#4 Devil's Bride manan ff part 42 in thread 5 link is on pg 1 - Page 53

Originally posted by: aadhya_cute

Aashna u r an awesome writer I know it's the same old line but trust me this chapter is something very different and perfect one for devil!!
OMG the truth that nyo hiding baffled me increased my respect towards a mother 10times
And the letter Nandu wrote for baby omg ifs very heart touching
How will Manik come to know the truth?What will be manik's rxn ? Will Nandini forgive him? Will this relation continue?What will Manik do when he knows that there r complications in delivery and Nandu may die ? Sooo many questions!! I know only u can answer them :)
Sad that so many left devil...it's kk dear but this will be always remembered
Again telling u devil's bride is my favourite ff and will be my fav one

Originally posted by: sutapasarbabhom

My goodness what a chapy dear
really u r brilliant writer
the letter nandini wrt very imotional
only a mother can undrstnd her imotions
Curios to knw what will happen next
pl.updt soon
tanx for pm

Originally posted by: Pravallika69

Much needed chapter n Finally she asked
Like finally she knew y is he behaving all nuts
N I love the way nandu wrote letters to her baby
N nyonika nailed it in dis part... Felt so good reading it
Lovely chapter
N am fan of UR FF dnt care whether its devil or watevr it's like a real life situation n it's makes me feel true so I read UR FF bhaki wat others think dnt care but I love it so jus continue
Waiting for next part

Thanks for PM
Lots of love
Pravallika aka PraNi

Originally posted by: OVIYARAJAVEL

Hey sorry I was not able to comment on previous update

I had m y exams which is Finally like finally over phew

So the dark zone i s going to end hurray :):)

And what did u mean by the chapter is boring huh for your kind information I dont think u can even write anything boring OK

I think nandini must forgive manik because everybody must be given a chance to rectify their mistake but each mistake has its own impact so make sure manik pays for his deeds also

Pls try to update on coming Sunday

Originally posted by: RakaSama

every time I read your updates my heart sinks... it sinks with nandini, sinks with the pain she is going through... but your words also give me immense strength... & to say the truth, I'm really in need of this strength right now.

Originally posted by: Sm0405

I'm totally in love with your writing nd this ff ... Trust me on this ... I jst can't get enough of ur this ff ... Nd thus part jst touched my heart ... Frm the very beginning to the end ... Everything jst touched my heart ... Frm where do U get the ideas for writing each nd every update ... Matlb aap kaise likh pati ho yaar ... It's soo difficult to write this kind of storyline with this perfect words ... I jst dnt know what to say nd how to describe ur writing in words ... U r jst tooo mind blowing ... U know my very first MaNan ff is this one ... Devil's Bride ... I started reading ff's of MaNan frm this one only ... Nd jst loved it a lottt ... Can't believe it will end soon ...

Nd abt this part ... It again brought tears in my eyes ... Tht letter of Nandini's to her baby ... It jst made me cry ... Tears were nt stopping again ... Nd then comes Nyonika Nandini's convo ... So Manik's father is alive nd he never looked back after tht accident ... Can't believe this ... He loved his children very much bt never looked back at them ???? Lyk seriously ... Nd Nyonika's each word has jst reached to my heart ... U have written tht part amazingly ... Trust me ... Nd then Nandini goes to get her all answers ... Nd finally when she comes to know abt the actual reason of his this rude nd heartless behavior, it jst shook her to Hell ... Her anger knew no bounds ... She was shocked, hurt, annoyed nd more than all is she was angry knowing tht Manik never trusted her any word ... He never trusted her enough to fight his insecurities ...

Seriously jst in the fire in his insecurities, he burned their whole happiness, feelings, love, trust, relationship ... Everything ...

This was another mind blowing update frm u ... Nd now I'm egarly waiting for the next part ... I'm waiting fr Manik to know tht .. The person he was doubting nd hurted is ready to give his life fr their baby ... She is nt selfish or any cheater ... What he thinks abt her is going to be proved wrong ...

Plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz update the nxt part sooonnniishh ... I jst can't wait for it ...

Originally posted by: mishghan

ok now... do i need to tell you in every comment how brilliant you and your work is?

just👏isn't enough... wish i could meet you one day and learn few things from you...

following are somethings i wana share...

1- sometimes being insecure is good and sometimes bad...its the situation and time that decides to what extent one should opt for insecurity!

2- sometimes this insecurity reaches to a deewangi level of being obsessive and possessive that it leads to the height of being lonely.

3-sometimes pain becomes a part of your living and thus having no other option you have to live with that.

i myself is a very obsessive and damn possessive person ... i know exactly how manik feels and i know what nandini feels in your story too...sometimes i'm manik the other time i'm nandini it depends what the time and situation of the story!

i would just request you not to make nandini die coz agar wo maar gai so manik would have an easy escape to his doings!!! let her be strong enough to stand for herself and make manik realise that she was , is and will remain manik's forever coz their bond is for eternity...

i know i was boring! i told you before this story i feel like i'm living it!

anyways thanks again...

looking forward to another update ASAP!