#3 Devil's Bride manan ff link of thread 4 on pg 1 - Page 23

it was satisfactorily amazing...

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Such an amazing story

Originally posted by: BriNi

it was satisfactorily amazing...

i just have one complaint that can u just cmplt ur whole sentences..

beech beech me bahot words missing hote hai..

it affects the quality of writing...

waise bi main khud read krke samjh sakti hu but still...

n plz can u show that manik's realization about risk in nandini's pregnancy at xtream level...

kyuki abi tk is story me sb xtream level pr hi hua h ..

manik ko tbi pta chale jb wo helpless ho kuch nhi kr paye.. aisa..

tum tumhare ideas hi use kro wo jyada ache rahenge...

keep writing...

what to eo yaar i tried a lot phir bhi typing mistakes hmesha ho hi jati hai or my updates are quite long so bar bar editing isnt a possible thing for me any ways i will try my best to in next update or i cant tell you about story line but i promise atlast you wil be satisfied person

Originally posted by: --Kkkhushiii--

Such an amazing story

Read all 31 parts in one go

I must say ur a fab writer

Update soon

oh again got a new reader glad you like my story and next update is on sunday if you want pm u cn buddy me

Originally posted by: Kavyashree22

It was beyond expectation..hofff!!! But still i hate manik ya.. Lasttime in present track he said that he was not in senses..so what is this!! Waiting for present track..

he never said this he wasn't in his senses he just said why she didn't stop him if she don't wants to be with him thats all and your hatered is gonna increase in upcoming chapters

Originally posted by: parthsha

Ohhh my girl u rock seriously... But er font want misunderstanding now we want happy chaters atlesst 2-3 thn all separation track

its not possible dear as i told you last two update of happiness one i already updated one more to go and thanks glad you like it

Originally posted by: yash7717

U r seriously talking about report...
I want to mark it the best love manlking written ever on forum...


U knw what...not a percent vulgar...
It was pure love...
I loved the chapter...




And plz...
Happy tracks only...



Love u bby...u r awesome...
Keep updating...
Soon okkii
Gnuuu

that's the biggest complement and achievement for me thanks for this complement glad you like it
oh thats thanks for the coment i was so afrai

Originally posted by: tanishasac

It was amazing I loved it but was it the flash back ?

ha ji it was flashback and thank you glad u like it