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Posted: 9 years ago
helooo...appi...i am back with comments...soo sorry...for not commenting..too long...sorryyy...acha now coming to updates...nandu's confession was...so sweet...amazing...and nandu's room...ahhh...superbb...woow...fab3...amazing...awsome...then nandu's meeting...with everyone...amazing...then nandini pani main gir gai...thenk god TIGER ne bacha liya...then truth came out...wooww...mindblowing...mr.malhotra is villan in this story...amazing...then there bonding...was...mindblowing...superb...muahhh...!!

NOE COMING TO THIS UPDATE...

YEH HARSAD JERK YAHAN BHI A GAYA...😡...AND HE TRY TO MANUPLATE MANAN...AWWW...!! NANDINI IS SO SCRAD...THEN FAB3 AND HARSHAD SCENE...MINDBLOWING...AND THEN NANDINI TELL MANIK ABOUT HARSHAD...OMG!! HARSHAD NE RAPE KARNE KI KOSHISH KI..NANDU KE SATH...THEN NANDINI SLEEP AND FAB5 CONVO...SUPERB...THEN MANIK HAVE TO GO DUBAI...AWWW!! NANDU...SHE IS SO SCARED...BUT WO MANIK KO ROK NHI SAKTI...APNI WAJA SE...SHE IS RIGHT IN HER PLACE...THEN JACK FUNNY DIALOGES...😆...LOVELY...THEN MANAN CONVO...SOO SWEET...AND MANIK JANE SE PEHLE SAB KO INTRUCTIONS DE KAR GAYA...HE IS SOO CARING...AWW...AND THEN NANDINI MANIK KO JANE NHI DENA CHAHTI THI...SOO SADDD...AWWW...SHE IS CRING SO BADLY...THEN JACK AND NANDU'S SCENE...AMAZING MINDBLOWING...SUPERB...AND THEN NANDU'S TANTRUM IN EATING FOOD...😆...THEN MANAN CALL CONVO...SOO AMAZING...THEN WAITER CAME AND TELL MANIK IS CALLING HER...AND THEN HARSHAD KIDNAPPED HER...THEN FAB4 FINDING NANDU...AND THEN MANIK CAME...AND HE WAS SHOCKED...THEN WAITER...SAID TRUTH...AND THEY REACHED..HARSHAD LOCATIONS...AND THEN HARSHAD MANUPLATE NANDINI...AND SHE TRAPPED IN HARSHAD'S PLAN...THEN MANIK CAME AND SHE TELL KE WO USE BHI CHOR DENGE...AWSOMEE...MINDBLOWING...THEN MANIK KA GUSSA...AND GUSSE MAIN USNE NANDU KE SATH SHADI KARLI...CHALO..MANIK KE GUSSE NE KUCH TO ACHA KAM KIA...😆...BUT AMAZING...AND THEN HE LOCKED NANDINI IN ROOM...AND THEN JACK AND MANIK SCENE...WOOOW...MAZA A GAYA...THEN MANAN KISS...SOO SWEET...BHTTT HI AWSOME CHAPTER THA...MAZA A GAYA...AWALLLAAA...😉

THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR SENENDING ME PMS...Q KI MAIN VBHT TIME SE COOMENT NHI KAR RHI THI...SOO BIGG WALA THANKS...

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Posted: 9 years ago
This cmmnt fr 13th chptr.. ws stuck in tution dts y m late thda sa...
This prt ws sooo sweetu sa part... really full of love nd frnshp..
Strt frm tiger shouted n den manik listened evrythng... nd pda tiger ko manik ka punch..hawww so unexpctd..
Den cabir knew evrythng.. wahh mjhe lg hi rha tha.. heheee... nd manik ws hurt dt his frnz lied bt fr his own gud nly.. n he ran away nd nandu so cutely askd evryone to tell... acha so isme nyonika k jgh mr.malhotra evil nikle... so cheap apne fayde k lie manik ki lyf ko risk p daal di so selfish of him.. nd dts y fab3 left.. hmm.. frnz hte hi aise h dey cn do nythng... luvd it.. bt cabir ws der dts gyd.. but manik baba ne to sb sun liya..yayyieee nd den he hugged tiger...aww.. nd dey had group hug... thanks to nandu dey r bck again... she is truly an angel.. nd she left dem alone... so innocnt n pure soul... loved each n evry prt of d update... full of sweetness nd den tiger remembrd abt 'pyari ladki' nd jack ws excited hahaaa.. nd manik ws lyk 'meri gf' heheee... luvd it.. frnz hving fun.. nd manik went to luk fr nandu..
Here she ws in her room n happy fr her love.. manik... nd here he cums.. der kiss n romance ws sizzling.. beautifully penned dwn.. she didnt wnt to disturb him wid his frnds..awww so cute.. but manik tuk her.. nd in night dress nly.. nd she ws sitting letting d frnz njoy demselves... i lykd it.. she ws happy fr dem.. wud luv to see her njoying wid fab5 too.. nd manik hw cn he frgt to feed his love... so caring... nd wenevr he feeds her na dt prt z also my fav.. wat to do u ryt evrt scene so beautifully ki all r my fav.. heheee.. luv ur writing skills... so perfect.. nd den manan on walk nd she jumped seeing buttrfly lyk a kid.. nd manik adoring her... nd nd ndd.. here cums a villian 'harshad'.. ok ok i won't annoy u by saying no sepratn... we all trust u.. u wont seprat dm... dats anothr reasn i luv ur stries soo mch... nd harshad knw bth of dem.. nd sum night he is tlking abt.. m sure he mst hv done smthng... jerkshad.. i so hate him.. ok ok i'l read nxt one n be bck wid d cmmnt again... luv yaaa... eagr to read d nxt one but cnt read nw odrwise mum will throw chappals on me heheee... aftr dinnr i'l b bck... c yaaa.. tc... nd sun saathiya n its love kb update hnge.. i knw u r bz bt try to update soon.. m waitinggg fr dm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome yaar mawara so grt ...!
Impulsive manik ...!
Grt bond between fab 4 and nandu
U pot rayed it so nicely
And tht jerkshad 😡
Ulta latka ke maaro use to...!
Finally r manan and supportive friends ..😳
Tysm for the flawless update ...
And pls update soon
Stay happy stay blessed
Edited by princessangel23 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
O goodness, I can't believe ho evil Harshad was, poor Nnadhu, so glad all the boys know, and Manik's actions... can't believe they are married now, looking forward to what happens next and what they do to Harshad, and please do keep writing the way you do- your characters are different and cute and have a huge fan following... terrific job, hope u r enjoying uni..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh my goodness what a mind blowing update. The way manik is aggressive. It's so intense update with lots of twist. After the marriage how all his friends make him understand. That is so good. Keep writing n stay blessed.
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Posted: 9 years ago
OMG all this happened in one update
The update was awesome
4 brothers love for nandini was so cute
I loved Jack and Nandini's masti and fight it was so funny I was laughing so much on them
And Finally MaNan are married I'm so happy I loved this twist so much
I enjoyed alot reading this update
And one more thing I love ur all stories because of nandini's character u made hai so cute
Ur stories are amazing u don't need to prove because it's all ready proved by votes u are on No.1 and I'm really happy for u
All the best
Keep smiling :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome!!!!
mind blowing!!!
fabulous update!!!
loved it...
harshad...jerk...how can he behave lyk dat with ur nandu...
fab 4 guarded nandini with brotherly...
i love d bond they have with nandini...
how they will survive without each other?
hoo..nandu...u r such a pure soul...
loved her character...
wat harshad kidnapped nandini?
fab4's fear 4r manik...
wen nandini is missing...
atlast they nandini...
bt wat nandini ask...make manik more vulnerable...
marriage?
i didn't expect dis in dis chap...
fab 5's bond loved it...
loved d whole chap...
wtng 4r further updates...
cont soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
My mawara baby is bck wid her awsme update..
Hw much ur loving dis story we r loving it mre n mre n mre...its so awsme..
I liked da story line so much,mature boy n a teenage gal..we can so relate to her..she being manipulated n all,it seems so real,it happens to ur..we dnt think much,we jst gt manipulated...i loved dis part like crazy..so much drama ek hi chapter mai..n i read ur 13th chapted aaj,wahh kya milaya fab 5 ko,im jst loving dis bond n da bond dey share wid nandu too,behan behan,its so heart warming..!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Mawara_Ejaz

aray tou myny kab bola dear k ap comment karo? Oh God..! iam done..agr pasand ni tou mat prho...mj say ziada achy writers hain is forum pay un ki stories prho myny kise ko bhi force nahi kiya k meri story read karo yaar agr you agree with her its your choice..me sachi kuch nahi kar skti such a humiliation it is..too much disappointed i am...main apny ap ko innocent prove nahi kar rahi mjy koi zarorat bhi ni hai apny app ko innocent prove krny ki smj i? mera dimag nahi khrb k pagloon ki trha sara sara din type karoon aur baad main khud ko "innocent" prove karoon got it? now stay away from my stories i will write the way I WANT..! I DON'T Want readers like you ziada social worker ban'nay ki zarorat nahi hai..!
Meri female lead say problem hai na? let me explain..!
In Tum Mile: Losing parents in such a young age u think it's easy? haan? even my father died 8 months ago only I know how I am living without him...tou naturally banda weak ho jata hai..!
In It's Love:Nandini was RAPED..! She lived her life for 1 long year without family..! You think it's also very easy? haan? and jab usy koi mila jo us ka khyl rakhta hai tou ab wo usy bhi tantrums na dikhye? that's what u want?
And yeah Dheere Dheere:Nandini is just 20 years old yaar come on ab usy dadi ama bana doon?
aur tum acha comment ni kr skti na meri jaan aur tmy dar lagta hai k me "kindly check" ka sign board laga kay khud ko "innocent" prove karoon ki tou STAY AWAY FROM MY STORIES..!
GET THAT YA AUR BHI KUCH SAMJHOAN?

I totally agree with u Mawara...
beshak Nandini ko childish dekhaya hai but there are solid reasons behind them as u mentioned
Jo kuch pehle Nandini k sath howa vo kisi k sath bhi hota to os main itni himat nai k vo strong ban sake
It's that we writers work hard to give reality to the story... Agr ye sab real main hota to i don't think that person will be strong
Sab stories main jo kuch howa os sab se Nandini ka ye behavior bilkul theek hai... is se pata chalta hai k she suffered a lot...
Ja k dekh lo is forum p more than 90% stories main Nandini aesi hai...
Readers love to read this side of Nandini that is why it is shown in the story...
Obviously jab majority.. not majority but all the readers want this Nandini then yehi Nandini hogi... Jis ko problem hai vo na parhe...
Mawara is writing, working hard for those who loves her stories not for those who just find something to criticize her..
If u like it then read otherwise just saty away...
or agr nai bhi rehan hai to jo marzi karain but dosaron ki feelings ki to care karain...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Shaadi go gayi...??

I am in a shock

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