#4 Devil's Bride manan ff part 42 in thread 5 link is on pg 1 - Page 55

wow awsm part...

Loved it...
Very emotional part
Waiting for nxt

Originally posted by: cmamona

Hey dear
Yrrr what u wrote...
Omg... Please tell me how u wrote dis beautifully awsmstic chapter...
I m so deadly madly in love with dis chapter and surely with ur writing...

Ur each and every word touches my heart
And ya it definitely made me cry to d hell but it was worthy...

Hatts off to u Jo itni mehnat karke ye sab likha I know ek sentence ko sochna and usse words me frame karna kitna difficult task hai...
I m writing and I know kitna difficult task hai...
But u took it beyond my imagination... It was way beyond beautifully written...
U give justification to every emotion u showed...
U gave justification to d character...

And d letter...
I m sorry I don't have words to explain ki wo mujhe kitna acha laga ...:)
Please update soon
Please its a request
I m sorry for bugging you but I can't help to read next part soon...
Egarly waiting...

Keep smiling
Stay blessed :)

its not bug or anything dear i will try to update soon and yeah you said the right writing devils was a tough task for me too but i hope i did justice with story and thank u for this heart warming comment u were my regular reader you always commented on my each chappy thank you for your wonderful support dear

Originally posted by: purswani50

Thanks for d pm...Kyuki apke k pm ki vajase mje yeh story padhne ko mili... finally completed d whole story... I must say.. ur story is so different than other manan stories... U r superb mind blowing Writer ...Bcoz writing such a dark ff is not a easy job..
n u penned each n every emotion perfectly...
manan r d best n totally different...manik ne jo nandini k sath kiya that is so wrong... n nandini ko manik ko maaf nhi krna chahiye ... manik ko nandini ko confront krna chahiye tha uspe trust krna chahiye tha ... n acha hua nandini ne manik ko kuch bhi explain nhi kiya... n about nyonika ... she is strong n independent lady... plz manik ko jaldi hi realise krva na Uski mistake...

Once again a big big thank u for d pm n for writing such h beautiful story...about d ending I m clueless... aap ko sahi lage Vo karo...

Stay blessed
stay happy 😛

well i wanna ask how came in my buddy list i guess your the new reader of forceful kiss but glad you like it and she is not going to forgive him at least not so soon so chill i want to make manik a adorable person or ending i will end this on happy note because so many readers said they want happy ending so happy ending no doubt and once again thank u for your comment

Originally posted by: Sofiafarooq

Dear I always told u that I never hate manik
Bcz he loves her beyond any limit.
The situation was so difficult for him to react straight.
Still he came back and again a shock about niyonika deal,
How a poor soul can bear so much pain in just few hours.
He went through a tough time,
He missed her a lot.
Still he loves her.
He loves his baby.
He is davil but so cute possessive davil.
He deserves happiness he deserves forgiveness.
He deserves her back.
He deserves a chance to make her life beautiful again with a cute little angel.
I love ur story.
Ur story always remains at first priority for me.
Desperately waiting for next update.

yeah he deserves a chance but let him do something for this relationship now its his turn so in this healing process you are going to witness a adorable devil manik so chill at last i will end this happy note but he owe an apology so he has to do this

Awesm

I think manik has all the rights to know but he was Also wrong he should suffer now

Ashu first of all m really really sorry

This was an amazing update.. I loved the letter that nandini wrote for her baby.. That was cute.. :) Update soon..

beautiful letter written by nandu ...

hey Thanks for replying...