well i started a new one a comedy one you can try that one but again a big thnks fr u support

😊

Nice update...plzzz update next part asap can't wait

Thanks for d pm...Kyuki apke k pm ki vajase mje yeh story padhne ko mili... finally completed d whole story... I must say.. ur story is so different than other manan stories... U r superb mind blowing Writer ...Bcoz writing such a dark ff is not a easy job..
n u penned each n every emotion perfectly...
manan r d best n totally different...manik ne jo nandini k sath kiya that is so wrong... n nandini ko manik ko maaf nhi krna chahiye ... manik ko nandini ko confront krna chahiye tha uspe trust krna chahiye tha ... n acha hua nandini ne manik ko kuch bhi explain nhi kiya... n about nyonika ... she is strong n independent lady... plz manik ko jaldi hi realise krva na Uski mistake...

Once again a big big thank u for d pm n for writing such h beautiful story...about d ending I m clueless... aap ko sahi lage Vo karo...

Stay blessed
stay happy 😛

Nice update
ur words really touched my heart
U are a wonderful writer...no doubt in that
I liked Nyonika's part...
Continue soon
Thnks fr pm...

Wow.. Nice.. . 😉
Bt it was chotusa update...
Next time please bada wala update. ..

Hey dear
Yrrr what u wrote...
Omg... Please tell me how u wrote dis beautifully awsmstic chapter...
I m so deadly madly in love with dis chapter and surely with ur writing...

Ur each and every word touches my heart
And ya it definitely made me cry to d hell but it was worthy...

Hatts off to u Jo itni mehnat karke ye sab likha I know ek sentence ko sochna and usse words me frame karna kitna difficult task hai...
I m writing and I know kitna difficult task hai...
But u took it beyond my imagination... It was way beyond beautifully written...
U give justification to every emotion u showed...
U gave justification to d character...

And d letter...
I m sorry I don't have words to explain ki wo mujhe kitna acha laga ...:)
Please update soon
Please its a request
I m sorry for bugging you but I can't help to read next part soon...
Egarly waiting...

Keep smiling
Stay blessed :)

Dear I always told u that I never hate manik
Bcz he loves her beyond any limit.
The situation was so difficult for him to react straight.
Still he came back and again a shock about niyonika deal,
How a poor soul can bear so much pain in just few hours.
He went through a tough time,
He missed her a lot.
Still he loves her.
He loves his baby.
He is davil but so cute possessive davil.
He deserves happiness he deserves forgiveness.
He deserves her back.
He deserves a chance to make her life beautiful again with a cute little angel.
I love ur story.
Ur story always remains at first priority for me.
Desperately waiting for next update.