#4 Devil's Bride manan ff part 42 in thread 5 link is on pg 1

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prithasainnn

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Posted: 9 years ago

#161

Writer's pov was awesome. ...so true...love it...continue soon. ...thanks for pm

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Pravallika69

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Posted: 9 years ago

#162

Am jus speechless with UR update its jus awesome dear... UR an awesome writer... Evry emotion evry word u wrote touched my heart truly... Evry emotion u wrote we're so true n Manik at his side was ryt n nandu going through so much pain n he broke her very badly.. Now she is free n he jus want baby... They r killing love n breaking themselves more n more... Can't see the
In pain... UR POV was awesome n wat u said was true... Lovely great job

Can't wait to know Manik POV n why is behaving love this update next part soon pls

Thanks for PM
Love you
Pravallika aka PraNi

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01asdfg

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Posted: 9 years ago

#163

it's awesome
love it
continues soon

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humerashaikh18

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Posted: 9 years ago

#164

Congrats for the new thread...n update was fabulous...ur pov was amazing...n now can't see nandu in pain...plzz cont soon

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Namrata

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Posted: 9 years ago

#165

Congrats for new thread..

Awesome update..

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Alinakhan270

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Posted: 9 years ago

#166

Plzzz PM me when u will update the next part
I love ur story...

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paradise..fall

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Posted: 9 years ago

#167

emotional part...

waiting for manik reaction whn he get
to knw the truth...

thnks for the pm...

lots of love nd huggies

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sameeksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#168

Or kitna rulaogi bichare ko...
Know i want manik to cry( i know he is already crying but not for his fake pain but what for the regret for his deed) ..
I want him to realise his mistake..
By the way again and again nandini is saying that i will be no longer...kahi iska mtlb ye to ni ki aap nandini to maarne waale ho dilevery time...if something like that na so please aisa mat karna..
Bcoz aaj ke update se feeling aa rahe he ki nandini mar jaygi..
Loved it.
Cont soon.

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twenkling

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Posted: 9 years ago

#169

sorry for late reply. ...BT nice update. .I m so fed up with manik cz he doesn't trust his love. ..he deserve a punishment ...let's see what will happen next. ..update fast. .