#3 Devil's Bride manan ff link of thread 4 on pg 1 - Page 24

Originally posted by: Snehasn53

Hey pataaka
This was nerve twitching update seriously
I loved how manik calculated other's expression for his beloved wifey when they see her in that shimmery golden gown... Wow it's just cute Mr jealous malhotra... Liar liar definitely pants on fire... Than he made her angry by singing raat akeli hai buj gaye diye song ha that song was just perfect for that moment... Again she changed her attire into beautiful yet sexy red Saree which is definitely turn on for every male species the color only holds so much attraction than how could they miss such sight of that saree draped around milky white curves with such a adorable and pretty face...
Now only manik is controlling his intentions and wild desires but to add more fuel to his intentions the host announced separate couple dance... Like seriously how on the earth can someone accept such a breathtaking view is dancing with Mr anonymous...
This outcome is most expected from Mr Devil malhotra... Break the glasses hurting his own and pouncing on her like a ferocious tiger... But little did we know his very own tigress is no less than him...perfect for each other in every single way possibly and impossibly...
Aashu what's this yaar... Make out was such a freaking... Smoking... And shivering hawwttt
Damn I'm no more present in my senses totally lost maybe partial amnesia... I don't remember anything haae raam i can't describe what i felt reading that its way beyond letter's... I'm sorry but I don't know what to say... May be you were expecting atleast something to come as appreciation towards your hard work but pataaka I'm not that great person to spill it once again sorry... I can just say k this was heavenly reunion of two bodies skin to skin... Heart to heart and soul to soul...
Keep continuing the great work pataaka salute to you my little bundle of surprise and shock giver... I really wanna kiss the hell out of your hands...HEY AQSA PLSS DO THE FAVOUR FROM MYSIDE...GIVE A VERY TIGHT HUGGIE AND KISSII... I SO WANNA DO THIS BUT I'M NOT THAT LUCKY... 😭 😭
Pataaka continue soon and ha plss write that new story... I'll be waiting for it and haan lots of lovee and prayers for you and aqsa too both
Take care stay blessed

yar tere comment ko padh ke lag rha hai kash me devil's ki reader hoti schi muje bhi feel karna h jo tune kia yar koi or likh do isko i wanna read this but chlo koi bat nh happy to being a writer of this story which you love the most but yaar schi muje bhi experience karne ka man ho rha hai yar par yaar i was so afraid while posting it already aqsa is not there yar or phir usne bola ke best honi chiye,to samaj hi nh aa rha tha ke kya kru kya na kru me or likh skti thi par mene socha enough hai what if jyda ho gya toh report ka bhi dar lag rha tha yaar but luckily aisa kuch nh hua or tu kah rhi hai comment acha nh hai thats the best comment i have ever got: u can't even discribe what you felt or beyond anything for me yaar sachi love u for this comment
wese i wanna ask you what is your real name sneha hi hai na

Originally posted by: Aashna_chawla

yar tere comment ko padh ke lag rha hai kash me devil's ki reader hoti schi muje bhi feel karna h jo tune kia yar koi or likh do isko i wanna read this but chlo koi bat nh happy to being a writer of this story which you love the most but yaar schi muje bhi experience karne ka man ho rha hai yar par yaar i was so afraid while posting it already aqsa is not there yar or phir usne bola ke best honi chiye,to samaj hi nh aa rha tha ke kya kru kya na kru me or likh skti thi par mene socha enough hai what if jyda ho gya toh report ka bhi dar lag rha tha yaar but luckily aisa kuch nh hua or tu kah rhi hai comment acha nh hai thats the best comment i have ever got: u can't even discribe what you felt or beyond anything for me yaar sachi love u for this comment
wese i wanna ask you what is your real name sneha hi hai na

thank you for understanding my POV... Yup I'm Sneha only... Friends call me Sana, Tweety, titli and jaan

Originally posted by: RidzKhambhati

Wow awesome update...yaar its superb..First of all their fight over the dresses & Manik's devil mind talk its so nice...& then jealous Manik who carried Nandini on his shoulder omg...& then their talk cum fight over jealous Manik its so sweet..Then Manik's way to shut Nandu's mouth...& then makeout omg.its so bliss..its not at all vulgur for a moment..it's so passionate...You said it right that you don't make their makeout emotional but its so hot...& in last Manik asks Nandini about her virginity & their last first wala talk..its so nice...U panned this update so beautiful..its awesome..Waiting for next part & excited also..what will be their reaction wanted to know...Please update soon don't take so much time..please 😊

yeah as i told you no drama in these two last update uske bad no guarantee kuch bhi ho skta hai be aware from devil's wese next update is gonna be the different chapter of devil's i will update on sunday wait for it

Originally posted by: Snehasn53

thank you for understanding my POV... Yup I'm Sneha only... Friends call me Sana, Tweety, titli and jaan

ohho from now on i will call you titli butterfly u can fly and come to me wese even aqsq can't fullfill your wish coz me and aqsa we both are online chuddy buddies we never met she is from Hyderabad i am from Rajasthan bhot duri hai but she is like my soul sister dur dur hoke bhi pas pas or wese are you insta me nayi ayi hu love to add you there

Originally posted by: Aashna_chawla

ohho from now on i will call you titli butterfly u can fly and come to me wese even aqsq can't fullfill your wish coz me and aqsa we both are online chuddy buddies we never met she is from Hyderabad i am from Rajasthan bhot duri hai but she is like my soul sister dur dur hoke bhi pas pas or wese are you insta me nayi ayi hu love to add you there

OK.. Like that... Even I have cute little sisters from Pakistan UK and Mumbai... Whom I met through online
Yeah I'm in insta and the thing is I don't post pics there... I'm not in fb... Are you in hangouts??

Originally posted by: parthadmirer

Aashna sorry again fro late reply...

m really sorry yar...

but your update chapter 30 was a shock as new things were being opened...

and emotional too..

loved all the characters...

manik is reaction upto mark.. as it hasn't yet revealed but i think some misunderstanding...

alya's concerned reaction for nandini justified...

nandini reaction was too awesome...

in all a wonderful chapter...

emotional too...

aliya nandini scene was nice...

aliya was concerned for nandini and was happy that everything is going good between nandini and manik...

but nandini was escaping eye to eye contact with alya..

as the truth is different what is shown to the rest of the world...

manik could accompany nandini to hospital..

so alya accompanied her...

but whatever happened in hospital was shocking...

shocking is an understatement...

the world came down for all three... nandini alya and manik...

though all had different reason to get shock and hurt...

doctor after check up said that nandini needs to abort the child and she is very weak...

and cannnot carry the child...

and if she even then does so...

her life is in danger...

it was like a bomb...

nandini was numb hearing this and was not able to utter even a word...

even after alya consoling her she was not reacting...

finally finally after hearing manik name nandini gave in..

and she started crying in arms of alya...

otherside alya was consoling her...

and nandini let out everything in front of alya...

that their relation is not the same...

she cant abort the child at any cost...

because manik only wants his child nothing else...

and alya was not agreeing to her...

there comes a thud...

storm...

their convo heard by none other than manik malhotra...

that too half truth...

and it is said na that half truth is more harmful than a lie...

so this only happened...

he just heard abt abortion...

but the truth was not reveal to him abt nandini life being in danger...

he screamed on her that she cant abort the child and dragged her...

and the next thing came as a shock...

he actually her that why didnt she stopped him on that day...

nandini felt so humiliated...

and when she answered she didnt want to his question again hit her badly...

that dhruv wasnt enough...

he was again and again saying that she cant abort his child..

he loves his child very much..

and when nandini confronted him that dont hurt that much that he wont be able to repair...

he bluntly said he does not want even to get it repaired...

she was by now fully hurt with his words and with his grip too...

and then she was all the time thinking about her dreams...

where she hasnt asked for any prince but a simple loving guy...

but she got manik malhotra...

she was thinking how she was being forced for this marriage...

true said that the couple was diff in front of world..

and completely opposite in room...

manik is right as his perspective as he hurt beoz of some misunderstanding...

and he didnt even heard the full convo.

he dont know why they were talking abt abortion...

and nandini on other hand was hurt...

she herslef didnt want to abort and she was not ready to tell the truth to manik...

amazing work...👏

well that part was much needed just the glimps of dark zone so much to come or yes couple is different in front of the world or just opposite in room what to do concept is like that well you should read the next part make out coz i m waiting for your comment like how you will react on last part i really wants to know coz ab tak koi nh btya paya what they felt while reading it probably you are able to discribe so eagerly waiting for your comment read it whenever you got the time

Originally posted by: Snehasn53

OK.. Like that... Even I have cute little sisters from Pakistan UK and Mumbai... Whom I met through online
Yeah I'm in insta and the thing is I don't post pics there... I'm not in fb... Are you in hangouts??

nope hangouts to nhi but teri insta id kya i would love to follow you there

Originally posted by: Snehasn53

OK.. Like that... Even I have cute little sisters from Pakistan UK and Mumbai... Whom I met through online
Yeah I'm in insta and the thing is I don't post pics there... I'm not in fb... Are you in hangouts??

See I've sent request in insta...i. Hope that's your account only

i m realllyyy realllyyy srryyy sachi bht late ho gya reply krne mai...
i knw i m late once again srry...
update ws fabbb
hot...
cute naughty beautiful...awsmmm
frst of all the way u described manik s pov o god...that ws fantastically written...i ws laughing while reading the argue btw his mind n him ...heheh the little devil...u really nailed it...

the way he ws trying to make hr change hr dress so that no one else cn oogle at hr ws reallyyy funny hahah..seriously...

n thn in party...all people ogling at beautiful couple which indeed they r ...no doubt... .

thn jealousyprt...seeing manik jealous is treat to watch n i really liked tht prt... n thn the way he took hr on his shouldr ..prfct...wat else ccn u expct frm our vruy own MONSTER MANIK that too whn he is angry...no one cn stop him...

n thn the hottest prt of the update...the mst intrstig prt to read the way u wrote ws amazing...frst of all the agressive kisss...ummm imst say..u penned it so welll...it ws nt at allp vulgar n at the same time ws beautiful to read...
n thn whmn he said nw i will make u feel beautiful ..that is hw beautiful u r...in lv wid tht...n thn the rst prt ...amazing awsm superb...fab...lvd it...

cntinue soonnn...god knws n also u only knw wats gonna happen bt seriously vry vry curious to knw...

cntinue soonnn ...

tc

Aashna...🤗