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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
good ..
amazing ..

story is getting intresting ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Yaar make them couple soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Awesome update
Hamesha ki tarah romance ko disturb karne bala cabir aa hi jata hai
Vaise I don't understand ki cabir aur nandu apne relation ko sabse kyu chupate hai
Well continue soon
Thanks for the pm



Love you
Ekta
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: manan_eku

Awesome update

Hamesha ki tarah romance ko disturb karne bala cabir aa hi jata hai
Vaise I don't understand ki cabir aur nandu apne relation ko sabse kyu chupate hai
Well continue soon
Thanks for the pm



Love you
Ekta

i will clear your douts in coming updates
ekta dont worry
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Hudah18

Yaar make them couple soon

it will happen
surely
but takes little time

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Posted: 9 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: dhillon90

Amazing update
Ye confess kb krenge...ab toh manik ko cabir pr doubt ho gea...manan kiss miss ye cabir bhi na hamesha wrong tymng...lovd it
Continue soon

haa confess toh zarur karenge
lekin thoda time lagega

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Posted: 9 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Lovelylav7

I completed all chapters one ago..lovely updates..please pm me..Ur a nice writer

thank u for ur appreciation
really u made my day
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Manansamkhan

wow intresting story love it ..
cabir plzzz yaar kabi tho unlog ko chod do humesha unlog ke romance pe break banjate ho ..
its fun to read nandani n cabir brother sister bond n navya secret relationship with cabir ..
love it ..
cont soon .

thank u a lot for ur appreciation
u will have fun to read manik and mukti
brother and sister bond too
cabir is always breaker for romance na
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39

thought of uplaoding it yesterday bu was busy with amaravathi foundation ceremony. so not able to do it yesterday. thanks a lot for ur support


PART- 3 (B)

In cabir car

N: bhai aj hum bach gaye manik se

C: haa warna vusko pata chalega ki I am ur brother

Na: then he will also know abt us na tollu

C: jab ladoo ko bhi manik ko I love u bolna hoga

N: bhai me nahi bolungi aaj humari iss baat pe discussion hu hai, he said he will not love any one so how can I say haa

Cabir thinks how can I say to her that manik loves her more than she does and I cant break the promise given to manik. He said he will only say but he is in no mood to say it. I need to do something and bring them together, if I didn't help them they will not propose if they have grandchildren also. His chain of thoughts were broken by Nandini

N: bhai mey kuch batanahi bul gaya

C: kya hua ladoo?

N: bhai manik ko thum dono pe shak aagaya...vo mujhse thumari barimey pucha tha

Na: wht????hey matarani ab kya hoga????plz matarani humko save karo na

C: hey mollu kuch nahi hoga manik ko divert karna is so easy

"WHAT and HOW" both said in unison

C: relax just take Nandini name and he will get diverted immediately and automatically

Both cabir and navya busted into laughter while Nandini kept a fake angry pout and immediately started to blush. With that they reached the home and cabir dropped Nandini and took navya for hostel and to spend some time with her.

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Manik and mukti both reached home and were resting on the couch in the hall. Manik head in neyonika lap and mukti head on neyonika shoulder. She seeing their tired faces

Ne: kya hua meri darlings ko????

Mu: mom today bahot tagaya..sab Nandini ki vajese

Ne: wht did she do???

Mu: woh tho humesha workalcoholic hey...jab dekho practice practice

M: mukku she is ur bhabhi be carefull I am here only

Mu: I am not afraid of u get that

With that she twisted manik ear and he pulled mukti's nose and neyonika just smiled seeing her lovelies fighting cutely

Ne: yeh tho achi baat hey na aur vesebhi she is right only 1 week is left for ur recording na and u should have practice

M: mom we are fab 5 humesha acha hi karenga no need of practice

Neyonika smiled seeing their confidence or say over-confidence and just kept caressing their heads.

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Manik went to his bedroom and lied on his bed and started to stare at Nandini pic in his phone and same was the case with Nandini she was seeing manik pic in her phone.

Both are talking to their phone but not to each other. (Imagine them and mark they are not talking to each other)

M: r u mad at me??? Bcoz of today

N: how can I be angry with u manik I love the way u touch me

M: what u think about me???the way u reacted seems like u love me too??

N: I love u a lot ur proximity is affecting me a lot...i don't know how will I manage till we r together

M: I think its high time I should propose to her

N: mey manik ko boldunge ki I love him ab mey aur wait nahi karsakti

M: wait till recording is completed. This Performance will be the best in OUR life

N: if this song is hit I will say it manik

With that they both slept looking to their love's picture.

Precap: Nandini prank on manik

That's it wrapped it here

Say how it is

Plz do comments and say ur views

Love

Prathyusha

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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
awesome update...
loved it so much...
can't wait to see what happens next...
keep up the good work and continue soon...

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