MANAN FF-HATE TO HATE YOU[part 5pg 8] - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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nyc update...
update d nxt part soon...
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Awesome update
Loved it
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awesome update...
loved it so much...
its so sad to see manik angry like this...
no matter how much pain manik wants to give nandu...he is also receiving the same pain...its like they are 2 bodies but 1 soul...what ever happens to one happens to the other as well...
can't wait to see what happens next...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Nice update..beautifully penned please continue soon :)
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Awesome!
Manik loves her unconditionally but doesn't understand
he can't bear her pain then why he's doing this!
Update soon
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😭 plzzz
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UPDATE With Lots of MANAN Scenes plzzz UPDATE SOooN...plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice
Update soon...N pls pm me when you ll update next chapter...😊
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i just discovered ur ff
its really amazing n superb
the concept n track is awesome
i am vry happy n excited to read ur ff
its really superb
Nice part continue soon want to read more
I JUST LOVE HATE STORIES
Awesome the story is going very interestingly.
continue soon
im waiting for ur update vry impatiently
lots of love ❤️
n congo for this superb, amzing n awesome concept
hats off to u for this idea👍🏼
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Super update amazing story.plz update soon
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part-5

manik and nandini were hugging each other passionately...for them it seems that the world does not exist..it seemed they were carving for each other...but after a while manik got back his senses nd he back off...nd began to leave
NANDINI: manik plz dnt go...I need a break..
Manik pov:there was so much pain in her eyes...it was making me weak..her inocence, her eyes, her purity it seemed that they all r trying to tell me how much she loves me...she was healing my pain
MANIK:hmmm

manik and nandini were sitting on the tereace...they were gazing the stars...none of them were speaking it seemed that the silence of the night were speaking on behalf of them...
NAMDINI:manik kya hum humesa asa nhi rhh skte???? kya hmare bich sab thk nhi ho skta? ???
manik sb kch kitna beautiful tha phle..everything was so perfect..
manik was not speaking a single word...nandini knew that it would take time but she would be able to change him once again but this time she just need to be stronger than before
MANIK; nandini asa kiu hota h ki jisse hum sbse zada pyaar krte h wahi humein sbse zada Hurt krte h???
nandini had no answers to his questions...she som3what knew that she was only responsible for this..she herself need to find the answers of this questions. ..for the time being she chose to remain silent in order to avoid more complications
MANIK:answer nhi h na tumhare pas???? hga bhi kase tm to meri so called mom jasi hi ho...evwrything is just an opportunity for u
NANDINI:abhi mujhe tumhe koi justification nhi dena..I just want to live this moment with u...nd about love its odd that how one thing could ee the cause of so many contrary feeling..love is never rational...the pain of love never breaks us it just makes us more stronger nd help us to fight for it
MANIK:it just happens in fairytales
Nandini:manik love is hard to find..harder to keep nd hardest to forget
manik and nandini they were just lost into each other...the spark between them was glowing again...manik was melting...his love was overpowering his hatred
slowly manik began to caress her cheeks...nandini was glowing like the stars. ..his star
maniks slowly staeted to caress nandini face...manik bend down and placed a kiss on nandini's lips...the kiss was meant to be short but the moment their lips meet the world was on fire..he pulled nandini closer to him and started kissing her...the kiss was not passionate...the kiss symbolized his pain of love...nandini was bold but she was taken aback with the sudden intimacy...by the yime manik pulled away both were breathless. ..they both knew that if they talk after this moment it would again create problems...nandini just laid down in manik's arms and drove off to sleep...manik was just merimizing the angelic face in front of him when he saw fireflies were gkowing everywhere...nd the stars were shinimg brightly..he remembered nandini's words" manik u knw when there is true love fireflies, they glow"...

there was one pair of eyes which were moist on seeing her life sleeping so peacefully...nyonika was relieved that the equations between her children are changing...
nyonika's pov:I promise I wont let any misunderstandings come between u both...I will solve all complications between them...I ll nt let evil eyes fall in u...
she prayed to god to keep them like thos forever...humesha...


hiii guys...srry for late update .., I was a little busy...I tried my level best to write well..hope u guys like it...plz do like and comment and tell me how it was...
loads of love
moitrisha

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