#3MaNanSS:Dheere Dheere Link To Thread 4/PG1/17th-OCT - Page 100

Such a beautiful update di
Kese kr lete ho yar
Loved evry single bit of it!
Harshd tried to rape her.dt ws a shock. Bloody harshad huh
Bechari kitta dar gyi thi
Nd i love d way they hug <3
Loved nandu's reactn when she came to knw dt he hd to go. Awww he didnt wnt to go nd nandu too became selfish..dt ws soo cute n beautiful
Nd d bond between fab4 n nandu..amazing
Loved dis whole part
Kese evrybdy tried to keep her happy nd feedin her food
Sachi mein shez a chhotu sa pyara sa bachaaa

Dn again a big shock
Harshad kidnappd her. I thought bs usko save krenge n ol
Bt it turned out to b smthin else
itttaa kch ho gyaaa
Manik hd to prove his love
Bt u knw i love harshad hehe
Uski vajah se dey r closer now
M lovin it

I loved dese lines too much

"Cabir..! Tu nahi janta usy..! Yaar bachi hai wo she needs extra care..!My care..! Har cheez say dar jati hai..! Usyandherysay dar lagta hai..! Wo khana nakahyetou us ka sugar level low ho jata hai..! Wo bht jaldi ro parti hai..! Usy mery begair nend nahi ati hai..

Dt ws an amazin update mawara

Originally posted by: Mawara_Ejaz

aray tou myny kab bola dear k ap comment karo? Oh God..! iam done..agr pasand ni tou mat prho...mj say ziada achy writers hain is forum pay un ki stories prho myny kise ko bhi force nahi kiya k meri story read karo yaar agr you agree with her its your choice..me sachi kuch nahi kar skti such a humiliation it is..too much disappointed i am...main apny ap ko innocent prove nahi kar rahi mjy koi zarorat bhi ni hai apny app ko innocent prove krny ki smj i? mera dimag nahi khrb k pagloon ki trha sara sara din type karoon aur baad main khud ko "innocent" prove karoon got it? now stay away from my stories i will write the way I WANT..! I DON'T Want readers like you ziada social worker ban'nay ki zarorat nahi hai..!

Meri female lead say problem hai na? let me explain..!

In Tum Mile: Losing parents in such a young age u think it's easy? haan? even my father died 8 months ago only I know how I am living without him...tou naturally banda weak ho jata hai..!

In It's Love:Nandini was RAPED..! She lived her life for 1 long year without family..! You think it's also very easy? haan? and jab usy koi mila jo us ka khyl rakhta hai tou ab wo usy bhi tantrums na dikhye? that's what u want?

And yeah Dheere Dheere:Nandini is just 20 years old yaar come on ab usy dadi ama bana doon?

aur tum acha comment ni kr skti na meri jaan aur tmy dar lagta hai k me "kindly check" ka sign board laga kay khud ko "innocent" prove karoon ki tou STAY AWAY FROM MY STORIES..!

GET THAT YA AUR BHI KUCH SAMJHOAN?

Ty for d pm...

awsm loved it

Originally posted by: mishshergill

You know what there is a decent way to give your views and suggestion. What u call critism... It isn't critism if it hurts the writer... Choose your words wisely if u eager to give your suggestion... And she is innocent coz she is entertaining hundreds of ppl like u and u just come out of no where and spiok all this...

I would suggest choose your words wisely...and if u don't like work then sty away away and don't read it...she is my bestie and I won't tolerate any further nusince... Plz dont disture someone's else life with all this...

Get a life young lady!

Wooow wow wooow..

Hey its Juss awesome..phle i was a silent reader..but nw ua story has forced me to cmment...its really vry awesome...plsh do pm me in d next part ..nd ya its awesome nd Masht

Baaappp reee itnaaa sara drama
Smetimes I was smiling, smetime I was frowning,smetime I was about to cry
U never stop surprising me 😃
But the shaadi wala part was like a bomb on me
I was expecting the filmy wala proposal first
But when its uu na then we cannot predict anything
LOL
Now I'm sure the filmy wala proposal will be more interesting as he would be proposing his wife not girlfriend. And thts wht make them unique
😃
Jaldi update karo
Lots of love and blessings 👏