#3 Devil's Bride manan ff link of thread 4 on pg 1 - Page 25

Originally posted by: simkapoor

i m realllyyy realllyyy srryyy sachi bht late ho gya reply krne mai...
i knw i m late once again srry...
update ws fabbb
hot...
cute naughty beautiful...awsmmm
frst of all the way u described manik s pov o god...that ws fantastically written...i ws laughing while reading the argue btw his mind n him ...heheh the little devil...u really nailed it...

the way he ws trying to make hr change hr dress so that no one else cn oogle at hr ws reallyyy funny hahah..seriously...

n thn in party...all people ogling at beautiful couple which indeed they r ...no doubt... .

thn jealousyprt...seeing manik jealous is treat to watch n i really liked tht prt... n thn the way he took hr on his shouldr ..prfct...wat else ccn u expct frm our vruy own MONSTER MANIK that too whn he is angry...no one cn stop him...

n thn the hottest prt of the update...the mst intrstig prt to read the way u wrote ws amazing...frst of all the agressive kisss...ummm imst say..u penned it so welll...it ws nt at allp vulgar n at the same time ws beautiful to read...
n thn whmn he said nw i will make u feel beautiful ..that is hw beautiful u r...in lv wid tht...n thn the rst prt ...amazing awsm superb...fab...lvd it...

cntinue soonnn...god knws n also u only knw wats gonna happen bt seriously vry vry curious to knw...

cntinue soonnn ...

tc

actually i love jealous manik so i thought lets do some fireworks as i told you ke make out bilkul emotional nhi hoga so i did something new well bas ab one more update to go and i have another plans for this update qgain a new update in devil's history wait for the sunday
thank you so much glad you like this so much

hey...when will u update next part?

Originally posted by: parthadmirer

Aashna...🤗

M here again after reading the update...

and this before another update...😆

so i loved the update...

it was awesome mind blowing...

u said we can report...

no dear it was not vulgar...

and i must say every time you always make sure that this ff is devil's bride...

so everything has to be different...

in devil style...

if it wont be diff then it may not be related to devil...

nandini getting ready for the party...

and our devil getting restless...😆

ooohhh here she comes...

and she is looking damm sexy hot...

and our devil having a fight between him and his lil devil.. was superb...

so she was looking fab...

and he lied to her that she isnt looking good...

and asked her to change...

but lil devil know very well that he id doing so, so that no one in the party...

could stare her..

but how culd he say this to nandini...

arre devil hai... kaise har man le...

and after fighting a lot...

and warning by manik nandini agress to change her dress...

ufff...kehte hain asmaan se gire ped par atke...

devil manik asked nandini to change becoz she was looking damm hot...

in gown...

and now after changing into a saree...

she was looking more hot and fab...

ab kya kare manik...

again lil monster poked him...

that the earlier dress was better...

and manik will be manik and asked her to change again...

and this nandini gave up said she will cancel the party but wont change...

bechara manik fas gaya...😆

so as expected in the party...

all men ongling on nandini...

and all gals on manik...

finally nandu decides to make manik jealous...

so she starts dancing with a random guy...

and as expected manik is jealous seeing her dancing...

and ufff manik was so jealous that he broke a glass in his hand...

seeing his bleeding hand nandini was also shocked...

as didnt know that her devil husband could do so...

and another shock came when manik came to nandini...

and pushing the guy aside carried nandini to home back...

and after reaching home...

nandini confronted him as to when he has promised that he will keep his anger in control...

then why did he hurt himself...

and manik being manik was saying that it was all her fault...

and then nandini started taunting him that he was jealous...

but manik being mnaik again was not agreeing to it...

and next what he did was a shock...

he kissed wildly to stop her...

and started mocking her to say he was jealous again...

and she was numb..😆

and then they came close to each other...

awesome romance between them😳

amazing update...👏

yes afterall devil's ka status bhi toh match karna pdhta hai wese i want to know what you felt while reading that make out part coz ab tak koi bhi nh bta paya i thought you will surely tell me but you too didn't
or report ka toh fourms ke kuch rules hai or kisi ka koi bharosa nh thanda make out me dena nh chahti thi toh i was just little afraid ke kahi j jyada ho nh ho gya but luckily aisa kuch nh hua thank god one more update to go wese i have another plan for next update again a new type of update in devil's history wait for it

Awww hot hot... are kya tha mind blowing.. seriously i like it & the way u potrate nah this is good job... keep writing...

sollly wont be able to update today tomorrow promise

Hey Aashna Whr r u?????

Heyy.! congo for the new thread 👏
update was awsm... keep updating soon

Congress for new therad...and part was super hot and romentic...manan love u described very well and dont worry it was not valgar...waiting for ur next update...

Update soon next part...eagerly waiting for it...:)

Pls update.. Ab toh monday bhi khatam hone aaye hai