ADarkMaNanSS-WILL MAKE YOU MINE CH-7 PG-30 25/10 - Page 7

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suraiya77 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
Poor nandu feeling really bad for her..
Don't know what Manik will do to her
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
Good idea
show leap.. n than flashback nice
I m waiting for update


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MUJHE TERI ZAROORAT HAI (MANAN DARK SS)
TUM HI HO (MANAN FF]

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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
hey dear ur story is really nyc & different.
i read it in on go & i liked it very much.
manik is such a monster.bt it's ok after all it's a dark
story.poor nandu felling bad for her.now eagerly
waiting for next update.plz accept my buddy
request and pm me.
cont soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
Yes you can continue with the leap .i think it would be a good idea . update the next part soon . keep smiling 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
So, guys i am back...
Read karna and do tell me how was it..as i am happy with respons..Agar story achhi lagi toh reply karo. I try to update daily and i have given two long updates it's the third...

HAPPY READING..!!!

CHAPTER-2B

5 YEARS LATER..

LOCATION: LONDON , ROUNDHOUSE

The massive crowd howled and grouled..
" NM " " NM" that was what it sounded like.. The people wore shirts and held boards which said " WE LOVE YOU NM "...
The view was spectacular and so was the personality.. A girl of around 28 stepped on the stage and that was it , the crowd went numb , some were crying...can't believe that they saw "NM" i mean " THE NM "...

NM- good evening London...

And she started

( the music started and she also started moving with the sync )

Nice to meet you
Where you been?
I could show you incredible things
Magic, madness, heaven, sin
Saw you there and I thought oh my god
Look at that face, you look like my next mistake
Love's a game, wanna play
New money, suit and tie
I can read you like a magazine
Ain't it funny rumors fly
And I know you heard about me
So hey, let's be friends
I'm dying to see how this one ends
Grab your passport and my hand

( she had something in her voice , a zeal )

So it's gonna be forever
Or it's gonna go down in flames
You can tell me when it's over
If the high was worth the pain
Got a long list of ex-lovers
They'll tell you I'm insane
Cause you know I love the players
And you love the game

( the crowd was growling. They were loving it and on the other hand tears were forming in her eyed thinking about her past )

Cause we're young and we're reckless
We'll take this way too far
It'll leave you breathless
Or with a nasty scar
Got a long list of ex-lovers
They'll tell you I'm insane
But I got a blank space baby
And I'll write your name

( forgetting about everything she continued )

Cherry lips
Crystal skies
I could show you incredible things
Stolen kisses, pretty lies
You're the king baby I'm your queen
Find out what you want
Be that girl for a month
But the worst is yet to come
Oh no
Screaming, crying, perfect storms
I could make all the tables turn
Rose garden filled with thorns
Keep you second guessing like oh my god
Who is she? I get drunk on jealousy
But you'll come back each time you leave
Cause darling I'm a nightmare dressed like a daydream

So it's gonna be forever
Or it's gonna go down in flames
You can tell me when it's over
If the high was worth the pain
Got a long list of ex-lovers
They'll tell you I'm insane
Cause you know I love the players
And you love the game

Cause we're young and we're reckless
We'll take this way too far and leave you breathless
Or with a nasty scar
Got a long list of ex-lovers
They'll tell you I'm insane
But I got a blank space babya
And I'll write your name

( dancing along the beats she ended the song )

" NM " " ONCE MORE " " AWESOME " was all that could be heard..

NM- thank you guys , you all were awesome now i'll take a leave..

After finishing her performance she went to her vanity van and as she opened the gate she got a shock.. She saw Fab 4 sitting over there waiting for her... She never expected them to be here..

NM- what the hell!! What are you doing here..karan , Karan ( NM'S PA )

Karan came..

NM- what are they doing inside my vanity...

K- i told them not to enter but they said that they are your friends...so..

NM- any one will say any thing and you will believe.. I don't know them..can you all just leave..

C- nandini ek bar hamari baat sun le..it's important..

( so finally khulasa sa ki NM is Nandini Murthy )

NM- please i don't know you all so just leave..

Mu- nandini it's enough agar ham kuchh nahin keh rahe it dosen't mean ki tum kuchh bhi botli jao..

NM- fine..karan i'll be coming in 5

They all entered in the vanity and setteled..

N- bolo kya hai..lekin if it's about him then please mere pass time nahin hai...

A- but nandini hum yeh janna chahte te the ki tum achanak se chali kyun aayi..you know when you left tab se manik ki halat bahut kharab ho gayi hai and he is guilty aur to usne yeh bhi realise kia ki how much he loves you..

N- ohh please alya don't me love and all crap..i know ki woh ek womaniser hai..uske seva uski kuchh aukat bhi nahin hai..

D- nandini hame batao toh why did you left that to all of a sudden...

FLASHBACK ( 5 years back )

As manik broke the kiss. He pushed nandini towards the bed. She fell on the bed and started moving in backward direction while manik was coming opening his shirt. Her back crashed the headboard. Now she was trapped between manik and the headboard. Manik laid her on the bed and came on top of her. He touched her shoulders , traced his fingure and moved towars her hand. He then interwined their hands.

On other hand his touch send a shiver down her spine. It was really different for her. She wasn't able tonretionalise her feelings.

Manik then started kissing her. From her lips to her throat to collar bone to shoulder. He then opened her dress and threw it on the floor and undressed himself aswell. He left a trail of wet kisses from her clevage to her belly.

He then occupied her in a swift move..
Nandini let out a loud shriek.
He did it like about 2-3 times and then suddenly sat up.. Saying something under his breadth. Wearing his tracks he left the room.

On the other hand nandini sat there covering herself with the bedsheet crying bitterly. After like half an hour she left his house after wearing her clothes and fixing her hair and i little touch up nahin toh mummy ko kuchh poochti toh...

Manik on the other side was like...
" what happened to me all of a sudden. It wasn't my first time aur mujhe uske tears dekh ke hurt hua but... You know what manik just leave it. It hardly matters...

FLASHBACK ENDS

Nandini went through a brief memory and then answered their question..

N- you all don't know anything and its a long story..
Audition wali raat he called me his home and threatened me ki main agar uske
Sath nahin soyi toh mera contract lelega and it was very inportant for me and for
Papa.

All this while her face was expressionless and this statement and her face stunned them..

N- tum log betho... Its a long story sab batati hoon...
Next day when i came to office to sign the contract... That day aslo he forced me that too in office...


I am tired right now so abhi bas itna...
Next day ka flshback next update mein...
Do comment. And please intimate likhne ko mat bolna...
Woh mujhse na ho payega...hehe that isn't my cup of tea..
Jo hua i tried ab isse jyada main nahin likh sakti...
And the song was " BLANK SPACE " by TAYLOR SWIFT...

LOADS OF LOVE..

ADYA..


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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
It was amazing!!! 👏
Eager to know what made nandini murthy NM😲
Continue soon!!! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Amazing
N thanks for the PM
😊
bhagupur thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
Dear Adya...it's awesome update.
After 5 year London. .Nm.
Very interesting turn...
She is famous now. ..
The fab 4 were asking her ...about come to him.
The flash back is interesting. ..so he intimate. ..
Your details are good enough to show
How much dark he is..
Your story is going well and very interesting way.
The song is also tell her condition very much. 💔.
Please update soon can't wait to read. 😛.
Thanks for sharing this unique story.
Stay blessed. .






P.s thanks for pm.





With love. .
Jyoti.😛.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
Nice...matlab story wl b like parts in flashbck n parts in present...I lv it...
Why is manik lik dis...? N wht reqlly hpnd in d pst dat nandu left evrythng n moved on...? I mean wht worse dn manik forcng himslf on nandu could hv hpnd..?
It's a mystry n I lv mystry...
U write awsm...plz gv us longgg updts..

Plz continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
So osm...
Loved it...
N Plz try to update daily i really like yr story...

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MUJHE TERI ZAROORAT HAI (MANAN DARK SS)
TUM HI HO (MANAN FF]


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