#3 Devil's Bride manan ff link of thread 4 on pg 1

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khusboo18

@khusboo18

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Posted: 9 years ago

#591

really nice update but this was short but its ok i first read it on instagram and fell in love with itamazing it was

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Sakshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#592

Amazing yr..

Hats off to u..u described each in evrything so prprly...

U r such an amazing writer...

Jstt luv with ur story..

Update fast... stay blessed..

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AvikaWinters

@AvikaWinters

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Posted: 9 years ago

#593

P.S. Having come across this story is a delight

And i look forward to it..😊

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Ammu20

@Ammu20

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Posted: 9 years ago

#594

Good update
Y manik is behaving like that???
Keep going

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Ammu20

@Ammu20

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Posted: 9 years ago

#595

Good update
But I dint get what was the reason for manik behavior???
So can u reveal it in the upcoming chapters

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Rashi8860

@Rashi8860

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Posted: 9 years ago

#596

Its aleays a bliss reading your ffs . But just wanted to know that what made manic do all this.and will this story take a turn or will remain like this . I mean sad and depressing

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Priya.T

@Priya.T

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Posted: 9 years ago

#597

Devilish chappy !! Its getting interesting.. Too many questions in my mind right now ... Waiting for the next chappy eagerly... pls do pm me..!!

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Seharash Siddiqui

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Posted: 9 years ago

#598

Heey awsome chapter yr...i was crying wen i was reading this chapter...awsome update..
Thanks for the pm..
Update soon ..
N plzz pm me...
Byyr

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aadhya_cute

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Posted: 9 years ago

#599

Hey!! itna gussa OMG aashna

kk i'm sorry kaan pakad ke sorry for not commenting on last 2 parts...bcoz its nov and xams time

even though i had time but these days i was reading mostly from wattpad i'm visiting IF less

so no comment for confession part and that next part tho full of hotness😉...well u managed it so well

coming to this chappy...now i came to understand y u always said beaware of devils

isse jyada i can't bear..but kya karu aadat jo hogayi devil's bride

OMG manik is really behaving as a devil😡

what happened in london in that little gap ??

manik ne nandu pe trust nahi kiya? kyun is the problem that big

i'm sure it's related to dhruv

mujhe rona aagaya after reading this chappy specially that store room part...

rats, insects ,Darkness...no nandu ki ayyappa please be with her mujhe pad ke hi dar lagraha hain

aashu u had that power of making me insane specially with funny and emotional parts

what will be manik's rxn when he gets to know about nandu pregnancy...OMG

it's going to be tough...i know u wont decrease the level of devil ness but please atleast nandu ko ek support do..(like mukti ya alya) with whom she can share her pain

dekho vaise bhi aaj raat bhar i'll be thinking about manik's rude behaviour towards nandu

ek line mujhe funny laga..."sari and bedsheets got wet due to nandu's tears" yaar nandu ki aasu ko itna bhi waste mat kar...future mein kam aayega

once again very very very sorry😊