manan FF linked by destiny part 17 B/pg 139 (23 FEB) - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
Awesome
Superb update
You write really good
Continue soon

Love you
Ekta
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Awesome update manik is so caring abir is such a tease har kisi KO tease karta rehta hai par koi ni uski bhi Bari aayegi.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: manan_eku

Awesome

Superb update
You write really good
Continue soon

Love you
Ekta

thank u ekta for ur support
love u too for ur lovely comments 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: dhillon90

Amazing update
lovd it
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thank u
will try to update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ruchi116

Awesome update manik is so caring abir is such a tease har kisi KO tease karta rehta hai par koi ni uski bhi Bari aayegi.
Update soon

thank u and cabir will also bear teasing
when his relation is out 😉
y manik will leave him so easily
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
wow intresting story love it ..
cabir plzzz yaar kabi tho unlog ko chod do humesha unlog ke romance pe break banjate ho ..
its fun to read nandani n cabir brother sister bond n navya secret relationship with cabir ..
love it ..
cont soon .
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27

guys here is the update

Part 3 ( A )

All practiced for nearly 4 hrs with manan eye romance and they decided to take the break. They decided to Rome around the college. Nandini got up to leave but manik didn't let her go and made her sit

M: u r not going ?? samji thum ??

N: manik I am fine naa plz mujhe jane dho

M: nahi thum thumari leg ko stress nahi karogi samji!!

N: u r such a monster manik... y u will always be stubborn

M: because u always make difficult to make u understand

All are laughing seeing their bond. With all except manan went outside to rome. MukBhi in one direction and DruvAlya in one direction and off course cavya in another direction to spend time with their partners. Manik being manik thought to make use of this time to clear his douts about her feelings towards him.

M: Nandini thum tho druv aur alya ko ek kardiya thumari kya hey??

N: matlab??

M: thumari love story kab shuru karogi??

Nandini thinks that he is asking about my love that means he has no feelings for me. I wont say it now and break our friendship but his eyes and his care towards me is saying something more. Her chain of thoughts were broken by manik who clicked his fingers in front of her.

M: kaha ko gaya??

N: kuch nahi...

M: tho batav???thumari love story ki barimey

N:meri koyi love story hi nahi hey so mey kya bolungi and thum batav thum kisise pasand karogi????

Manik thought of saying that he loves her but after seeing nandu reaction saying she doesn't have any love story he decided not to say it to her

M: mey aur love no way... u know na I am a monster naa...

Nandini becomes sad

M: vaise nandu thum ko vus cabir aur navya kuch ajeeb nahi lagrahey?

N: what ??? aise kyu puchrahihey??

M: vo kya hey na mey cabir aur navya itni blush aur chat karte vuhi nahi dekha na isiliye thoda shak tha

N: mujhe tho koi ajeeb nahi lagrahihey.

With that she tries to go from there. She got up but falls down due to hitting manik's leg. She directly lands in manik's lap. Both look in to each other eyes. Manik started to tuck her hair strands behind her ear, which was giving shiver to Nandini. She tried to get up but manik was not in a mood to leave her so he again pulled her towards him. Now her hands were on his shoulders and his on her waist.

N: manik chodo na...koi aagayega??

M: thum tho koi problem nahi na tho baki ki barimey kyu soche??

Nandini started to blush and manik smirked seeing her reaction. He bought his face close to her and placed a kiss on her forehead and two of the eyes. Now he bought his lips near her lips. Nandini breath became heavy and she closed her eyes to get ready for their first kiss. Manik seeing her reaction was not able to control his desires. So he bought his face more closer to her. He was about to claim her lips when suddenly his phone started to ring, and both came out of their trance. With that they both stood up and Nandini started to blush and manik felt guilty of losing his control. He immediately took his phone and answered the call without seeing the caller ID. But the voice he listened made him get pissed off it was cabir.

C: kya hum jam room mey aasakthey hey???? Aur thum dono ko aur time chahiye romance karneke??

M: salley muh bandh rakh aur aaja andar sab ko leke...practice karenge

C: thum kaha practice karegi humesha Nandini ko dekhthe hi rehenge na

M: ab ek aur sabdh mey thumari muh aur haath dono thordungi ab thum na thumari drums bhi nahi bajavo gi samjhii..

C: kkk chill we r coming now

All came back to jam room and started to practice. It was off time for college so decided to leave.

M: Nandini mey drop kardungi thum ko aaj

N: kyu I am fine naa

M: but Nandini

N: manik u go aur mukti bhi na thumari saath

Mu: thumhey lagtahey mujhe problem hogi ha????

N: aise nahi hey

Mu: tho kya hey

Nandini helplessly looked towards cabir. He came to rescue his sister

C: ek idea hey mey humari clz hostel ki taraf hey jarahihu...so I will drop both navya and Nandini

Na: kk its good idea

N: kkk navya bhi mangaya tho kkk from me too

With that they departed to go Manik and mukti in their car and Dhruv and alya in their bike and cavya & Nandini in cabir car.

what is manan reaction after todays incident?

part 2 is coming

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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
nice story
love yr concept
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Amazing update
Ye confess kb krenge...ab toh manik ko cabir pr doubt ho gea...manan kiss miss ye cabir bhi na hamesha wrong tymng...lovd it
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
I completed all chapters one ago..lovely updates..please pm me..Ur a nice writer

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