manan FF linked by destiny part 17 B/pg 139 (23 FEB) - Page 2

Originally posted by: ruchi116

Nice cs
Now can't wait to read next part pls update the next part soon
Waiting to know how everyone will react after knowing nandu is cabirs sister n how manan gonna confess their love
So pls update soon

Originally posted by: princessangel23

Awesome 👏

Damn interesting ..!

Pls update soon

Loved it

Nyc start
Amazing characters
Lovd it
Continue soon

Awesome

Awesome update maniks parents also knows about his love this is damn amazing waiting to see some cabin I bond as bro sis I love them n also manans scene. In performance I'm sure we will get some manan romance waiting
Update soon

Originally posted by: manan_eku

Awesome

Loved it

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Ekta

Originally posted by: ruchi116

Awesome update maniks parents also knows about his love this is damn amazing waiting to see some cabin I bond as bro sis I love them n also manans scene. In performance I'm sure we will get some manan romance waiting
Update soon

awesome update...

Originally posted by: sharon.babu

awesome update...

loved it so much...

its a very interesting plot...there is a lot of scope in this story...

manan love each other...cant wait for their confession to happen...

nandu and cabir's bro-sis bond is amazing...along with navy's friendship...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

Thank u for ur support

Part-2

They all entered the jam room to practice and manan being the lead singers started to adjust their mike to their height. nandini removed her sandals and stood near her mike and by mistake she kept her leg on the screw, which has fallen from her mike stand, she immediately shouted in pain

N: ouchhh...

M: Nandini kya hua ????

With that he made her to sit in the chair and took her legs in to his hands and started to check it, after seeing blood oozing from her feet manik got tears in his eyes

M: nandini tum apni dhaan nahi raksakthey na ???sambal kar tho karsaktihu na??

N: manik thum mujhe kyu daat rahihu??

She said with a cute pout which made him smile immediately and cabir being the best brother did Nandini first-aid along with navya and asked all to take break for half an hour. so all except mukbhi and druv went for canteen. While in the jam room mukti is tunning her guitar while abhi is busy to watch her. Dhruv came and kept his hand on abhi shoulder

D: I think ur love train abhi bhi track pe nahi aya??

Ab: idiot mey thumse badhi hu lekin love mey tho tune mujhe cross hi kardiya na

D: yeh sab tho thumari aur thumari FV ki vajeseshi hey

Ab: FV?? Matlab??

D: simple thumari FEMALE VERSION i.e Nandini agar thum dono nahi hothi tho mey alya ko propose kya mey apni feelings ko accept hi nahi karta uskeliye

Ab: hoo ... ab mera help kaun karega??

D: aur kaun manik !!!! ^Wink^

Ab: what???? Agar usko pata chalgaya na who mujhe mardalega

D: acha theek hey chal canteen chalthiye

Druv along with MukBhi leaves for the canteen

CANTEEN

All are chit chatting while manik is restless thinking about Nandini. He asked cabir who came by now about Nandini

M: cabir who theek hey na??

C: she is completely fine

And seeing manik face he decided to change his mood then started to make fun of him

C: oye ...romeo usko ek chotisi injury hi hua tha... Thum tho ese tension lerahihey jaise voh labour room mey aur thumari bache ko birth denevaliye

M: abbey salley agar ab thum chup nahi betege na tho mey thumari muh thordunga abhi ki abhi

Cabir then kept expressions as if he was scared

C: mujhse meri muh se bahot pyar hey thume tho tease karna hey na

M: cabir just stop it yaar abb bahot ho gaya mey yeha frustration mey hu aur thum ko mujhe tease karna hey na abhi

To rescue cabir alya came and diverted his mind and she was succesfull in it

A: manik kya hua ??? y r u so tensed???

M: alya thumne dekha tha uski leg me blood ooze horahahey

A: manik its just a small injury and y r u taking it serious??

C: thum theek ho alya..who ek small one thi manik ...who theek hey na navya henaa uski paas

M: haa parr kya karu yaar usko pain mey nahi deksatha hey and I didn't protect her

A: wht r u saying manik thum na??

C: alya is right buddy thum kyu itna stress lerahihey

Meanwhile Dhruv with MukBhi entered the canteen and found them talking seriously. Manik being impatient to see Nandini immediately stood up and went to abhi

M: abhi where is Nandini??? She is fine na??

Ab: manik thum itna hyper kyu horahey vo theek hey vo navya ki sath aarahihey...see they are here

NavNi entered the canteen and manik immediately goes towards nandini and cupped her cheeks

M: Nandini u r fine na??

N: I am fine manik

kept her hand on his hand and both are lost in each other eyes and they are brought back by the great romance breaker cabir's cough

C: ahem...ahem... thum dono wapas iss duniya mey aayegaa yah nahi??

Both manan left their hands and started to look here and there. They settled themselves in their seats

N: guys lets practice naa??

M: and our nandu is back again...he said it with a broad smile on his face

C: haa nandu thum humesha workalcholic kyu ho??

N: matlab??? Don't u want to practice??

A: nandu u r fine na ?? agar If u want then u can take rest

Mu: yeah alya is right if u want u can take rest

N: thum dono naa... I am absolutely fine

With much difficulty they agreed to practice and manik being manik. How can he stress his love. So he brought a chair for her and kept it near the mike

N: manik yeh kya hey??

M: thum tho meri baat nahi sunti na isiliye and winks at her

Nandini smiled seeing his care towards her and kept looking at him. Her thoughts were broken by manik

M: nandu r u ready my lucky charm????

He said lovingly looking towards her. To which she smiled and replied

N: yeah...with blushing for his words on "MY" lucky charm

On seeing this cabir came back on his track

C: thum dono ko na koyi romantic film mey act karo na... I bet it will be a super duper hit

All bursted into laughing leaving blushing nandu and irritated manik he just rolled his eyes

Na: cabir thum na kabhi bhi usko nahi chodho gi na she wishpered in his ears

C: kaise chodunga voh tho meri aadat hey... and vaise bhi thum ko bahot pyaar aarahahey meri behen par??kyu??

Na: kyu ki vo meri bff hey and more over she is my tollu sister na

C: haaa...manna padega thumari planning ki to impress my family...kya shaadi aj hi karna hey kya???

With that navya start blushing and hit him playfully on his shoulders. While cabir was laughing and this was noticed by manik

M: thum dono kya whispher karrahi hey ??? aur navya thum itna blush kyu karrahihey???

To divert manik from cabir Nandini immediately turned his attention towards her by saying to start practice and with that they started to practice...

That's it guys

I wrote this only. I hope u like it.

And manan convo on love and their small romance is on the way in the next part this one became long one so needed to cut it

Isiliye convo went to next part

And manik ko cavya ape shak ho gaya ab kya vusko kaise pata chalega cavya ki relationship ki barime

Say whether u liked it or not and criticism is also welcomed

And u can say what u feel openly plzzz do comments

Love

Prathyusha