#4 Devil's Bride manan ff part 42 in thread 5 link is on pg 1

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Lily

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Posted: 9 years ago

#171

Update was beautiful and so touching..

Truly felt nandini's pain...

I myself cried while reading this update..

Continue soon..

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tanyasrivastava

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Posted: 9 years ago

#172

amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏

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shoana

@shoana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#173

awesome
amazing update
fianlly nandini knew that mnaik didn't cheated on her
but her pain is beyond explanantion
can't see her in soo much pain
the way she told manik that she will leave him...made me cry😭
hope manik gets to know everything
plzz reveal the mystery soon
waiting for manik's pov
thanks for pm

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Chitra John

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Posted: 9 years ago

#174

i jst hop manan clear al pblms... i knw s way manik reacts is vry bad.. but stil...
waitn fr ur update

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aarzooarora

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Posted: 9 years ago

#175

I somehow couldn't understand the scene than i again read it , shattered nandini is really sad, her pain can't be removed however there is some misunderstanding which makes this two soul suffer.

I dnt know why i doubt on alya , the way she to told her to abort, to come out of house that too club.

Again may be or may be not .

Manik- though he want the child , but the idiot should also take care of her so that the baby will be healthy , if he ll torture her like this than he ll soon lose the two and regret.

Lastly i really like ur writing style, it is indeed different and unique and i really meant it as i have read many stories in this forum.

Stars for u dear: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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--Kkkhushiii--

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Posted: 9 years ago

#176

One hell of an emotional update it was

Really eager to read Manik's pov

Dying to knw wat the mystery is

So update soon

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Radha Sahdev

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Posted: 9 years ago

#177

Amazing too good.

Next part jaldi

Plzzz

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AKSH358

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Posted: 9 years ago

#178

Emotional update. ...manik will regret what he had done to nandini

Bt the mystery is still unveiled why he is behaving like this to her ...hope u will disclose it soon..

Keep writing nd be happy 😃

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MahimaSankhla

@MahimaSankhla

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Posted: 9 years ago

#179

Wow...how b'fuly u hv written it... I had tears in my eyes reading the last few lines..Like i could feel wat shez gng thru.. I hp Manik realizes his mistake b4 its too late n he looses her forever..

P.S.:- Dnt make us wait for long for the next update... I knw its not an easy task to write devil's but still update is soon😊