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Adya05 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#81
PROMO:

Mu- but nandini tum ne hame yeh nahin bataya ki tum achanak aise chali kyun gayi..

N- guys woh main tum sabko nahin bata sakti...

A- but kyun... And see nandini jo bhi hua tum uski wajah se hurt ho but manik realise kar chuka hai... Please usse ek chance de do..

N- haan alya ek chance de doo... Right... Ki woh mujhe phir se use kar sake and jab man bhar jaye toh chor de...

Nandini was going to continue when Karan came and said...

K- Nandu...ahh...woh.. I mean NM... Janvi is up and is crying...

N- okay i am coming tum uske pass jao..

C- yeh janvi kaun hai nandini..

N- non of your concern.. Aur ab tum logon ka ho chuka ho to please leave... I have better things to do...!!

CS OF KARAN

Nandini's PA cum best friend... Knows about nandini past and supports her..
Don't want to feel sypathetic towards her and says that if she have him and janvi she don't need any one else..

SO GUYS ABHI SIRF PROMO KYUN KI I AM NOT SO HAPPY BY THE RESPONSE OF THE CHAPTER..
I THINK CHAPTER WAS NOT UP TO THE MARK SO I NEED SOME TIME FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER...

TAB TAK THINK WHO IS JANVI?? AND NANDINI KI KYA LAGTI HAI???

LOADS OF LEAVE

ADYA..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82
Dear Adya...
Promo is awesome. .and
Full of mystery.
Janvi is definitely her...
You are the master of this awesome story
So you fill in the blank. .😛 I will wait for updates
But don't take too long. ..
Eagerly waiting. ..😛.
And please make this update long. ...
Thanks for sharing the promo.
Keep smiling.
Stay blessed .













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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
Super osm promo
Ab smj main aya why nandini left manik because she got pregnant with manik child n janvi is manan daugher i think...
Plz... post the part soon i m eagerly waiting for it...

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MUJHE TERI ZAROORAT HAI (MANAN DARK SS)
TUM HI HO (MANAN FF)


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Posted: 9 years ago
#84
Fab promo...
Plz yar updt soon na...
Hv been waitng fr lng fr dis updt...
M sure janvi is manik n nandini's daughter... n manim dosnt evn kno about it..msyb nandu came away bcz c ws pregnant n ws afraid whethr manik wl accept d child or nt
Plz yar...ir story is fab...plz uplot soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
Nice promo
And I think janvi is manan daughter
Plz update the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
Promo is fabulous
janvi is their daughter!!!(maybe) Wow!
Amazin'
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: Adya05

PROMO:


Mu- but nandini tum ne hame yeh nahin bataya ki tum achanak aise chali kyun gayi..

N- guys woh main tum sabko nahin bata sakti...

A- but kyun... And see nandini jo bhi hua tum uski wajah se hurt ho but manik realise kar chuka hai... Please usse ek chance de do..

N- haan alya ek chance de doo... Right... Ki woh mujhe phir se use kar sake and jab man bhar jaye toh chor de...

Nandini was going to continue when Karan came and said...

K- Nandu...ahh...woh.. I mean NM... Janvi is up and is crying...

N- okay i am coming tum uske pass jao..

C- yeh janvi kaun hai nandini..

N- non of your concern.. Aur ab tum logon ka ho chuka ho to please leave... I have better things to do...!!

CS OF KARAN

Nandini's PA cum best friend... Knows about nandini past and supports her..
Don't want to feel sypathetic towards her and says that if she have him and janvi she don't need any one else..

SO GUYS ABHI SIRF PROMO KYUN KI I AM NOT SO HAPPY BY THE RESPONSE OF THE CHAPTER..
I THINK CHAPTER WAS NOT UP TO THE MARK SO I NEED SOME TIME FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER...

TAB TAK THINK WHO IS JANVI?? AND NANDINI KI KYA LAGTI HAI???

LOADS OF LEAVE

ADYA..

i'm sure, that Janvi is her daughter
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
Awesome promo
Seriusly dear aapki story bht achi hai
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89
HEHE SAB NE GUESS KAR LEYA..
THEEK HAI CHALO KOI BAAT NAHIN...

CHAPTER-3

FLASHBACK ( 5 years back )

NANDINI'S POV

Although i was really afraid after yesterday night's event still i gathered courage and knocked the door of his cabin... Yes knocked the door of MR. MANIK MALHOTRA'S cabin...

M- come in..

He gave me the permission to come in and when ientered i saw that he wasn't alone. Fab 4 were also there and sighed a relief..

I saw that everyone was staring at me and PITY with capital letters was written on their faces. Except him...

Ahh that guy... I could ciearly see Lust in those intense eyes... A desire to be physical with me again... And that stupid smirk..
It worked as a fuel to my anger..
If it would be in my hands , he would be lying on a bed , in a luxurious room of the best hospital in the city or maybe India... With fractured hands and legs...
Such a cheap he is..!!

I came out of my thoughts when Mukti said...

Mu- hey miss your are here to sign a contract so please..

A- yeah you are right mukti... Aur waise bhi we have better things to do..

Althought they used bitter words but their expressions said something else i felt that were wanted me to sign the contract and leave as soon as possible..

M- arey alya itni bhi kya jaldi hai let her make her self comfortable abhi toh aayi hai..

Ohh god i will surely kill him one day...

N- no thanks mere pass time nahin hai...

M- oh really then what are you waiting for sign the bloody contract and leave..

Ohh god he really scared the sh*t out of me...

N- yeah fine..

And i took the contract...

I said...
The contract is a term of two years in which two albums will be launched.
I have to sing and the lyrics and music will be made by the expert team of the SONY LABELS..
First album will be launched two months later and the seacond album will be launched next year...

Reading the whole contract i signed it and left his cabin but little did i know that he was following me and then suddenly someone pulled me in the same store room as yesterday...

I was going to scream but the man covered my mouth and i was so sure of it to be him...

M- so trying to escape huh??
But darlin' don't you know ki Manik Malhotra ke hatoon se koyi inti jaldi nahin bachh sakta...

Ohh god this man sucks but ab isse kyan chahiye..
After a few minutes he uncovered my mouth...

He started descending his lips towards mine and i knew what was coming but still i pushed him and tried to free myself...

He then held my hands at my back..

M- tch tch tch.. Try bhi kyun karti ho jab pata hai ki koi fayda nahin hai...

And slammed his lips over mine...
He was so harsh that he literally sucked the blood out of my lips...
But did i tell you all that he disgust me so much...

As soon as he felt my lips i freed myself and left from there crying over my fate...

FLASHBACK ENDS...

N- see this is your friend and tum log chahte ho ki main usse ek chance doon...
In your dreams...

She said coldly and everyone was having tears hearing about her struggle...

Mu- but nandini tum ne hame yeh nahin bataya ki tum achanak aise chali kyun gayi..

N- guys woh main tum sabko nahin bata sakti...

A- but kyun... And see nandini jo bhi hua tum uski wajah se hurt ho but manik realise kar chuka hai... Please usse ek chance de do..

N- haan alya ek chance de doo... Right... Ki woh mujhe phir se use kar sake and jab man bhar jaye toh chor de...

Nandini was going to continue when Karan came and said...

K- Nandu...ahh...woh.. I mean NM... Janvi is up and is crying...

N- okay i am coming tum uske pass jao..

C- yeh janvi kaun hai nandini..

N- non of your concern.. Aur ab tum logon ka ho chuka ho to please leave... I have better things to do...!!

Saying this nandini left from there and went to the room where janvi was...

N- arre mera baby ro kyun raha...

J- mumma woh...app kahan the... Aap jante ho jab main uthi aap nahin the to main darr gayi thi...

N- baby pehle aap rona band karo mumma aa gayi na...
Accha baby chalo aab hame ghar jana hai..

J- theek hai..

Janvi was still weeping..

They came out from the room and were going towards their car when nandini saw that Fab4 were still there..

N- arre tum sab abhi bhi yahin ho..

D- nandini yeh kaun hai..

N- fine tum log aise nahin mano ge na then theek hai...
She is JANVI MURTHY MY DAUGHTER , now if you all are done then leave..

Fab 4 stood there shocked there. They dodn't knew what to do...

And nandini with janvi left for her home...



PLEASE READ EVERYONE

So here it is guys..
I know chota hai but main sari mystries ek sath nahin khol sakti..
Maybe next main nandini ki mumbai chodne ka reason de doon..
And i know aap log manik ka wait kar rahe ho so itna toh promise karti hoon ki next main atleast manik aajayega...
Aur main atleast jinko PM bhejti hoon unse comment bhi expect karti hoon..
Aur kuchh SILENT READERS bi hai i am sure...
So please yaar kadar karo hamari.. I mean main aur baki witers kyunki hame yahan koi job nahin kar rahe hain...
The thing you all should get is...

COMMENT KARO CHAPTER MILEGA , OR THE STORY ENDS SO PLEASE IF YOU ALL SILENT READERS CAN SPARE A PRECIOUS MINUTE OR SO OF YOURS AFTER READING THE STORY TO WRITE A COMMENT THEN I WILL BE GREATFUL...

Agar kisi ko bura lage toh sorry but you all also understand and waise bhi mera mood achha nahin aur maine update bhi sirf unke liye kiya hai jo comment likhte hai and are really desperate to read further..

LOADS OF LOVE

ADYA..


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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
itsss nice..

read wanna more...

let's see now. .



I luv it..

itsss awesome. ...
I really like it ...itsss soo nice to read...


keep updating like this. ..

update soon. ...
waiting
waiting for next update eagerly impatiently. ...

thanks for this update..

Thanks for pm too...
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