#4 Devil's Bride manan ff part 42 in thread 5 link is on pg 1

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qamarkhan87

@qamarkhan87

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Posted: 9 years ago

#481

Superb

Mindblowing update

U said abt moving on and fight back were true

Eagerly waiting for maniks reaction when he came to know abt truth

Update soon

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Angel

@asangel

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Posted: 9 years ago

#482

Awsmm chptr it is...many secrets reveald... Wtng fr nxt..plz post nxt one littl soooner...thnku

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loixie98

@loixie98

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Posted: 9 years ago

#483

Thanka for the awsome update...waiting for nxt part

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Arunima

@jesse93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#484

Yaar in the history of this story or any other story of the forum I have never cried, but this part where she was writing that letter for their baby, it did make me cry. Just one thing, you are AMAZING.

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Arunima

@jesse93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#485

Please please please update the next part soon. Pretty please yaar.

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shonUle

@shonUle

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Posted: 9 years ago

#486

Hey plz dont stop writing. It is amazing story. Dont end this story. N todays part is nice.

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Shagee

@jeyapirakas

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Posted: 9 years ago

#487

Very emotional update

The letter conversation was amazing

Please update sooon

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Lizbeth

@Lizbeth

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Posted: 9 years ago

#488

I loved neonika's story..
I don't knw if it makes any sense or not, but I guess if I were manik, I would also misunderstd that situation.. Come on yaar, the things which they said, he heard can easily make a person misundrstd the situation.. And manik is someone whoz a broken soul, who has trust issues.. His life made him lyk that. All those people he loved, only betrayed him. And nandini toh, alya's sister. I knw wt he did was wrong.. But can't be blame him totally..
Now I think , nandini is showing hr anger in wrong place. I will say this, ki nandini never tried to heal him. She only loved him and expected more...
So am really very sad ki u r making manik a guilty criminal.. .. Now she is sacrificing her life.., everyone gonna blame him. U will make him kneel in front of everyone begging for frgvnss.. I can't see that. Seriously

Edited by Lizbeth - 9 years ago

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Sujitha

@SP1208

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Posted: 9 years ago

#489

Tanq for pm..
Whatever you are saying I agree..
Its true every individual is grey shade only..
Yes that's absolutely true..
In real life or in your story..
Somewhere feeling pity on nyo..
She was nowhere at fault..
Same as to Nandini..
Eagerly waiting..
Continue soon..

Love
Suji :-)