#4 Devil's Bride manan ff part 42 in thread 5 link is on pg 1 - Page 50

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Chinmayi_11 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Di its not at all boring
i felt so overwhelmed after reading the update
thank u so much for the pm
the conversation between nandini and nyonika
the letter with which u had started the update
how u said about insecurity
i am totally amazed by yur writing skills di trust me on this
u nailed it no writer can do this i bet on that
u made us to realize what pain is nandini going through
what nyonika got from her life
what an insecurity person will do without trusting someone
i dont want to forgive manik
and the laast the letter depicts the happiness what a mother feels for her baby
it was so beautiful di
loved it to the core
love you di
waiting for the next update eagerly

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Posted: 9 years ago
Oye..

m not cold hearted person haa
as u said this story is for cold heart person ..

beautiful chapter

chalo here nandu got know
about the truth..

nayonika life so sad..
before hatred from her husband
n second from her own child..
aiyaaa itna takliff...

in this whoever girl come n marry
uske sath yahi hota hai kya..
first nayonika
n now nandu..but nandu story is
little different even though..

Happy to see Manik love his child so much..
aaahh nandu... 😭
talk between nandu n her unborn
child so beautiful ...loved it..

thanx for pm
keep smiling n take care.
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Posted: 9 years ago
WOW!!!

Its been a while...

THANKS For the pm.. yes your story did make me cry.. pllzz thora pyaar karwa doo.. yaar.. aur kitna royu.


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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update
Hope nothing happens to nandini
Letter to the baby was very touching
You do a very amazing work
Cont soon
Will be waiting
Tanq fr Pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
every time I read your updates my heart sinks... it sinks with nandini, sinks with the pain she is going through... but your words also give me immense strength... & to say the truth, I'm really in need of this strength right now.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsmmm

Superrr

Wonderfulll

Beautiful writing

Finallly all the truth is out

Bring manan back

It'sooo goood even it's dark

Coun sooon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesomeee
Amazinggg
Superbbb
Fab update
Nandu ko sb sach pta chl gea...lovd it
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Nandinis letter to her baby
Was very emotional
She was expressing her feelings
waiting for the next update
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Lizbeth

I loved neonika's story..
I don't knw if it makes any sense or not, but I guess if I were manik, I would also misunderstand that situation.. Come on yaar, the things which they said, he heard can easily make a person misundrstd the situation.. And manik is someone who a broken soul, who has trust issues.. His life made him lyk that. All those people he loved, only betrayed him. And nandini toh, alya's sister. I knw wt he did was wrong.. But can't be blame him totally..
Now I think , nandini is showing hr anger in wrong place. I will say this, ki nandini never tried to heal him. She only loved him and expected more...
So am really very sad ki u r making manik a guilty criminal.. .. Now she is sacrificing her life.., everyone gonna blame him. U will make him kneel in front of everyone begging for frgvnss.. I can't see that. Seriously


well i totally agree with you his past make him like that but in the past nandini assured him so many times or abourt the forgiveness well he punished nandini i agree manik also suffered but wo uski insecurity ki wjh se hua uske past me what was the falut of nandu yet she got punishment well in next chapter i will clear your confusion she showed her dedication towards this relationship now its his turn or there won't much forgiveness wala part its a healing process or much needed thing for her manik owe an apology so its just like that well manik ka character bhi i will justify chill at last you will get satisfaction from this at least i can hope well thank u for comment or sharing your views with me feel free to share next time also
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Posted: 9 years ago
uff so many heavy talks
but i luuved thm ol
n ya i m with u frm d start of d ff n will be till end
n what if the dark phase is going on
lyf i snt that simple sbke lyf main aise phase ate h ek story se u r runing off to agar lyf main kabhi aisa hua to kahan bhagoge
khr i luved d part n ya plz update soon

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