#3 Devil's Bride manan ff link of thread 4 on pg 1

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aarzooarora

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Posted: 9 years ago

#571

Hats off Aashna

And i cried , i cried for the first time while reading the story. The girl was so much pain , her world collapsed in front of her eyes but still she wants to be strong.

How can manik treat a woman like this, so inhuman. I know he is in pain, hurting her like this by locking her is by no means good.

I am scared for nandini, please don't make the innocent soul break. It literally hurt.

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sweetparii

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Posted: 9 years ago

#572

nice updt very painfull thanks for such a nice story nxt updt soon plz pm me nxt

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shruti1997

@shruti1997

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Posted: 9 years ago

#573

Awesome
I loved the update!!
The way u put up their emotions and fear
U nailed the chapter

sry couldn't comment before was a little hesitant
But I do appreciate ur worke
Continue soon!! 😊

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lovemylyf

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Posted: 9 years ago

#574

tooo emotional.. n those pov's.. amazing.. i wanna kill manik..wat ever the reason is ..how can he hurt her so much... he said he loves her..but he Dont trust her..wow nice..hell with his love.. he is sure gonna regret his deeds wen he gets to know the girl he hurts this much carries his own blood in her womb... he very well deserves that slap... I know even he is pain ..BT that doesn't mean he can hurt her .. update soon...

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Rasna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#575

Now the story is being more intense and devilish too. Manik is behaving too harsh on nandini and she also should be strong more than ever for this. We are waiting for some secrets to be revealed soon. Awesome update n waiting for next.

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Rianu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#576

Nice update nddd plzzz update next party soon spoon..hpe Nandini vl undstnd manik..plzz pm me...plzzz

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Archie Modi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#577

Ending of part was deep n sad too... Plzzupdate. I want a happy ending of d story not a sad one plz.. N next part soon plz

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avneetmalhotra

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Posted: 9 years ago

#578

It is too emotional i am thinking kya such me pyaar itna dard deta h kya ye dono ik bar baat karke sb sought out ni kr sakte plz.do smthing with there brain so inme akal aae r baat kre ek doosre se

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Hudah18

@Hudah18

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Posted: 9 years ago

#579

Its was awesome feeling bad for nandini cant c her like this actually feeling like cryng by seeing nandini like this

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Sanaya_Manan

@Sanaya_Manan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#580

hmm..awesome update!!! i always commented from the tym i come through ur ff bt the thing is u didn't replied me wen i asked u something...khair..!!! chuck it...plz pm me...n luv writer's pov...awesome twesome update...n ur emotional no no devil's deeds na always shivers me to the core..kitna v try maro bt lst lst tk u toh decided ki u will make me cry...haina..?koi ni i luv ur ff tooo much so i will cry also...

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