ADarkMaNanSS-WILL MAKE YOU MINE CH-7 PG-30 25/10

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man1402

@man1402

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

really loving your story alot dear... keep updating and god bless u...⭐️

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Sukanya

@Sukanyadhar12

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#52

It was really amazing update . please post the next part soon . thanks for the pm. keep smiling 😊

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Adya Agrawal

@Adya05

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: dhillon90
Awesome update
Manik toh kch bhi kr skta hai aur iss liye wo nandu ki situation ka fayda utha rha hai
Agar iss tym ye haal hai jb wo nandu se pyar krega tb kya krega...ab shayad wo nandu ko kabhi bhi bula skta hai jb use uski jaroorat hogi
Lovd it
Continue soon

Well to know more keep reading and commenting..

Updates ke sath sath sab clear hota chalega...

Thank you..!!

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Adya Agrawal

@Adya05

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: sharon.babu
awesome update...
no matter how hard someone fights between their heart and mind...the heart always seems to have the upper hand...
hope manik realises his mistake and stops in the middle...
can't wat to see how this turns into a love story...
keep up the good work and continue soon...

You are right...heart have the upper hand..

But if the lines are crossed then mind conqurors all...

Thank you...

Keep commenting..

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Adya Agrawal

@Adya05

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#55

NOTE

Guys i have a question...

Yesterday night when i was studying i got an idea..why not give the story a leap and show very important sequences in flashback..

It will make the story interesting...but only if you all want..and one more thing if the story will be in present then the sequence of present and the flashback part will be same toh kuchh miss nahi hoga..

And is base ke sath i have a brilliant idea...i know you all will love the idea...

So please if you all say toh main leap mein flashback ke sath story continue karoon gi...

Please say yes...you all will just love it...you know why???

Because it will have dark parts , sweet parts and manaofy parts...

Sab sath mein a jumbo combo what say...

Please please say yes leap dikhao...

Okhay..thanks

Bye..!!!

Love you all loads...

Adya..

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mairaallauddin

@mairaallauddin

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Nice update

Poor nandini but manik knew that she will come because she needs the contract

I don't know what to say about the leap

But loved the update

Update the next part soon

Edited by mairaallauddin - 9 years ago

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Geet *wink*

@dreamy_doll15

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#57

I think leap will be really very very interesting. . so u can continue wid leap flashback ... it will be much interesting ... I m ok wid it.. baki itss ur choice.. story is urs... n off course decision will be urs.. ... waiting for next update. ..

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Jyoti

@bhagupur

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#58

OK dear you should go with leap..

I think that way we can see her

Present day conditions and in

Flash back her past...

This is a very good idea. ..

Update soon now can't wait. ..

Thanks.

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Mehaklovely

@Mehaklovely

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Waiting for next part

MUJHE TERI JAROORAT HAI (MANAN DARK SS)
TUM HI HO (MANAN FF]

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Tishyy

@Tishyy

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#60

Interesting and different plot...
Read the parts at one go ...
It will be exciting to see how tables will be turned and they will fall in love ... Or will they ??
Kudos to u gal ... Do let me know when u update next ...Im not able to send pm as it bounces back always
p.s. Idea of Leap looks good ...

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