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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART-3
A each day is not same...phases of life even do not remain the same always...

It was a new morning...nd as we know we have to fight though the bad days in order to get the best ones but for MR. Malhotra it was exception...it seemed that he did not want this new day or some new beginning...he was in his deep slumber in his bar..bottles were shattered around him...his not so sweet slumber was broken by the butler's voice..
SERVANT: sir...sir...
MANIK:[He was in no mood to get up so in his sleepy voice only ] just get the hell out of here...just leave
SERVANT:[poor soul was already afraid becse he very well knew the consequences of disturbing his impulsive and arrogant master][STAMMERING]sir please wake up...dhruv sir ne apko batane ke liya bola tha ki aapki subhai meeting hai...sir ..sir aap sunn rahe ho..sir..??
MANIK:now this was it for manik...he furiously got up and was going to ogle up the poor fellow when his phone buzzed and he just moved ourt of his bar...

MANIK:han bol cabir..??
CABIR:kya bhai kal hi shadi hui ar tu mujhe bhul gya...i know yesterday was ur first night but asi bhi kya ki tu dosti bhul gya..
MANIK:cabir tu yeh bakwas krnbe ke liye phn kia h to phn rakh...
CABIR:are wife aa gayi to tu to dosti bhul gya..chal chor maine to yeh batane ke liye phn kia ki main kal wapas aa raha hunn...
MANIK:hannn okk par..
CABIR;r hann meri behan ko zada pareshan maat krna ...wase bhi wo itni delicate si h..i hope tune kal raat apna monster side dikhaya na ho..
MANIK:SHUT UP CABIR..phn rakh
CABIR:okkk okk bye...c u

now manik was hell frustrated...he just went inside his room not wanting to see his soo called mom...he found the room empty ...he thought nandini might be in his room but she was not there..he did nt even bother to look for her..
he went to freshen up..when he came back he saw that coffee was placed on the side table and his clothes ,mobile,wallety everything was arranged...just then nandini entered with breakfast..
NANDINI:{She just back hugged manik]Gud mrning patidev...coffee,breakfast sab ready h ..jaldi se taiyar ho jao..aj sath mein office jaenge..
MANIK:[manik was very much suprised...he thought that nandini must be crrying but to his dismay she was pretty happy..there was a glow in her face..it seemed that nothing happened]

manik just pinned nandini to a nearby wall..and held her wrist tightly to the wall so that she cannot move..
MANIK;just listen very carefully..main tumhare iss stupid plan main trap hone wala..tumhe asa lagta hai na that tumhare is over sweet behaviour ki wajeh se phirse tumhare pyaar main par jaunga toh u r highly mistaken...i know all ur tricks...
NANDINI:i know tat u know me very well ...akir tum mujhse itna pyaar krte ho to tum nhi jano ge to kaun janega...and with tat she ran away giving a peck on manik's lips..
manik was surprised ..he thought that he had broken her..but he was mistaken...manik just hell irritated ..he thought that her pain would give him satisfaction but here toh he was only getting irritated...watever he was doing it was not at all affecting her...
manik got ready and was leaving for office when nandini came..
NANDINI:are tum akele kaha chale..aj hum saath mein jane wale the na..subhai toh bola tha..bhul gaye na Mr monkey mahlotra..r tum to apna laptop bhi bhul gaye ho..[she pulls his cheeks]
MANIK;tum yeh jo bhi kr rahi ho na sb bank karo..ye sb krne se kch nhi hoga...r tum mere sat kahi nhi ja rahio ho...nd one more thing stop touching my things ..r yeh laptop to bilkul bhi nahi
saying this he was going out when suddenly andini wispered in his ears
NANDINI:''kiu tum phirse to wasi wali movies dkh rahe the kya??''
manik just shook his head in frustration and left...but then a smile crept on his lips..
FLASHBACK
MANIK WAS IN HIS BATHJROOM WHEN NANDINI ENTERED IN HIS ROOM
NANDINI:sir aap phirse bhul gaye ki aj subhai meeting hai..maine apko kal yaad bhi dilaya tha..aap na sir..
MANIK:[SHOUTING FROM THE BATHROOM]offo nandini..abhi bhi bht time h..tum mujhe thik se nahane toh do..
NANDINI:sir aap rahne do..main aapke laptop se presentation leke jja rahi hoon..aap ready hoke office aaiye tab tk main meeting ki saari prepration kr lungi..
MANIK;YA OK[but suddenly he remembers something nd he quickly cover his lover portion of the body with a towel nd comes out of the bathroom]nandini..STOP...
NANDINI:CHIII...ewww...sir aap yueh sb dkhte hoo...eww sir..she was hell embarrassed
MANIK:NANDINI DKHO ...
NANDINI;sir aap yeh sb dkh sakte ho maine kabhi bhi nhio socha tha..chiii sir
MANIK:[He thought of having some fun with her]chiii..chii kiu nandini..??hum bhi to yeh sab krenge...kiu tumhe nhi krna..??
NANDINI:krna ..??kya krna..??main main kiu krungi..??
manik, was talking small steps towards her and she was going backward when nandini collided with the bed and both manik and nandini fell on the bed with manik on top of nandini
MANIK:so hum kaha the..??hann yaa..so bolo nandini aab to mauka bhi h ar setting bhi lets do it...
and with that manik slowly started to caress nandini's face and began to kiss her cheeks..nandini was unable to control herself..
NANDINI:sir humein office jana h...sir ..
MANIK:nandini u want to say that we will do this in office..??
NANDINI:sir please..sir...
manik was busy in exploring her face...he now went to the crook of her neck and gave a open mouth kiss...nd that was it for nandini..she just completely lost all control over hers and tightly clutched manik's hairs...manik was ging to claim her lips when suddenly the phone started ringing..

i hope u guys like it...please ignore the mistakes and please tell me how was it..
loads of love

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Posted: 9 years ago
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read ur story just now
superb plot gal
love it
pm me nxt chapter
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I love the plot of your story! Please please for God's sake bestow us with your regular updates. Coz i know you took so long to update this chapter. Looking forward to it! :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting story..read all the chapters..looking forward to read more please continue soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update...
enjoyed it pretty well...
nandu's determination is very commendable...
manik and his gussa can never be replaced...
lived their cute little flashback...glad nandu is going her marriage a chance...manik smiling while leaving for work was good to see...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update
when manik will know that nandini is innocent?😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Wow...u r an amazing writer... U portray all the emotions in a very original way...I totally love ur story...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nyc update & update next part soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
PART-4
MANIK POV; no manik u cant get weak..you need to take ur revenge..tum phirse weak nhi par sakte...u cant afford to fall for thar girl again..

manik was going to start his car when nandini came and sat in the passengers seat

NANDINI; are itni bhi kya jaldi haimere bina ja rahe ho

MANIK; whats ur problem..??maine kaha tha na i m not going to take u ...just get out of my car

NANDINI: ARE ASE KASE..??pehle toh kahi bhi kabhi bhi sabke samne kch bhi kr dete the r ab jb main legelly wedded wife bann gyi hunn toh sharma rahe ho...so cute...accha accha chalo late ho raha h..

manik just ignored her constant blabbering and ignited his car and drove off
manik was driving for almost an hour but suddenly he halted on a deserted road..

NANDINI: manik yeh konsa road h..??yeh toh office wala way hai hi nhi..

MANIK: OUT...OUT FROM MY CAR RIGHT NOW

NANDINI;are kya bol rahe ho...main yaha se wapas kase jaongi...yaha toh kuch bhi nhi milega...

MANIK: yeh sab mere saat ane se pehle sochna tha na..abhi yaha tum kase wapas aongi is not my pain..now dnt chem my head nd get out...just get lost

nandini had no other option..she just got off and manik drove off

NANDINI: WHY WHY..??? why ayiappa...??sirf main hi kiu..??sare hard tasks kya sirf aap mere liye hi esign krte ho..??
she was crying and complaining to her ayiappa when almost after 20 mins a car came and stopped beside her

AMAN:nandini mam..?? aap yaha kya kar rahi ho..??

NANDINI:aman..??tum yaha..??

AMAN; haan wo actually mujhe kuch kaam tha yaha pe isliye...aap office ja rahi ho na ..chalye main aapko chor deta hunn

NANDINI: ya ..okk..thanks

MANIK'S CABIN

MANIK POV;WHY WHY WHY..???WHY cant i get over her...??after what she did i should be making her life hell but here i m just...

AMAN; sir..maine mam ko office paucha dia h...wo bilkul thik hai...

MANIK:tumnein use kuch bataya toh nhi mere bare mein..

AMAN:NO sir maine asa pretend kia ki sb ek coincidence tha...

MANIK:YA OKK TUM JAO..ND MAKE SURE USE KUCH PATA NA CHALE

AMAN: OKK sir

the whole day passed lie that only..manik was trying to trouble her with tons of work but nandini was unaffected..she behaved normally as if nothing happened which was just adding fuel to manik's anger

MALHOTRA MANSION[NIGHT]

Everyone was sitting on the dining table..the butler was serving them the dinner

MANIK:MAINE JO SPECIALLY NANDINI MAM KE LIYE BANWAYA H USE LEKE AAO...

SERVANT;jee sir..
the servant brought a bowl of tomato soup and served nandini

NYONIKA: MAnik tum pagal ho gye ho...?? tumhe pata hai na nandini ko allergy h tomato se...tumhe pta hai na tomato se kya halat ho jati hai uski..

MANIK:nyonika u dnt need to wrry abut her..mmain uska husband hunn na..r nandini tum nhi khaogi yeh soup..??maine itne pyaar se tumhare liye specially banaya hai..

NYONIKA: nandini tumhe yeh khane ki koi zaroorat nhi..main tumhare liye kuch aur bana deti hunn

NANDINI:no mom..manik ne mere liye banwaya hai na to main yeh zaroor khaongi


nandini started to dring the soup...she was coughing..tears were constantly flowing from her eyes..she was coughing vigorously..manik wanted to stop her but his ego was coming in between his love..he just stood up and left the place

nandini after taking the medicine came back to her room...she was still not okk..her skin was red due to rashes...she was weak..she was going to sleep when she saw that manik was not in the room..she heard some coughing sound coming from the balcong..she went there and what she saw left her shock

NANDINI: manik tum pagal ho gye ho..
she just snatched the bottle from his hand and threw it
NANDINI; manik tum vinegar pee rhe ho..??tumhe uske sideeffects pta bhi hai..u could die..manik tum sunn rahe ho..??manik listen to me..
manik was coughing andhis eyes were red..nandini started to cry...she was not able to bear manik's pain

NANDINI:[crying]jab tum mujhe pain main nhi dekh sakte to pain dete kiu ho..??kiu kar rahe ho tum yeh sb...why are u doing this to us..??please manik stop all this...please i beg u..manik please...
she just took manik in a bone crushing hug...it seemed that they both are trying to reduce each others pain...no one was wiling to leave...

pheww...finally done..ekdum lamba wala update ...please share ur views..nd keep loking and commenting
loads of love
moitrisha




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Posted: 9 years ago
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😳 I just Luv ur FF a lottt...ur updates r realy sooo awesome...plzzz plllzzz plzzz Add More n More n More N more Manan scenes plzzz try to update Next Chaps soon plzzz 😃 n ye Chap v chotusa hi hai but its Fabulous Fantastic superb awesome sooo sooo goood update plzzz plzzz plzzz Update Update Update next chap soon plzzz and add More n More More MaNan scenes n some FlashBacks v plzzz
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