#4 Devil's Bride manan ff part 42 in thread 5 link is on pg 1

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Farhin Lamisa

@FarhinLamisa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#141

Excellent update ! Total emotional wala ! When is this Manik gonna understand ?! Urghh...!

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uzmaaqil

@uzmaaqil

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Posted: 9 years ago

#142

The update was really emotional :'( I'm jus hating this manik >_< hope he realize his mistake soon :/ Overall the update was superb! :D loved it! :) Please continue soon

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Pari_mananholic

@Pari_mananholic

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#143

Wow awesome update...

manik is going to regret each and everything thing he did and said...

nandu was soo much helpless and soo much in pain...

she did right I dont was her to confront him...

he is a real monster...

u know I always have to read ur chap twice to understand it...i soo luv ur writing...

and abt the devil I hope he soon come to know abt nandu's complications in her pregnancy...

luved the update..

Can't wait for manik's pov...

What he is feeling...

luved manik reaction when he said the curse line...

he was frozen...

I want manik to confront her soon..

otherwise it will be too late..

update soon...

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Sajna2881

@Sajna2881

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#144

Tears... again I hd tears... OMG nandu is in so much pain... Really hate manik for this... whatever damm misunderstanding he has... he had to talk to her... If he truly loved her... he should hv talked to her held close to her and solved everything...

Loved your update... thk u... Waiting for ur next

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Kavyashree pradhan

@Kavyashree22

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#145

More than story you are throwing quotes..!! I think manan need to talk.. But even i wish manik regrets to the core for his deed and not trusting nandini.. Thankyou for pm

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Apurva

@apps33

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#146

THAT WAS AWESOME...!!!!!

it was sooo emotional... i was crying all the way...

damn youve penned her pov with absolute perfection

loved the update...

plx cont soon

i cant wait to know what is kept more in stock for them...

i bet manik is gonna regret every damn thing he said to her... when he said that he wouldnt want her anywhere near him once he gets the baby...!!!

i cant wait to read more

please update soon

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saira26

@saira26

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#147

Awsm...
I hate this manik...
Continue soon...
Waiting...

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Seharash Siddiqui

@seharash.hasan

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#148

Heeyy..awsome update yr...
I loved it..
Why Manik is behaving like a Jerk!!!!
Atleast nandu ko pata chal gaya truth...
Thanks for the pm..
Update soon n
Plzz pm me wen ever u update the nxt chapter..
Byeee

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sneha_glamarous

@sneha_glamarous

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#149

felt goosebumps while reading nandini pov...
manik mst hv misunderstood nandiniz friendship wid dhruv.. n dis could hv been done by nyonika ( guess)...

both r livng in pain unnecessary... if manik would hd talk straightly dis situatn wuldnt hd arrivd...