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ankita_t

@ankita_t

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Hi,

I really want to thank you all for all the appreciation once again...I left writing poetry and short stories long back in my Engineering Days...With time I couldn't pursue my hobby, but thanks to IF, I started to write again after almost 8 years, though isn't my best i know that...

I am writing for the 1st time this genre of writing...so, in case I am not that good, please forgive me...But, I will try my best to keep you engaged and yet keep the characters as real as i can...also the situations too...

It's my first attempt on a love story to be honest, I have done poetry and my fortay was never such stories...But, here I am...

So, question time for readers- Let's engage ourself a bit before I publish Chapter 9 in (4 parts)...

What do you think is Nandini's past and Nandini's simple dream in life???

If you comment and let me know I would really be happy...If you can't take out time for it no problem, i'll still update the Chapter 9 in small parts...its the turning point of the story...

Edited by ankitathanvi - 10 years ago

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Tanvi

@manan58

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

I thnk it is related to a guy..

He has somewhat demeaned her image... Or maybe used her or something..

Pls post soon

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Pari_mananholic

@Pari_mananholic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

I think tht nandu might be in a relationship...

and tht would have judged her...and thy broke up...

and abt her dream idk..

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sonia1000

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

I guess she fell for a guy..Or may be she was in Live-in or something of this sort..cus that girl was saying "bechari kis pe trust karegi, hope so some day you would find a guy for yourself... Vaise chances toh nai hai" I just felt k it was something very serious..though I hope I'm wrong..I want Manik to be the first and the last guy to come that close to her..

please continue soon..I'm waiting :P

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sonia1000

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Posted: 10 years ago

#75

I just want to tell you one thing that you are one of the great writers here..you have the potential..and should never think of abandoning this hobby of urs like you abandoned poetry..You should write more..I would love to read more from you :) One thing I love about you is that you write because you love writing and you don't care about how many comments you are getting..you are happy even if you get just one comment..thats the spirit..

I guess not many people know about this ff..otherwise this thread would have been full of comments and praises :D

P.S. Stop apologizing for not being a good writer..otherwise you'll get a punch from me *Nandini style* 😆 (just kidding don't mind 😳) You are doing a great job trust me 😃

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ankita_t

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Posted: 10 years ago

#76

PRECAP FOR CHAPTER 9(A)

Thank you for the replies...😊 I sincerely appreciate your participation...

But before we go too deep in her past, let the girls have some "GIRLS TIME".....And, not to forget it's their close friend AKSHAY'S Wedding so one stop will be at Akshay's place before the climax builds up...

I think we need some lighter moments too...and these lighter moments will be helpful for our Dearest Nandini to think that she has a life too, she can if she try laugh with her heart...Let's see how does the HANDSOME MANIK MALHOTRA reacts to when he witnesses Nandini's 1st ever heart-smile and not to forget her brilliant dance moves but this time with no after-effects..

LET'S INTRODUCE MANIK's Family to NANDINI too now...

FAB 5 is again on their spree of teasing their best friend Manik...😆 and let him be a bit dumbstruck when Nandini dances on something which leaves him blushing...

And not to forget NANDINI is all set to wear a saree...MR. MALHOTRA WILL HAVE A TOUGH TIME...

So, before we go to deep in her past, we should let Nandini atleast acknowledge that she can live again if she tries...😊

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Tanvi

@manan58

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Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Wow superb...
When r u postin the nxt chp?

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ankita_t

@ankita_t

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Posted: 10 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: sonia1000
I just want to tell you one thing that you are one of the great writers here..you have the potential..and should never think of abandoning this hobby of urs like you abandoned poetry..You should write more..I would love to read more from you :) One thing I love about you is that you write because you love writing and you don't care about how many comments you are getting..you are happy even if you get just one comment..thats the spirit..
I guess not many people know about this ff..otherwise this thread would have been full of comments and praises :D

P.S. Stop apologizing for not being a good writer..otherwise you'll get a punch from me *Nandini style* 😆 (just kidding don't mind 😳) You are doing a great job trust me 😃

Hi Sonia,

Thank you, really thank you from the bottom of my heart...you seem to be a keen observer, yes i love writing and that's why its more important that who reads this story, likes my work, critic it and build a good bond...😊

Coming to Poetry, hhmmm i'll try and pen down something for sure in coming chapters, i am just waiting for these next 2-3 chapters to go past...I'll surely show you from nandini's point of view a small draft of poetry...I used to write only in English, but this time specially on your request I'll try something in Hindi...ONLY COZ YOU ASKED ME...😊

Hhmmm you are a sweet person, i am really looking forward to know you as a person as the story progresses ahead...It's no longer my brain child, every reader is now a part of it...😊

And ya, i don't mind if you punch me, you can 😊😆

Ok, i need start writing the draft for Chapter 9 (A)...coz i wanna finish this chapter this weekend itself as I have a very busy schedule for next 2 weeks...But, I'll try to be regular...

And ya, I am a consultant too so my schedules are very abrupt...Sorry about that.

Thanks again...