#4 Devil's Bride manan ff part 42 in thread 5 link is on pg 1

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Shrabasty Habil

@Boo131

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Posted: 9 years ago

#501

Your writing gives a vision of them. Its very sad that you are ending. Please don't. Please save Nandini. I don't want her to die. Please. Update as soon as possible. Please. Thank you so much for this amazing yet beautiful update.👏

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OVIYARAJAVEL

@OVIYARAJAVEL

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Posted: 9 years ago

#502

Hey sorry I was not able to comment on previous update

I had m y exams which is Finally like finally over phew

So the dark zone i s going to end hurray :):)

And what did u mean by the chapter is boring huh for your kind information I dont think u can even write anything boring OK

I think nandini must forgive manik because everybody must be given a chance to rectify their mistake but each mistake has its own impact so make sure manik pays for his deeds also

Pls try to update on coming Sunday

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Swagatika

@sws2

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#503

So beautifully written about insecurities

Hats off to u

Loving the Manik-Nyonika-Nandini phase

Eagerly waiting for next one

Thanks for pm

😊

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cutypie04

@cutypie04

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#504

Amazing mind blowing update dea. ...

Continue soonnn

Tnx fr d pm

Stay blessed

Keep smiling

Keep shining fr ur loved ones

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priyanair04

@priyanair04

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#505

It was one of the best chap trust me ...it was superb ...beautifully written...specially nandu letter another feelings to her child it was so emotional...finally everything is clear now now just waiting to know truth from nandu side...really waiting for tat...how is manik is going to react ...and little scared ABT nandu delivery..well she survive..hope so

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Archie Modi

@sweetarchie

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#506

Thank God only one dark part left n ya plz no death of nandu n plz a happy ending plz plz plz

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anaita arora

@fireflies10

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#507

emotional chappy... and ek ek word was lyk kitne dil se likha hai totaly loved it update soon take care keep smiling plzz pm me

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pnlove

@pnlove

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#508

finally all mysteries are disclosing

it was an emotional update

just hope nandini keep fine after delivery

and i think after manik will know everything he will also feel shattered

hope both of them forgets their misery soon

waiting for reading happy chapters

keep up the good work

update soon

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Sabahfatima14

@Sabahfatima14

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Posted: 9 years ago

#509

It was indeed really emotion...but u r an amazing writer dear...amazing part...finally manik will come to knw..everyything...i hope he realize his mistake...ufff yeh misunderstanding...awesome work...luved it..next part soon...waiting 4 it...

Luv u