Dear Aashna...
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Devils has so much depth and thinking..an introspection on relationships and the trials they have to face..
i am intrigued by the content of the story..
and whatever aspect it deals with
Dint get time to read the prev chaptrs.. properly. as exams n joined forum recently..
but coming to the present story..
I want to see the turn of events..
Your doing a great job..
The lessons and the way in which manik learns his life lessons
how nandini brings about a achange in his living world..
But one thing surely disturbs me..
The trust factor
How true it is that we need to learn to trust ourselves enough not to break the other.. and then only not getting broken by him or her in return
They dint trust themselves and they dint trust their love enough to even realise that they have misconceptions about the other
Atleast this is how i perceived your story line with the kind of overview i had of it.. Please pardon me if i am wrong
But Nonetheless its explained beautifully and done so perfectly that it touches a chord with the readers..
And it did to me coz im a person with trust issues.. and
I very well know what it feels like to be betryed..
And since your gave us a description of their devillish past .. whose tenure prolonged over the Happy moments of bliss love and harmony ..
I guess that is why they havent learnt to trust their LOVE and New found Bond Of love..
Its like a new born baby which hasnt been nurtured completely..
But i truly wish for you to continue soon.. and please do collaborate with the prologue as soon as possible
And i know we readers have to be patient for the climax.. ..
My exams get over by the 4 th of december and hopefully when i come back
i get to see Another milestone presented beautifully in the Devils legacy
And yes i have to come back to your story from the beginning..
Love and
thanx
Avika😊
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