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Posted: 9 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: khadupam

Awesome story
Read all the parts together
Do pm me the next part
Continue soon

thank u a lot
and i will definitely send a pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: aarohi_angel98

Amazing update...
Loved it...
Cont soon..

LOVE,
AAROHI...

thank u a lot😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
amazing ..

nice ..
manik n nandani want to tell thr feeling to each other after the album recording ..
thr r so sweet ..
love the update ..
wht is the prank..
update was small ..
cont soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54

guys thanks for ur support. last one is small so here it two parts of 4th chapter




Part 4 (A)

Its early morning 7:30 and manik is still sleeping and his phone started to ring. He with an irritated face look at the phone screen but all his irritation vanished by seeing Nandini name as caller ID. He immediately answered the call

M: Nandini u r fine na???? itni subah subah aaa

N:manik I am fine and I think u have forgotten today we decided to meet at the jam room na to practice??

Manik thought "ab tho thu gaya beta kya bolo vusse"

M: sry nandu I am on the way just 15 mins plzz

N: okkk I am waiting come soon

She hung up the call but the situation is Nandini is also sleeping on her bed and made a call to manik.

Nandini then victoriously smiled to her

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Mean while cabir came to wake Nandini and Nandini told him about her early morning prank to him and both burst in to laughter

C: ladoo tu na...bahot acha kiya vus monster ko call kiya

N: haa bhai warna iski vajese phir practice late ho gayega

C: acha jaldi ready ho jav maa ka phone aya and vo thumari barime pucha

N: really badi maa call kiya tho thumne mujhe vutha kyu nahi????

C: mom ne kaha nahi utaneko...thum bahot cute lagtihu when u sleep

N: acha chodo let me fresh

C: jaldi aav manik clz pochnese pehli humme paunchana hoga warna u r dead

N: oh shit!! I forgot bhai get ready fast

Both got ready and left for the college by picking navya in middle.

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Manik immediately got freshened and came downwards. Neyonika who was arranging breakfast gets shocked to see her son up so early

Ne: manik u fine naa???itni jaldi ut gaya

M: mom mujhe practice keliye jana hoga

Ne: kal tho thumne kaha we are fab5 and all...

M: mom nandu is waiting for me

Ne: so that's the reason why my son is up so early

M: mom ab no teasing I am already late

Ne: phir breakfast????

N: voh clz mey karlunga ...byee

He gave a peck on her cheek and left.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#55

part 4(B)

Nandini reached the clz and directly went to jam room while cavya went to canteen waiting for others. But today Nandini's ayaipaa want to tease her. By the time she entered manik was already waiting for her in the jam room for her. She gets seeing him shocked there

M: thum agaya itni jaldi???(Sarcastically) Aur mujhe bola I am waiting then where did u go???

N: voh manik mey na bus abhi canteen ke liya gaya hey

She stammered to say because she saw manik coming towards her taking slow steps.

M: do u think I will believe u easily

N: y wont u???

M: bcoz I came from canteen just now

She was shocked and thought "ab sach bolna padega".

N: voh manik mey abhi aaya

M: matlab jab thumne call kiya u r in your house???

He asked raising his eye brows and coming close to her. She moved back and collided to the near wall.

She tried to go but manik kept his hands on either side of her and blocked her way.

N: manik jhane do na??

M: kyu jhane du thum mujhe answer do kyi kyu kiya yeh sab???

N: voh...

She was searching for answers when she tried of a plan and came close to manik. Manik was shocked seeing her and immediately stepped back. She took the chance and sneaked out from jam room. She before going out she stopped and looked towards him

N: get ready practice Is going to start in 10 mins

And she ran from there to the canteen to call others. Manik seeing her exit started to smile

M: yeh tho mujhpe jadoo hi kardiya agar kisi aur ne kiya hotha yee sab tho mey vusse maar dethe to disturb my sleep but here I am smiling

He said to himself and started to tune his guitar.

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Nandini entered the canteen with a broad smile and settled down with others. Cabir seeing her smile started to tease her

C: lagthaye kisiki morning bahot achi hey aaj??

All are confused and kept starring at him while he just said Nandini is laughing na so it means she is happy. All smiled and left for jam room. They reached jam room and found manik all ready to start

ALL: good morning

M: haa...gud mng this is the my best mng ...

He said looking towards Nandini and she started to blush. Cabir and mukti who know the reason smiled while others were confused.

D: buddy wht r u saying ????mujhe kuch samaj mey nahi aarahahey??

Ab: haa manik kya hua itni subah subah???

A: haa manik wht happened???wake up on wrong side of bed or wht??

Na: hey matarani kya hua???koi jadoo hogaya kya??

C: guys..agar thum break dogi tabhi vo bolegi na...ab bol manik kya hua

M: woh...haa subah subah music play kiyana isiliye I am happy

All agreed but cabir, mukti were smiling and Nandini was blushing thinking him saying his morning was best listening to her voice first. With that they all started to practice.

That's it guys

Wrapped it here

for pms buddy me

Ab ek twist is waiting

Do say ur views

Love

PrathyushaP


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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Amazing update...
Prank was nyc...
Cont soon...

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
amazing ...

love the update ..
manik seriously jadoo hogaya morning morning uthna nandani ke liye yah nandani se dar ke ..

awsome superb update

cont ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
Amazing update
Naughty nandu manik ke saath prank hahaha...
best morning toh hoyegi hi manik ki nandu ne jo call kiya tha
Lovd it
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
Lovely update..twist..what twist..waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
Wonderful chappies
Prank toh nandu par hi bhari par gaya
Loved the whole updated
Thanks first the pm
Continue soon

Love your
Ekta

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